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My Discovery Of Atlantis by Justiceenams(op): 7:56am On Oct 26, 2016
Caged inside the beauty of creation as I journey through the deep of the sea, Creatures of the sea waving their fins in Salutation of my Arrival , the Sharks Whales and others unknown, slowly I journey through enjoying the calm, beauty and silence that dwells inside the sea.

Crew member : “Captain, Captain”,
Captain : “Don’t you enjoy the silence, you better not be Allergic to Calmness”.
Crew member : A triangle I see sir, standing at the middle of the sea.
Captain : What would I do to you? It’s a crime sleeping on Duty but, you were dreaming on duty.
Crew member : Sir look.
Captain : It must have fallen from the hand of a kid on a Ship. To the standing triangle, let’s see why it’s not floating.
Crew member : Maybe it’s made of steel.
Captain : Then, we see why it’s not sinking.

Slowly it grew into a Pyramid, gradually I see a tower with its depth buried beneath my view, As we went deeper the crew Marvel at the discovery of a city inside the sea. The silence gave way as everyone expresses their opinion.

Crew member : Perhaps it is created by a Big Fish

We all burst into laughter

Crew member 2 : The mermaids, yes the mermaids created it for their guest
Captain: Yes, guest like you who intend drowning in the Sea someday, it better not be today.

We all laughed again, wandering through the city in silence as we all were dumb by the Beauty of our new discovery.

Crew member 3 : Atlantis, Atlantis yes, yes, This is the lost city of Atlantis in the story of Plato.

Yes, a few who have read the book agreed, others stared at themselves in ignorance. I have never seen a beauty like that before not in any city, not even Oghara when it was led by the great Ibori who beautified it with light, We wandered, finding the source of its beauty. Then it dawned on me that there’s no man in it, no one to disturb its peace, The floor sparkling like it was made of priceless stones. I doubt if it was half beautiful as this above the Sea.
Swept by Poseidon himself, a city built by the Gods for men, only to be stolen by the Gods themselves. Why? Why couldn’t they build one for themselves that they allowed their affection push them into breaking their own laws .

The Gods are not to be questioned I know but, they owe me an Explanation.
Re: My Discovery Of Atlantis by Eze2000(m): 8:41am On Oct 26, 2016
Justiceenams:
Caged inside the beauty of creation as I journey through the deep of the sea, Creatures of the sea

The Gods are not to be questioned I know but, they owe me an Explanation.
Kinda confusing which is why i give it only four-star rating.

Kudus to thee bro!

Will start writing my THRONES OF ATLANTIS next year.
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