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Not When You Die by amofe4love(m): 10:44pm On Apr 27, 2016
"...NOT WHEN U DIE, BUT WHILE U'RE LIVING..."
I will LOVE U while u live & SHOW it,
I will tell U hw much I LOVE U,
I will protect & care for U,
I will tell U ur strenght,
Looking for d best in U & bring it out,
I will cherish U while U live.

Why do I need to wait untill U sick or die,
To serve U or tell U & D world,
How much U meant to me, When
Ur lifeless body can't laugh back at my compliments,
Not even my loudest cries or sobbing,
I am committed to U while you live.

Why do we ignore kind gestures and LOVE?
Why do we feel shy & unreceptive to the good nature offers?
Why do we treat those that LOVE us as tho they don't?
Why do we treat people that love us as tho not loved?
Why do we tarry long 'till D graveside?
To say D kind-hearted words of LOVE.

Why do we seal our emotios against loved ones?
Waiting 'till lifeless before we open it for them,
When their own is sealed & can't be touched,
Why do we care in silence, hiding our feeling?
Why not making every moments with frieds counts & make life worthy of living for them?

A little "How 're U?", A little smile,
Makes U dear to my heart,
Tho you might not solve my problem all D time,
But a litte care that put smiles on me removes my phobia,
I am lucky to have U around me,
And will never be ashamed to EXPRESS
How much "I CARE AND LOVE U"

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Re: Not When You Die by llaykorn: 11:19am On Apr 29, 2016
amofe4love:
"...NOT WHEN U DIE, BUT WHILE U'RE LIVING..."
I will LOVE U while u live & SHOW it,
I will tell U hw much I LOVE U,
I will protect & care for U,
I will tell U ur strenght,
Looking for d best in U & bring it out,
I will cherish U while U live.

Why do I need to wait untill U sick or die,
To serve U or tell U & D world,
How much U meant to me, When
Ur lifeless body can't laugh back at my compliments,
Not even my loudest cries or sobbing,
I am committed to U while you live.

Why do we ignore kind gestures and LOVE?
Why do we feel shy & unreceptive to the good nature offers?
Why do we treat those that LOVE us as tho they don't?
Why do we treat people that love us as tho not loved?
Why do we tarry long 'till D graveside?
To say D kind-hearted words of LOVE.

Why do we seal our emotios against loved ones?
Waiting 'till lifeless before we open it for them,
When their own is sealed & can't be touched,
Why do we care in silence, hiding our feeling?
Why not making every moments with frieds counts & make life worthy of living for them?

A little "How 're U?", A little smile,
Makes U dear to my heart,
Tho you might not solve my problem all D time,
But a litte care that put smiles on me removes my phobia,
I am lucky to have U around me,
And will never be ashamed to EXPRESS
How much "I CARE AND LOVE U"

This is a very touching one. It's amazing how humans never remember to appreciate their loved ones until they leave. Thanks for sharing this.

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