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everton4life:
Hey, man. Thanks for the call to attention. That star beer was actually a mistake that I forgot to correct. The book was written two years ago and I didn't really do much editing. Lol.

As for your second point, that is another major flaw I have in writing. I always take way too much time developing characters

I'll try to work on it. Thanks again for the call to attention

it's nothing really, man. I guess I was just doing my job as a reader. And I hope you do correct these flaws of yours soon, man.

But anyways, know that this takes nothing away from you or the story though...

You're one of the best, if not the best sef.

It's been a long time since I come across something as good as this on NL. Bro, this story of yours with its touch of paranormal and horror is one hell of a story. And believe me when I tell you that, you're one hell of a writer yourself.

Btw, I will like to call your attention to something. It's obvious from the characters' appearances and names that they are Caucasians. The only thing is in the first chapter or so, you have them drinking star larger beer, or was it 33. I think that doesn't add up to the story. Another thing is, that we're yet to get a feel of the physical settings of the story. All the story has done so far is builds around the characters but not the settings.

Aside from that, all's good and normal. Please, do ride on!

4kizo:
Exactly why flow1759 will always be my best writer
He doesn't abandon his projects....
Reasons I don't take this NL writers serious....it now makes me feel like it's all lie...Op has run out of lies.....

Make I go restart any of flow's stories biko....

I understand how this must feel, bro. But, you must also understand that these people have a life outside of here. Instead of you complaining here, it would have been much better if you changed tact, and ask how the writer is doing. There's a reason for everything, you know.

WriterX:
If you are an ardent follower of JDH, kindly signify and comment please your words keep's this book going.

Who is following john and why do you think about the character so far.

It's a nice story you gat going, man. I am so into it. But please I will like you to touch on the past of our dear protagonist. Let's have a feel of who he is, his past, his identity. We are yet to know if he is a vigilante, or just another knucklehead on a killing spree.