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So, I wrote this song yesterday and it's clearly a work in progress. I hope you enjoy it and it sounds like stuff you'd probably want to hear on the radio or enjoy. I'd really appreciate your feedbacks in the comment section. Thank you �!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iq_asaRQplo

Lyrics

Don't you think that you deserve the truth
Though it stares you right in the face
Your heart's hid beneath all the sheets that you
Pulled over your face when you stopped to try

I walked on egg shells
Shone through the dark
Oh, I bled to death for you
I rose, I came to
You with the goody bag
All that you'll ever need...

Nice song bro ..but it's too Oyinboish...try to come down to naija level if u wan blow ..u Sabi sing..just try to infuse some naija phrases or local dialects into your next song..

Heistman:
Nice song bro ..but it's too Oyinboish...try to come down to naija level if u wan blow ..u Sabi sing..just try to infuse some naija phrases or local dialects into your next song..

Ok sir. Thanks for your input.�‍♂️

Nice one bro... Keep it up, and modify only when necessary.
By the time you record, mix and master the song, you will have a treasure in your hands.

Midolan:
So, I wrote this song yesterday and it's clearly a work in progress. I hope you enjoy it and it sounds like stuff you'd probably want to hear on the radio or enjoy. I'd really appreciate your feedbacks in the comment section. Thank you �!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iq_asaRQplo

Lyrics

Don't you think that you deserve the truth
Though it stares you right in the face
Your heart's hid beneath all the sheets that you
Pulled over your face when you stopped to try

I walked on egg shells
Shone through the dark
Oh, I bled to death for you
I rose, I came to
You with the goody bag
All that you'll ever need...

Nice one bro, although genres like this don't get real recognition if you put in power, you might just be getting your low key pay like Johnny Drille, Ric Hassan, etc.
But if you can tweak your sound to be more Afro it would help you a lot.
Afro Pop or RB has potential in the market.
Don't underestimate Afrobeat, many African Artists are richer than their western counterparts.

Midolan:
So, I wrote this song yesterday and it's clearly a work in progress. I hope you enjoy it and it sounds like stuff you'd probably want to hear on the radio or enjoy. I'd really appreciate your feedbacks in the comment section. Thank you �!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iq_asaRQplo

Lyrics

Don't you think that you deserve the truth
Though it stares you right in the face
Your heart's hid beneath all the sheets that you
Pulled over your face when you stopped to try

I walked on egg shells
Shone through the dark
Oh, I bled to death for you
I rose, I came to
You with the goody bag
All that you'll ever need...

Awesome .... but don't ignore the first advice ...Africa can never be removed from our blood. Keep up the good voice.