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Poems For Review / Re: SOUND OF WORDS by youngcrysta(f): 10:15pm On Dec 28, 2014
Girlie, keep it up... your diction is simple and comprehendable
Poems For Review / Re: SOUND OF WORDS by youngcrysta(f): 10:12pm On Dec 28, 2014
laykorn:

My birthday is on June 3. Promise me one too. embarassed
Ayamlaykorn

for real June 3?
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:07pm On Dec 28, 2014
WATERFALL

A beauty of nature,
A picture to keep in mind forever.
From top of the cliff
Water gush out with so much strength
Hitting, Crashing
Upon hard rock
Racing down into an open river.
An atmospheric music filled with happy flowers.

CC: Texanomaly, Laykorn, leki10, donifez
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 9:51pm On Dec 28, 2014
EverestdeBliu:
Youngcryta u've been in attendance in all the classes...I like ur spirit

thankz... I really have to commend you and everest, tonight's class was waoh!, keep it up

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Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 3:35pm On Dec 26, 2014
cisse7575:
There are two line break examples in the given passage. The first line break is ta'en. Another line break is used in the fourth line, ā€œIā€ being a person has an absolute meaning. These line breaks are determining the visual shape of this text.

Now I have a little understanding of what you're trying to say... Thanks Tisa Donifez and cisse
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 7:45am On Dec 26, 2014
cisse7575:
based on how you arranged it here:

Sword
My
Taken

Are the ends of lines

Alrightie... Thanks
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:58pm On Dec 25, 2014
According to one of your posts, The ends of lines or where a line stops is a Line break.

From your example
With his own sword,
which he did wave against my
throat, have ta'en
Are there any other line breaks apart from 'sword'? hope you understand my question?
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:57pm On Dec 25, 2014
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Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:44pm On Dec 25, 2014
cisse7575:
Since no more questions, I wish the NPC Merry Xmas and a blissful and prosperity New Year in advance!
Till I'm back from Senegal next year Jan.
Goodnite!
Walks out of the class unhappy because few students attended the class

pls Dont go yet... still having issue with "line breaks"
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 9:32pm On Dec 25, 2014
coolyes
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 9:09pm On Dec 22, 2014
texanomaly:


I know it was long, but was it that boring? undecided
nah, it wasn't boring

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Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 2:59pm On Dec 22, 2014
laykorn:

You want assignment ba
Ayamlaykorn

lipsrsealed
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 2:50pm On Dec 22, 2014
Learnt alot from last night class, thanks Tex and everest tho the note was...

btw no assignment? Learnt alot from last night class, thanks Tex and everest tho the note was... lipsrsealed

btw no assignment?
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:22pm On Dec 21, 2014
texanomaly:
Hope y'all are taking notes. smiley

Assignment to follow.

yes

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Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 8:57pm On Dec 21, 2014
Hi... moves to the back seat
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 8:10pm On Dec 21, 2014
leki10:

Nice one dear...love d way u expressed dose objects. Work on ur punctuation... ..the sky is ur starting point

thanks, will work on it
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:50pm On Dec 20, 2014
Obinnau:
Hi, about editing your title, modify your first post of this thread, the title will show then you can modify it too.

Or you tell me the name you want to use, I'll modify it for you

Thanks

Done! thanks
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:28pm On Dec 20, 2014
laykorn:

What about the title change
Will you work on it too
Ayamlaykorn

yeap, I'm doing that presently
Poems For Review / Re: In My Subconscious Mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:50pm On Dec 20, 2014
beautiful lines and words, thats what makes up a good poem.... kudos

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Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:32pm On Dec 20, 2014
Thanks for your comment, will work on the Punctuation aspect
Poems For Review / Re: My First Rap Lines. Does It Make Any Sense? by youngcrysta(f): 8:02am On Dec 20, 2014
peotry still flowing in your veins... kudos man
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:25pm On Dec 19, 2014
I am an independent damsel,
Who would not follow the rules of men.
My freedom is my priority.
Wouldnt not sacrifice,
Wonderful adventures and fantasy,
For the title MRS
That adjective "Wife",
Isn't worthy to be mine.
My name is youngcrysta with no L
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:16pm On Dec 19, 2014
The lucky one is My Smile,
Will do anything to make My Smile keep shining.
The stars are not what we see,
The star is love overshadowed by hatred.
Even if I get burnt searching,
A trial wouldn't leave me empty.
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:16pm On Dec 19, 2014
The lucky one is My Smile,
Will do anything to make My Smile keep shining.
The stars are not what we see,
The star is love overshadowed by hatred.
Even if I get burnt searching,
a trial wouldn't leave me empty.
Poems For Review / Re: The Freestyle Collaboration Lounge. by youngcrysta(f): 10:01pm On Dec 19, 2014
Oops! have been caught,
The sound of my keypad has been heard.
Wanted to make it a surprise
I'm gonna catch a star for someone,
But the cloud have overshadow it.
My lil secret
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 5:47pm On Dec 19, 2014
Moi Free Verse assignment

MORE TO WHAT WE SEE

Told to watch and learn
But kept repeating the mistake,
Cos I didnt observe the errors.
To fly high was in my imagination,
In reality I am soaring high.
The shoes I wear,
Determines my steps to greatness.
Have got to keep it shining.
Just like the sharp pain in the heart,
So also, Like a Stain that needs to be erased.

A smile can make you furious,
Anger can led to death.
Everything has a second phase,
Even the Universe and Life has.
To possess is our property,
Also to lend is your possession.

The Sun is great,
But still have to humble itself every night.
The moon shines brightly,
But still have to give way to the rain.
Stars are breath taking,
But will have to be mute,
When the cloud pass by.
Even High Mountain get scared,
they can suddenly become plain.
No matter the number of years I have,
A day old Angel is to be respected.


CC: Texanomaly, Laykorn, Leki10, Everestdebliu
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:42am On Dec 19, 2014
laykorn:

Wow! Great acrostic!
You forgot your period in line 4 embarassed
Ayamlaykorn

thanks, will correct that
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 11:02pm On Dec 18, 2014
HARSH

How can I keep enduring these pains?!
Always, the word patience lies on human lips,
Ready to dish out advices.
Seriously, words are mere and cannot soothe.
Helpless is the word.

CC: laykorn, leki10, taxanomly
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:49pm On Dec 18, 2014
leki10:

No
he mistook Leki10 for Lordi
please take note

alrightie
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:42pm On Dec 18, 2014
laykorn:

Young, just seeing your message. All you have to do to tag is to mention the teachers' names. Something like this.

Cc:
Laykorn
Texanomal.y

And they'll see it in their mentions. cheesy
Ayamlaykorn


alrightie, thanks
Poems For Review / Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:41pm On Dec 18, 2014
laykorn:

Young, just seeing your message. All you have to do to tag is to mention the teachers' names. Something like this.

Cc:
Laykorn
Texanomal.y

And they'll see it in their mentions. cheesy
Ayamlaykorn
Poems For Review / Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by youngcrysta(f): 10:39pm On Dec 18, 2014
My Observation: Mr Laykorn didnt introduce Mr Leki10 as one of our teachers, is he the same person as everestdebliu?

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