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| The New Entrant(freelance) by AustinStevens(op): 5:14pm On Mar 19, 2016 |
Feel free to criticize,point out errors,and make your corrections. Also your comments are very important thank you. Though it started funny. I was sitting in the visitors room when i heard the little,sweet but loud noise coming from the room very close to where i was. So i drew nearer but to my amazement i saw a man jump up and dance randomly. Immidiately the big but sacred door opened and from there emerged a man dressed in white holding a black and silver coloured "Y" shaped rope,with branches that have a 90 degree curve at its edge like the handle of a bucket and the tail a round ironed shape design at the end. Raising his face as he walked out of the door i could see two visible curves like the alphabet "C" around his cheeks which was reciprocated with a soft and warm smile from the man outside the door. Watching them closely as the man in white shock his hand and uttered a word "CONGRATULATIONS". Immidiately my heart skipped and it just dawned on me that i just got a new nephew. Wanting to exclaim when I felt a tap on my shoulder it was hard but tender so I turned and behold this............ To be continued. |
| Re: The New Entrant(freelance) by bishopkay: 5:22pm On Mar 19, 2016 |
following...do watch out for typos Bro...look at your "immediately"et al. But still I follow |
| Re: The New Entrant(freelance) by AustinStevens(op): 5:29pm On Mar 19, 2016 |
bishopkay:Noted sir! Tanx a lot. |
| Re: The New Entrant(freelance) by AustinStevens(op): 5:57pm On Mar 19, 2016 |
Please drop ur comments abeg ooo Bikonu oo |
| Re: The New Entrant(freelance) by Feyikemi12(f): 2:54pm On Mar 20, 2016 |
continue please |