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thanks a million for keeping us in the loop. |
New to the site but looking at your title it is very suggestive.I believe you can do a lot with the title depending on the perspective you are looking at it from.The story is good keep at it. |
Your story line is okay there is room for improvement. Make sure you also read stories of those ahead of you in the genre that you prefer to write about. One cannot be expert in all fields. Be able to ascertain what field that is. Keep it up |
This reminds me of my write up titled A Better Nigeria is possible.Am glad someone else sees hope in this natioin.I believe we see things from the same perspective. |
when you mean create awareness what do you mean, For me i use the platform of my blog to put my poetry out there.Maybe you can do the same but if you do not have the means then use twitter or facebook. |
In writing your opening remark should always hold people spell bound.The first sentence can tell people if your story is going to be interesting or not.But anyway you are doing pretty well keep it up. |
you started by saying you are new at writing but it does not seem like it. You are doing better than okay. All you need is constant practice and you will be the next John Grisham. Keep it up. |
The power of choice is what put mankind in the situation that he is in today.Eve decided to chose to listen to the serpent rather that God and see where that got us. There is always the choice to do the right thing and that is what i believe you are trying to highlight and that is a good thing. The decision to chose right is what makes the world go round. Keep up the good work. |
I want us to please remember someone i know who has breast cancer and would be going to India for surgery. That the Lord will see her though and bring her back safe and sound.That the financial resources that she needs be made available. I sincerely pray for total healing in Jesus name. |
The world is full of second chances so i think you deserve one the poem is a nice piece and i believe there is room for improvement |
just joining in the forum but so far so good |
know that in Hosea"s case it was an isolated incident in which God was trying to teach a lesson to the children of Isreal.It should not become a yard stick. |
RE;A poem dedicated to my e-lover new to the forum and want to say you are good with words. More of that |
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