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Pls I need correction(s) on my application letter
Thanks!
Note: I skipped the add to summarize the letter.
APPLICATION FOR A CASUAL WOKER POST
I am writing to express my interest as a casual worker under your amiable management in ABC (nt the real name).
As a self disciplined Engineer with extensive knowledge both in Engineering (Electrical and Electronics) and cooperate organization management, I wish to apply as a casual worker in the above organization.
There is no doubt that I can cope Under minimal supervision at any department where there is vacancy. And the attached documents are my cv and credential which states my extensive skills.
I look forward to hearing from you for further discussion on how I can truly contribute to the organization.
Thanks

9niceguy:
Pls I need correction(s) on my application letter
Thanks!
Note: I skipped the add to summarize the letter.
APPLICATION FOR A CASUAL WOKER POST
I am writing to express my interest as a casual worker under your amiable management in ABC (nt the real name).
As a self disciplined Engineer with extensive knowledge both in Engineering (Electrical and Electronics) and cooperate organization management, I wish to apply as a casual worker in the above organization.
There is no doubt that I can cope Under minimal supervision at any department where there is vacancy. And the attached documents are my cv and credential which states my extensive skills.
I look forward to hearing from you for further discussion on how I can truly contribute to the organization.
Thanks

Sorry to say but the application is quite weak. Well! maybe it would fly for the post of casual worker. You need a whole lotta tutoring tho. Besides why would an elect elect graduate be applying for post of casual worker what can i say Hustle is real!! anyway here is your edited letter below.
Note i dont dig the whole letter at all, its not even something i should expect from a graduate. all thesame just decided to edit the one u wrote for you to use.


Pls I need correction(s) on my application letter
Thanks!
Note: I skipped the add to summarize the letter.
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF CASUAL WORKER
I am writing to express my interest in the post of casual worker in your organization.
I am a self disciplined Engineer with extensive knowledge both in Engineering (Electrical and Electronics) and cooperate management.
I can work with minimal supervision at any department within your organization.
Attached documents are my cv and credentials which states my extensive skills.
I look forward to hearing from you for further discussion on how I can truly contribute to your organization.
Thanks.

upload111:
Sorry to say but the application is quite weak. Well! maybe it would fly for the post of casual worker. You need a whole lotta tutoring tho. Besides why would an elect elect graduate be applying for post of casual worker what can i say Hustle is real!! anyway here is your edited letter below.
Note i dont dig the whole letter at all, its not even something i should expect from a graduate. all thesame just decided to edit the one u wrote for you to use.


Pls I need correction(s) on my application letter
Thanks!
Note: I skipped the add to summarize the letter.
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF CASUAL WORKER
I am writing to express my interest in the post of casual worker in your organization.
I am a self disciplined Engineer with extensive knowledge both in Engineering (Electrical and Electronics) and cooperate management.
I can work with minimal supervision at any department within your organization.
Attached documents are my cv and credentials which states my extensive skills.
I look forward to hearing from you for further discussion on how I can truly contribute to your organization.
Thanks.

Thanks tho!
Actually I was directing the letter to the MD. Its quite visible that the write up is weak and that was why I pasted it here for corrections. Thanks once again

Nice one@ upload

vivaobi:
Nice one@ upload

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