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xlimit: Mÿ 1st comment in nairaland.Ÿøů a gøøď writer,keep ïţ ůp!

am feeling fly, ur first comment for for me?

welcome to nairaland and feel free to explore.

onegig: seen my mail??

nope. *off to check*

indeed

Finally!
And i said it! Twas too long a period. 1-13th ain't bad.

#will submit my amateur scribbling soon enough

ibkaye: You should have used the bell lol how are you?

am fine, thank you. Happy new month by the way

glowingscenes: eya.....
sigh!!!
finally the story comes to an end wanna ask though, please this "SUNSET" that you usually dance to princess,lool, is it the literal sunset or some sort of fictional sunset?

all join oh, sunset to me means freedom!
the wind kissing my face
the sun warming my skin

Me sef just dey hear that 500 naira fan, because na pidgin things for my side oh......

#story
eze...my dear, may your days be long! See how i don laugh fall for ground...

Abacha
Rule 17 missing
Room 9

God, am loving this!

Thank you all for stopping by to comment, its hard to find around here! Wish i could give a thousand likes but am limited to one....you guyz are definitely the best.

What more can i say, if nairaland readers haven't read, condemned, praised and like your story, you never start business be that!

Repogirl abeg tell mama ise to bring that 15million naira offer to this side, girls eye dey tear wella!

15million, and I'll be dumping Ise's handsome ass


splendid as usual

how come no one heard me knocking. Only the both of you in this house since

Bukky oh, is it omo igbo or omo ibo? The igbo sounds to me like the Igbo we all know


keep up the good work... And for the records, i am the Mrs IT. Every other person follows behind.

Ruby First: I want moreeeeeee..... Part 2 pls Princessa.

this no be nollywood piece oh! Sorry sha, tory don end

repogirl: Choi, I don miss o, I'm just reading this concluding part. Great work, darling Princessa. Well done, well concluded. Have fun at your 'sunset'.

thank God i can finally dance to my sunset
thanks for reading, i appreciate.. The road now leads to urs

alutacontinua: Guess it would be against all that I believe in if I don't say a big weldone to princesa for this story. Kida busy now, can't type much but I promise to comment later. Weldone dear and thanks. Wanted to comment after the story ended. Would be back with my full epistle.

and thank you for finally commenting and sticking tru with me... And am waiting for date ur epistle oh

[quote author=Mum Z ]Weldone. Noticed u used d word 'screamed' a lot. Most times conversations were a shouting match, mayb Jide shld b talkn sarcastically smetimes instead of always screaming. And d part whre Daisy kept saying 'begone' dint quite flow 4 me, guess its cos she's an Americana. All in all, I enjoyd ur story line. Tanks 4 putting time in2 dis even wit all d pressures, appreciate much. U 4 write "THE END" o, mke pple no cry say d tory still remain.[/quote]but I wrote 'the end' maybe it wasn't too big.

And thanks for reading and staying tru till the end. Though i wish this corrections of urs had come tru while i was still writing, would have effected it. Am not too good at expression and adjectives but i hope to work on that.

And the Daisy's diction? Dnt quite get what you mean, but well she's an americana...lol. If you can elaborate on it, I would appreciate it. Thanks again

Amen Amen and Amen!
but I've written the end na. Story ended at the last page.
Happy new month to you and every wonderful silent and speaking readers on Nl.

I love you all...

ojingbe: Princesa. I dont like this o.
Why will u write about my marriage after telln u nt to do so.

HumbledbYGrace: I think I don't need no mills&boon nomore, we should have a series of african writers romance what do you say?

You need to brush up it here and there, check your spelling, marks should be in proper places but all in all you did good.

As they say, we are many parts in one body, that's how we artists are like. Different strokes for different folks.

Much love.

thank you, much love...offcourse I'll do the editing later. And yes, i think its long overdue for African romance piece.

shollaire: it actually 4months and still counting!

that's why i was shocked, cos i know it took me longer.

Thank you too smart and shola, for reading

corrections noted and whoa, three months you say!