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Ede only ordered a bottle of water and a really tall glass. The workers of the Eatery had been observant and busy, but they still couldn't notice Ede's piece of weaponry.

The shiny weapon was beneath her purse. She swallowed all of the water and continued watching for several minutes.

Soon, she was tired and ready to give up. She suddenly lifted the weapon. Once it was sighted, eyes grew wet, mouth mute.

And Ede wept as the weapon was facing her. The other side was facing a young man. As swift as the wind the bullets flew, killing a few, except Ede.

Wtf are u saying? I hope there's a continuation, to make sense of this sha...

Evil....

PhantomD:
Wtf are u saying? I hope there's a continuation, to make sense of this sha...

*Drum rolls* The End.

And how is this a suicide?

favouriteYSF:
And how is this a suicide?

First of all, criticise mildly. Second, it is suicide gone "wrong", so figure that out yourself.

RemenZack:
*Drum rolls* The End.

oya, make sense of ur write up.

PhantomD:
oya, make sense of ur write up.

It makes sense. People really don't get Flash Fiction too well.

RemenZack:
It makes sense. People really don't get Flash Fiction too well.

then educate me, cos I really don't get it.