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Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Vimhomoh: 9:23am On Feb 15, 2020
Nice story. Good thing Jack was able to make it smiley
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by ojaysam25(m): 12:13pm On Feb 15, 2020
can't believe I actually read the story all through...nice captivating story and very hilarious sheets....
thump up� to you bro
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by hopyroll(m): 3:36pm On Feb 15, 2020
Nice 1
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by ogboss: 3:52pm On Feb 15, 2020
I did not even read a sentence ....thought it was the alcoholic captain jack
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Legitdimple(f): 4:47pm On Feb 15, 2020
Oh! Interesting and informative,thumbs up!!!
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Noblejohn32(m): 6:39am On Feb 16, 2020
Jackossky:
Good to know Jack's life positively changed.
4 years later, he became an outstanding soldier...
Thanks for your interest.
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Noblejohn32(m): 6:39am On Feb 16, 2020
Legitdimple:
Oh! Interesting and informative,thumbs up!!!
Thanks.
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Noblejohn32(m): 6:41am On Feb 16, 2020
Quicksilver14:
So I'd read this long thing and not comment?

Nice story. A few tips.

You have to make the intro more catching.
Something that would make others want to continue reading.

I like your punctuations.

Emphasize on some points to create a more visual representation of your story.

Are you ibibio?
Yea! I'm ibibio

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Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Noblejohn32(m): 6:43am On Feb 16, 2020
ojaysam25:
can't believe I actually read the story all through...nice captivating story and very hilarious sheets....
thump up� to you bro
Thanks.
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Noblejohn32(m): 6:45am On Feb 16, 2020
ifiokbenzy:
Mfon it's been a long time I read interesting write-ups. Your inspirational thought is undefiled. Muah...keep it up
Thanks.
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by chelseamann(m): 4:39pm On Feb 16, 2020
Beautiful and exciting
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by mychiveous(f): 4:40pm On Feb 16, 2020
Come and continue desire na. The story wasn't that long o.

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Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Noblejohn32(m): 8:08pm On Feb 16, 2020
mychiveous:
Come and continue desire na. The story wasn't that long o.

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Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Nobody: 12:15am On Feb 21, 2020
mychiveous:
Come and continue desire na. The story wasn't that long o.
I couldn't get your message, pls send me an email at sgcszxd
Re: "Captain Jack": A Val Story Written By John Mfon by Khriztarl(f): 12:55pm On Jul 04, 2020
[code][/code]Big ups
Big ups
Big ups

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