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I wnt call dis a poem...just something inspired by true events or sld i say true feelings..:

* when I met u I had met you,
But didn't know I had met you
Cos I was focused on the mini skirt
That was beside you
So I'd stop by for lunch errytime it was her shift - and yours
It wasn't formal when i signed off as 'sincerely yours'
I remember that day clearly and here's d fun fact:
Sitting at my table trying to make eye contact
With ur friend..I had her no. and a message to send
But then she shifted and I saw you at the other end
U caught my attention like u prey'd on my mind
Appreciating God for ur beauty as I pray in my mind
I'd like to skip introductions to introductions if u don't mind
Cos I see u as my wife thru d eye in my mind..
I ain't just weaving a story this is not a fabrication
Dat day something touched me like I had sensitive calibration*

It can't be a poem.. Poets don't use 'cos' 'u' "errytine

Igbos:
It can't be a poem.. Poets don't use 'cos' 'u' "errytine

OK sir..but what's ur take on d content

souloho19:
OK sir..but what's ur take on d content

Just take your time and arrange it, correct spellings, creates a rhyming meter at end or middle, stanza, and believe me, it'll be lovely that you'll like it all over again.
I'm learning poetry too, and it's interesting!

nice content, although the message isn't really clarified .. the abbreviations are too much