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Angelina996:
Wow!! This poem inspires me a lot. Me!!!

And this prompts me to submit this here too, for correction or otherwise. Thanks.

Me
Hard to see through
Difficult to fathom
Strong in my frailty
Beauty redefined
Passionately loving all
The sister you beg to have
Obediently cleaving and following
The daughter you pray to have
Heart, pure as gold
Truthful to all and sundry
Answering their call of desperation
Ever ready, filling all to fullness
Heartily crying out to another.
22/8
Ninmayo


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Heiy Angelina996, well done! It's brilliant for everyone to be coming up with a version of this. Well done once again.

adonisechi:
Let me type something.
I wish you enjoy the read sha




I'M ME


I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the son of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand




You judge me by my flaws
You strive to see my imperfections
You look me through the prism of judgement
You wish I lack what makes me ME
And then you wish my imperfections are more





I'm me because He made me so
He made you so, so you could be you
Be you at all times and never a waste of you
A waste of you you are if you choose to be her
For to be her is to complete the script of this crazy world.






Things that I do I do with ease
And that's because that's just me
I do not struggle to be me
It'll take more nuclear power to shatter me;
More than that which will bring Russia to her knees.






Truly, I'm me the world should understand
Every step that I take I must bear the brunt
Right or wrong you must understand
I'm me whether ME likes it or not
Your loathings and judgment I care not.

Well done Adonisechi! Well written.

Kingsteve:
Good morning.

I felt I should get this off my mind.
I can't remember meeting a lady that isn't afraid of expressing herself emotionally in writing, just like you do.

For that alone, you're already special to me.
Your beauty is exotic
You're romantic
It makes me wonder
Is your zodiac sign Cancer?
No one loves better than cancerians.
I'm one!

Thinking out loud...
'If only we could make our convos more private...'
Have a good day and get well soon.

Much love!


maynation

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iezeiyida:
Wow!��

This poem is so so beautiful! I love it so much because it reflects so many things to my mind! Thank you dear Pranaya! You are great!� God bless

Awwwww. I should rather say a big thank you for the kind words. It's good to know much as the poem is old, you still consider it good. Thank you! And may we get more reflections from the things we read and see. Thank you again and sleep well

TheOtherRoom
"Though I am broken"
Narrative poem