Poems For Review / Re: SOUND OF WORDS by youngcrysta(f): 10:15pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
Girlie, keep it up... your diction is simple and comprehendable |
Poems For Review / Re: SOUND OF WORDS by youngcrysta(f): 10:12pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
laykorn:
My birthday is on June 3. Promise me one too. ![embarassed](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/embarassed.png) Ayamlaykorn for real June 3? |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:07pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
WATERFALL
A beauty of nature, A picture to keep in mind forever. From top of the cliff Water gush out with so much strength Hitting, Crashing Upon hard rock Racing down into an open river. An atmospheric music filled with happy flowers.
CC: Texanomaly, Laykorn, leki10, donifez |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 9:51pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: Youngcryta u've been in attendance in all the classes...I like ur spirit thankz... I really have to commend you and everest, tonight's class was waoh!, keep it up 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 3:35pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
cisse7575: There are two line break examples in the given passage. The first line break is ta'en. Another line break is used in the fourth line, āIā being a person has an absolute meaning. These line breaks are determining the visual shape of this text. Now I have a little understanding of what you're trying to say... Thanks Tisa Donifez and cisse |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 7:45am On Dec 26, 2014 |
cisse7575: based on how you arranged it here:
Sword My Taken
Are the ends of lines Alrightie... Thanks |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:58pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
According to one of your posts, The ends of lines or where a line stops is a Line break.
From your example With his own sword, which he did wave against my throat, have ta'en Are there any other line breaks apart from 'sword'? hope you understand my question? |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:57pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
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Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:44pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
cisse7575: Since no more questions, I wish the NPC Merry Xmas and a blissful and prosperity New Year in advance! Till I'm back from Senegal next year Jan. Goodnite! Walks out of the class unhappy because few students attended the class pls Dont go yet... still having issue with "line breaks" |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 9:32pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
![cool](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/cool.png) yes |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 9:09pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
texanomaly:
I know it was long, but was it that boring? ![undecided](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/undecided.png) nah, it wasn't boring 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 2:59pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
laykorn:
You want assignment ba ![](/faces/huh.png) Ayamlaykorn ![lipsrsealed](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/lipsrsealed.png) |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 2:50pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
Learnt alot from last night class, thanks Tex and everest tho the note was... btw no assignment? Learnt alot from last night class, thanks Tex and everest tho the note was... ![lipsrsealed](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/lipsrsealed.png) btw no assignment? |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:22pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
texanomaly: Hope y'all are taking notes. ![smiley](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/smiley.png)
Assignment to follow. yes 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 8:57pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
Hi... moves to the back seat |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 8:10pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
leki10:
Nice one dear...love d way u expressed dose objects. Work on ur punctuation... ..the sky is ur starting point thanks, will work on it |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:50pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
Obinnau: Hi, about editing your title, modify your first post of this thread, the title will show then you can modify it too.
Or you tell me the name you want to use, I'll modify it for you
Thanks Done! thanks |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:28pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
laykorn:
What about the title change![](/faces/huh.png) Will you work on it too Ayamlaykorn yeap, I'm doing that presently |
Poems For Review / Re: In My Subconscious Mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:50pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
beautiful lines and words, thats what makes up a good poem.... kudos 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:32pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
Thanks for your comment, will work on the Punctuation aspect |
Poems For Review / Re: My First Rap Lines. Does It Make Any Sense? by youngcrysta(f): 8:02am On Dec 20, 2014 |
peotry still flowing in your veins... kudos man |
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:25pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
I am an independent damsel, Who would not follow the rules of men. My freedom is my priority. Wouldnt not sacrifice, Wonderful adventures and fantasy, For the title MRS That adjective "Wife", Isn't worthy to be mine. My name is youngcrysta with no L |
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:16pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
The lucky one is My Smile, Will do anything to make My Smile keep shining. The stars are not what we see, The star is love overshadowed by hatred. Even if I get burnt searching, A trial wouldn't leave me empty. |
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:16pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
The lucky one is My Smile, Will do anything to make My Smile keep shining. The stars are not what we see, The star is love overshadowed by hatred. Even if I get burnt searching, a trial wouldn't leave me empty. |
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:01pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
Oops! have been caught, The sound of my keypad has been heard. Wanted to make it a surprise I'm gonna catch a star for someone, But the cloud have overshadow it. My lil secret |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 5:47pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
Moi Free Verse assignment
MORE TO WHAT WE SEE
Told to watch and learn But kept repeating the mistake, Cos I didnt observe the errors. To fly high was in my imagination, In reality I am soaring high. The shoes I wear, Determines my steps to greatness. Have got to keep it shining. Just like the sharp pain in the heart, So also, Like a Stain that needs to be erased.
A smile can make you furious, Anger can led to death. Everything has a second phase, Even the Universe and Life has. To possess is our property, Also to lend is your possession.
The Sun is great, But still have to humble itself every night. The moon shines brightly, But still have to give way to the rain. Stars are breath taking, But will have to be mute, When the cloud pass by. Even High Mountain get scared, they can suddenly become plain. No matter the number of years I have, A day old Angel is to be respected.
CC: Texanomaly, Laykorn, Leki10, Everestdebliu |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:42am On Dec 19, 2014 |
laykorn:
Wow! Great acrostic! You forgot your period in line 4 ![embarassed](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/embarassed.png) Ayamlaykorn thanks, will correct that |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 11:02pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
HARSH
How can I keep enduring these pains?! Always, the word patience lies on human lips, Ready to dish out advices. Seriously, words are mere and cannot soothe. Helpless is the word.
CC: laykorn, leki10, taxanomly |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:49pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
leki10:
No he mistook Leki10 for Lordi please take note alrightie |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:42pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
laykorn:
Young, just seeing your message. All you have to do to tag is to mention the teachers' names. Something like this.
Cc: Laykorn Texanomal.y
And they'll see it in their mentions. ![cheesy](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/cheesy.png) Ayamlaykorn alrightie, thanks |
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:41pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
laykorn:
Young, just seeing your message. All you have to do to tag is to mention the teachers' names. Something like this.
Cc: Laykorn Texanomal.y
And they'll see it in their mentions. ![cheesy](https://www.nairaland.com/faces/cheesy.png) Ayamlaykorn |
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:39pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
My Observation: Mr Laykorn didnt introduce Mr Leki10 as one of our teachers, is he the same person as everestdebliu? |