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Re: Black Maria by Youngzubi(m): 5:03pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
swiz123: even the bible contains proverbs which is not real but relates to our everyday life,a story doesn't need to be real before it can be called a good story u can't relate with my story"good"but have it in mind that i have reason for writting that story,it might seem corrupt or whatever for now but I'm heading somewhere fiction or no fiction all requires great effort,after all real real life story is more easier to write because it's like a movie u already watch all u gat to do is recall(nostalgia) u said my work need to be criticized,but its not and i will tell u why i write in PIDGIN and it is always hard to point out errors in PIDGIN English,so u av seen the reason behind my fans quietness dont call them sycophants oya!!!!!!! oyibo dat one vex me die!!!,one love no insult brotherly,we'er only here to get better u dont need to insult or call people names when trying to point out ur point of view,i totally understand where u'er pointing at but always criticize with sense dont let it sound like insult here is what u can always do *point out the errors *creat suggestion for the writer *try to make him understand ur point of view *avoid hate speech like u stated above * then follow the thread and watch how the writer would fall into line.... no hate bro,i didnt write to creat enemy but to make people smile and get relieved of the days stress sex na food comes in two parts season 1 and 2 so relax bro we still have a long way to go my man i still need more of ur type! becos am just starting still working on other English stories jah bless!!! 6 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Black Maria by Nobody: 5:23pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
If you are voting for the most consistent writers, then youngzubi currently is. But, if you are voting for the best writer for the month August — which larrysun didn't update — then nobody should be voted cos they'all lack what it takes to be recognized as a writer. youngzubi?? first time am hearing the name.... please give me a link to his story. have you read souloh19 book(winner of last month award) and apoullx writer of marvel those writer are also good but... [/quote 2 Likes |
Re: Black Maria by Sensitivity1254: 6:07pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
Then go ahead and vote for him for the month of August. When he was a bit consistent, we voted for him and he won even though Soulho was more consistent than him. Now, you guys are advocating that we vote for someone that haven't updated for close to a month. Yes, he is talented. Larrysun the last man standing?? This is taken the joke too far. swiz123: 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria by Sensitivity1254: 6:14pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
Who are the sycophants?? You think that cos we don't do literary appreciation on his work that made us sycophants?? What a warped thinking. We did not critique is his work cos we can relate with his work. In fact I can relate his work to something that happened to lots of people that o know and heard of. No matter how poor a literary work is, as a student of literature, you have to relate it to real life. It's lack of depth and techniques of literature that makes not to be able to relate with it. A good literature student don't is not afraid of making "cyber enemies". Don't come here insulting peeps up and down in a bid to appear woke. swiz123: |
Re: Black Maria by WarriFirstBorn(m): 6:20pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
swiz123:'Those sycophants who read your stories'. Did the above actually from you, bro? My gosh! Just imagine! You just open your mouth and spew whatever deem fit for you? |
Re: Black Maria by swiz123(m): 7:21pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
Sensitivity1254: What did you relate to actually? That a policeman can command soldiers? What business does a soldier have in a police station? That soldiers would try to cut off your hand cos you slept with a policeman's wife? That big mama would trust a fraud whom was beaten by his husband's thugs.? That someone can actually pay 700 million for sex? Dude, if you can comfortably relate to all of these, then you're really weird. If, however, you can't, and chose not to criticize his work to make him work more on his outrageous fictitious narrations, then I don't see a reason why I shouldn't tag you a 'sycophant'. Go take a quick look at floxyflow, flow1759 and therock5555's humorous fictitious work, then compare and contrast. #peace 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Black Maria by Sensitivity1254: 7:47pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
For you not to know that anything can happen. A DPO can actually give orders to a soldier, and if you think that can't happen, then I have to ask you the part of the world you live in. 700m is an exaggeration reason it's fiction not real life story. You have to understand that people can pay anything for good sex. Big mama saw something in that fraud that her husband's thugs beat up. And if you think that peeps who runs illegitimate biz uses saints for the biz, I will have to ask u again the part of the world you live in. Your problem is that you are comparing him with others. You expect him to fill the shoes of others. If you want to critique his work, do so. Don't call those who choose not to names. That's the route men that lack in intelligence thread. swiz123: |
Re: Black Maria by Sensitivity1254: 7:50pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
Sude, the fact that you read his work and choose not to critique his it puts you in the same category of people that you called 'sycophants'. And the fact that you are here telling us that Larrysun is the last man standing shows that you are his sycophant and butlicker Dude, if you can comfortably relate to all of these, then you're really weird. If, however, you can't, and chose not to criticize his work to make him work more on his outrageous fictitious narrations, then I don't see a reason why I shouldn't tag you a 'sycophant'. Go take a quick look at floxyflow, flow1759 and therock5555's humorous fictitious work, then compare and contrast. #peace [/quote] |
Re: Black Maria by Youngzubi(m): 8:06pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
swiz123: well well well! your comment got me frowning but on a second glance it triggers my moral "smiles" flow1759 and therock5555,those two are great writers i must confess,most especially flow1759 the guy is something else thanks for pointing out those mistakes or whatever u literature students call it becos am in science department believe me assuming u always point out errors like those stated above after reading trust me i would have been better by now but u will just read and go without saying anything even u gat alot of reasons to say something(please drop ur comment) i would write at end of each update u will read and pass then come here to tell me how fictitious my story is,guy u swallow stone? as a young writer u need to be criticized in other to get better"so u know" but here u are,saying u dont want cyber enemies thats why u dont comment on my thread,guy nah free mb dey worry u,abeg tear dat level and enter ghost mode jare!! they can only tag u,non of dem will comma beat in ur house i love my fans like mad"sycophants ke!"we die here since u always see mistakes and errors please try and point dem out after reading or unfollow the thread to have peace of mind "no insult" stay clear brotherly but my fans are not sycophants please"note that" #ANOTHER MAN FOOD IS ANOTHER MAN POISON! 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Black Maria by swiz123(m): 8:21pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
Youngzubi: That's why I ended my last comment with "peace". BTW, I got involved in this argument cos of what someone said about larrysun. Normally, I didn't plan on commenting on your thread nor talk about your work. TBH, I read your story to while away time before going to bed and also to see how it will end. No hard feelings |
Re: Black Maria by Therock5555(m): 9:34pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
So una use mentions carry me come back this section after more than 5 years absentia. Una try.... *Kickstart my okada and drives back to sexuality section* 6 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Black Maria by EkopSparoAyara(m): 9:50pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
Please this is Larrysun's thread and not Youngzubi's own... Let's desist from derailing it... Like I said before, I spoke with Larrysun this afternoon and he told me he has been busy with a project... He assured me he will update as soon as he can.. I adviced him to come online and at least explain this to his readers... |
Re: Black Maria by Bobosneh: 10:41pm On Aug 05, 2018 |
hey hey hey everybody chilax just chilax this place is no gladiator arena so don't come here and start forming Spartacus and gannicus. you wanna fight? nigga gerara here 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria by Kaycee9242(m): 6:35am On Aug 06, 2018 |
U ppl shouldn't be talking of vote now, Larry need to assure his readers dt he is OK first by dropping a comment and pls dt swiz123 shud remember dt dis is anoda man's thread, always criticise a story on d right platform. U guys argument made me think dt an update was here 2 Likes |
Re: Black Maria by Akinwale14(m): 9:34am On Aug 06, 2018 |
Mah Watch Jare |
Re: Black Maria by Nobody: 10:57am On Aug 06, 2018 |
Therock5555:REPENT BROTHER 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria by Quinyoudee(f): 11:06am On Aug 06, 2018 |
I am waiting, no voting, no commenting, only observing, anywhere I need something to get bussy with. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Black Maria by ObaKlaz: 5:48pm On Aug 06, 2018 |
EkopSparoAyara:...Then, when he drops one scanty update ''as soon as he can'', he'd go into flight mode as usual, huh? Leave Youngzubi and the other guy to vent on this thread, pleeease! Matter of fact Youngzubi, you might as well use this thread for the other works you're working on (just don't become an inconsistent writer later on, else, we'll lease this thread to another writer!). 5 Likes |
Re: Black Maria by dankinalo: 5:51pm On Aug 06, 2018 |
let some pple mind dere busy, if u want to write ur own do it n leave d person writing is...why u didn't write this before but now u want to point out. go n point out apc n PDP problem so we who like to read this story can enjoy it with pride...my guy continue don't always respond to all message. 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(m): 9:01pm On Aug 06, 2018 |
Good evening, guys. How have you been? I have been very busy with freelance job. That is what has really been putting food on my table. Please don't blame me too much (covers face). This work (Black Maria: Book One) is 95% done. I will be dropping the updates very soon, for Let The Guns Speak is coming up immediately after. I don't want to keep you guys waiting like this, that is why I took my time to finish this one. This one is Action. Those who have read Kanu: The Journal of a Rogue may relate, but believe me, the actions in Kanu are not even close to Let The Guns Speak. But let's conclude Black Maria first. Thanks for your patience with me. I hate myself for being so inconsistent. Phew! It's been almost a month since I last updated. 19 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(m): 9:06pm On Aug 06, 2018 |
Youngzubi:Lol! I'm not old enough to be your father. I'm just learning the craft like you, brother. God bless you. |
Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(m): 9:12pm On Aug 06, 2018 |
EkopSparoAyara:Thanks for your call, boss. I'm sorry I didn't know you were the one at first. Thanks you so much. God bless you. 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria by Dackrapper(m): 10:30pm On Aug 06, 2018 |
LarrySun:OK Good luck, with or without update you're the best writer I know. 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Black Maria by Nobody: 11:05pm On Aug 06, 2018 |
EkopSparoAyara: ....that what am saying he need to work on his author and reader relationship. if my guy man want to update let him update. they are not beging shit to smell. 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria by Vecto(m): 12:11am On Aug 07, 2018 |
Cylovee: To me most of these writers still dey learn for where Larry dey 2 Likes |
Re: Black Maria by CalciumB3: 1:19am On Aug 07, 2018 |
So our Larry is back... Shey you and oyinprince plan am together ni? The guy never complete Tarasha 2 since last year... Good luck sha 2 Likes |
Re: Black Maria by Fazemood(m): 9:42am On Aug 07, 2018 |
swiz123: SOUNDS MATURE... Good comment\reply. But calling people Pshycophants is a 'NO NO' wipe that off |
Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(m): 2:57pm On Aug 07, 2018 |
COMPLETE BOOK NOW AVAILABLE FOR DOWNLOAD HERE: http://okadabooks.com/book/about/black_maria_book_one/20094 16 Likes |
Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(m): 2:58pm On Aug 07, 2018 |
ONE LAST CHAPTER TO GO AND BOOK ONE WILL BE DONE. |
Re: Black Maria by Celsony: 3:36pm On Aug 07, 2018 |
LarrySun: no hard feelings bro, welcome back from exile. thanks for the update |
Re: Black Maria by rukidanty: 3:59pm On Aug 07, 2018 |
LarrySun:welcome back |
Re: Black Maria by rukidanty: 4:00pm On Aug 07, 2018 |
LarrySun:welcome back,i had waited so much for your updates |
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