When Death Calls - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| When Death Calls by Chocoman(op): 10:27pm On Feb 08, 2020 |
I know the tone of your call So don't pretend as if I don't know you Your call carries the tone of an horror movie That gives sleepless nights When you call You come with a smiling face To show the beauty beyond And how everlasting you are You think I don't know you You are coloured with fake smiles And always walk about with dark clothes like a widow's wardrobe Is it not you that called Musa Yar' Adua and the likes of Oronto Douglas? I know the tone of your call And when it's answered Even couples who hadn't spoken for a year Hold hands to shed tears And silence creeps into their heart I know you perfectly So I won't stop for you But you will stop for me To drive me to old age With no haste But I know, one day I shall answer your call Because we shall all go Like Ghana must go Where we shall be laid low, very low In the dark of the soil |
| Re: When Death Calls by noble4d(m): 10:44pm On Feb 12, 2020 |
Punctuations are important in poetry, it enables readers to know when there is a pause, period or enjambment. Please take note. Thumbs up. |
| Re: When Death Calls by Nobody: 6:27am On Feb 16, 2020 |
noble4d:Please can you modify that poetry and punctuate where necessary, thanks |
| Re: When Death Calls by Chocoman(op): 3:17pm On Mar 09, 2020 |
noble4d:Thanks! Noted and I do appreciate your contributions |