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Letter To Mama by poetictwenty(op):
I know the stars will fall at my feet someday.
The rain will oneday give way for sunshine.
Our drenched body's will someday dry up
When the future becomes today.


I can see the clouds gathering,
Hugging each other before it drops like rain-
A rain that will wash away the pains of yesteryears,
Before leaving us with a happy ending.


I won't forget you when I bid farewell to tomorrow.
For You're inscribed in each page of my heart.
You're like a rose planted in the garden of my life.
A rose that grew strong in a soil covered by weed of sorrow.



Countless times, I saw when you stood on you knees,-
While knocking on heavens gate for my sake.
Even when it seem the door was never opening.
But you won't just give up because of me.




Now, The sun has risen, signifying the ends of those horrible nights.
Paint your face with smiles dear Mama,
Move your feet for joy.
For the night has given way for a day so bright.

(2020)
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Re: Letter To Mama by maynation(f): 2:52pm On Jan 12, 2020
Mehn..
I LOVE THIS. cry cry
Re: Letter To Mama by Nobody: 8:35pm On Jan 13, 2020
What has happened to us
'Us' of this generation

You will hardly see anyone commenting and commending the write
But one irrelevant post will get so much comments

The poesy is just on point, neatly arranged, the stanza just dope
Re: Letter To Mama by Nobody: 8:35pm On Jan 13, 2020
What has happened to us
'Us' of this generation

You will hardly see anyone commenting and commending the write
But one irrelevant post will get so much comments

The poesy is just on point, neatly arranged, the stanzas just dope
Re: Letter To Mama by Kiddogarcia(m): 11:20am On Jan 14, 2020
donproject:
What has happened to us
'Us' of this generation

You will hardly see anyone commenting and commending the write
But one irrelevant post will get so much comme
nts

The poesy is just on point, neatly arranged, the stanzas just dope
the truth is clear to see.even poets rarely promotes fellow poet. aside from noble4id,no other poet encourage other
Re: Letter To Mama by zanieike: 4:18pm On Jan 14, 2020
The mods rarely put poems on the front page.
Re: Letter To Mama by Nobody: 7:25am On Jan 15, 2020
Kiddogarcia:
the truth is clear to see.even poets rarely promotes fellow poet. aside from noble4id,no other poet encourage other
But why is it like that?
Re: Letter To Mama by Kiddogarcia(m): 9:31am On Jan 15, 2020
donproject:
Bjsrrut why is it like that?
the larger part of the blame clearly falls on the mod,no encouragement at all,poems not pushed to the front page. I read poetictwenty works,and you see FP Worthy material, same as scarphase..we don't encourage each other also,people rarely comment on poem.I don't wanna talk about this anymore. I do what I do because I derive happiness from it,not because of FP nor nairaland fame
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Re: Letter To Mama by noble4d(m): 12:18pm On Jan 23, 2020
poetictwenty:
I know the stars will fall at my feet someday.
The rain will oneday give way for sunshine.
Our drenched body's will someday dry up
When the future becomes today.


I can see the clouds gathering,
Hugging each other before it drops like rain-
A rain that will wash away the pains of yesteryears,
Before leaving us with a happy ending.


I won't forget you when I bid farewell to tomorrow.
For You're inscribed in each page of my heart.
You're like a rose planted in the garden of my life.
A rose that grew strong in a soil covered by weed of sorrow.



Countless times, I saw when you stood on you knees,-
While knocking on heavens gate for my sake.
Even when it seem the door was never opening.
But you won't just give up because of me.




Now, The sun has risen, signifying the ends of those horrible nights.
Paint your face with smiles dear Mama,
Move your feet for joy.
For the night has given way for a day so bright.

Ohuche, Joseph ogbonna (2020)
Wow! Kudos poet, I felt each stanza you wrote.
Re: Letter To Mama by Oye0404(m): 10:22am On Mar 29, 2020
I'm a staunch follower of your works,,,, keep up the good work, you're my inspiration..
Re: Letter To Mama by Jokesnice(m): 9:06pm On Feb 20, 2021
Poetictwenty, thanks for this. I felt it. bravo
Re: Letter To Mama by anuofGod(f): 11:40am On Apr 06, 2021
poetictwenty:
I know the stars will fall at my feet someday.
The rain will oneday give way for sunshine.
Our drenched body's will someday dry up
When the future becomes today.


I can see the clouds gathering,
Hugging each other before it drops like rain-
A rain that will wash away the pains of yesteryears,
Before leaving us with a happy ending.

My mama, a string woman
I'll write this in a beautiful card for her

I won't forget you when I bid farewell to tomorrow.
For You're inscribed in each page of my heart.
You're like a rose planted in the garden of my life.
A rose that grew strong in a soil covered by weed of sorrow.



Countless times, I saw when you stood on you knees,-
While knocking on heavens gate for my sake.
Even when it seem the door was never opening.
But you won't just give up because of me.




Now, The sun has risen, signifying the ends of those horrible nights.
Paint your face with smiles dear Mama,
Move your feet for joy.
For the night has given way for a day so bright.

Ohuche, Joseph ogbonna (2020)
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