The Pit! - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| The Pit! by Presius(op): 7:59am On Aug 03, 2012 |
I feel the chill crawl up my spine. I sense the creep of evil in the room. My mind start to panick, as i run out of time. I am scared to be forever trapped in this tomb. I begin to try and calm my mind. I am starting to loose control of the shackles of my sanity. I fight harder than ever only to loose the bind. The loss releases a tsunami of madness, followed by a string of strong profanity. I pick up my steel chair and throw it at the wall. It knocks over the picture of my family. I kneel over to pick it up as a voice says.''TONIGHT YOU LOOSE THEM ALL'' the comments i get will make me continue this.. Just criticize and tell me my errors.. Thanks!!! |
| Re: The Pit! by Nobody: 7:18pm On Aug 17, 2012 |
Its so beautiful, u just have to continue............ |