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The Pit! - Poems For Review - Nairaland

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The Pit! by Presius(op): 7:59am On Aug 03, 2012
I feel the chill crawl up my spine.
I sense the creep of evil in the room.
My mind start to panick, as i run out of time.
I am scared to be forever trapped in this tomb.
I begin to try and calm my mind.
I am starting to loose control of the shackles of my sanity.
I fight harder than ever only to loose the bind.
The loss releases a tsunami of madness, followed by a string of strong profanity.
I pick up my steel chair and throw it at the wall.
It knocks over the picture of my family.
I kneel over to pick it up as a voice says.''TONIGHT YOU LOOSE THEM ALL''
the comments i get will make me continue this.. Just criticize and tell me my errors.. Thanks!!!
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Re: The Pit! by Nobody: 7:18pm On Aug 17, 2012
Its so beautiful, u just have to continue............
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