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repogirl:
Lemme be frank

Awesomely dope instrumentals

Awesomely bad diction and vocal weakness.... Train your voice, even rappers train their voice.

You also need to perfect your style, your lyrics seem average but your style needs work along with your voice. When next you are in the studio, think Awesome Swag like kendrick Lamar, Kanye west or lil Wayne or even MI and Ice Prince and phyno..

Work on your vocals and then increase your Swag level in your mind and you will do very well.

Not a bad effort at all unlike one useless 'search your diva' I wasted MB to download one time like that.

Threedots:
its not d kind of rap style i like,,, but i'm happy i did not waste my 2.3mb. i'll send to my brother, he likes this type. Anyway, remember this comment wen u become a superstar! and where u based!

Flairoqy:
Hard ish! You ain't swerved nig-ga just grow your fan base.

Abugab:
Strong rap beat. Love the beat
Lyrics good but need to be further firmed up with strong hood slangs. Something for the street.
Voice is good but could be stronger (my opinion though) but it is uniquely you and your identity.

In all, good rap music and uniquely different.
More, more, more from u

Jacko1:
Stil forming v fo vendetta u neva one blow mr anonynous

kwis:
Omo Alahaji . I kinda like this. Not there yet, but def on track.

[size=13pt]The beat is dope
the lyrics is fair.
I dont like the hook
Your voice texture is dope, rapper dope. but you must wor on your diction (if u will rap in english), just keep reforming your skills, listen to a lot of kendrick lamar, jcole, joey badass, learn and ud be up up up.
the back up guy definitely is a good hypeman keep him around for ur shows.

For and underground rap song/upcoming, id score you 7/10.
for a pro in the Nigerian mainstream, maybe 3-4/10

Not to worry there is still room for improvement, waay better than some songs i've heard on this forum.

Congrats[/size]

toksbisola:
@Op: first of all well-done for your effort. If this is your first effort in music then you’ve done well but your singing style needs a bit of improvement. Both of you singing were not synchronizing your voices properly and went off-tune. If I were to rate you on a scale of 1 to 10; I’ll rate you as a 7.

My critical points for you are below;

1) It seems that there was too much noise than required at the background for the lyrics;

2) The co-ordination between the 2 voices wasn't too good and definitely needs improvement;

3) You need your lyrics to flow with the content of the music; and

4) At a point, both of you lost pitch on your voice and l couldn’t make head or tail as to where the lyrics was heading.

Remember, there are so many people out there who release a music album on a daily basis; but only a very minute few that'll make it big and I would very much like you to be among that minute few and make it big. Overall, the lyrics itself ain’t that bad; it’s just that you need to train your voice and coordinate it properly with the style your using.

It'll be to your advantage if you don’t take offence when people critique your music/lyrics; rather use their critical analysis to build yourself up and get better for the next track you’ll release. I’m looking forward to hearing your next track and hopefully you would have done some amendments as others have suggested to you.

My plus point for you would be;

The unique style you have picked for yourself is good as your type of mix is not too common; hence make it into a grand style for yourself and capitalize on making it into a niche as against following what already exist.I

@icedbeatz is into music I guess; and he’ll also be able to give you some tips you can use to develop your music career.

@Airforce1; are you still on your music as I was looking forward to hearing about your next music album; are you working on it? Don’t give up on your passion.

I rest my case

Ifyikillz:
Thanks Abugab, everything you said is noted.. Better tunes still to come after BlackSheep.
Thanks again

Vig86:
My Opinion:
You worked with great beat but your voice is just too tired. I don't want to compare you with already established rappers but you really need energy in your voice. I guess this is your first. You are doing really great considering your stage in the music industry.

Upcoming rapper of the year award goes to.....



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Hashtag!!! Blacksheep

Abugab:
Welcome.
Have the song played since yesterday severally and have even made it a ring tone.
There is always need to encourage our own as I am proudly Naija.
Keep the songs coming......

franciskaine:
Stupid song, useless rap, pure nonsense(ironical).... See you at the top bro, God bless ur hustle, beautiful piece. Make I use am do my ringtone sharpally! #blacksheep

vizboy:
Kindly Send Us The Lyrics To Your Song.
Info[@]NaijaMusicLyrics.com

Airforce1:
Maybe its because you've not been active on nairaland


Two of my songs are already on MTN plus. Go register to download.

Photo and Link below


http://musicplus.mtnonline.com/touch/#music-song-detail?musicCode=601035000000301700&searchResultClick=Such

Ifyikillz:
No, have you Downloaded the song

otijah:
How far hav downloaded itn its a nice song. Oo, pls how do I upload my song on dis social network, esp (naijaloaded) thanks?

Ifyikillz:
These sites are free
Mydotnotjustokdotcom
Soundclouddotcom.

Ifyikillz:
Yesterday I posted about my song dropping today, here it is

Its here People!! Black Sheep By Hashtag

https://my.notjustok.com/track/download/id/52134

promise you won't regret

Cc lalasticlala, Airforce1, Abumikey, ojoawo

AreTheyBitches:
NICE TRACK WHOS YOUR PRODUCER, I WILL LIKE TO WORK WITH HIM
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khenykhey:
Nice Song.. Dope beat.you killed it..There's still room for improvement.im a fan.

lifecoach1:
Wow!
What an AMAZING Video!!!

You guys must watch this!!!!! youtube.com/watch?v=uuNsYVqNHyw

noob03saibot:
Not bad, fair enough. But I feel u could v done more to the beat. Meanwhile check this dude's panda out.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LAkszRiqI8Q

KINGpharoah:
just listened to your new jam infatuation, in the process stumbled on this one.
bro honestly u good.

overflow1:
To be frank, you did a great work here. am working on my first ever song. l love this song. From a fan. Anticipate Ugomma(Wedding) by Ovaflow.

Michaeljnr225:
can someone fill me with insight on how much studio work costs