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If no one will listen
I'll tell open holes & assume they're all ears

If no one will believe me
I'll wait on the lizards to nod their heads

I've deep secrets
Having them kept is too much to bear

Very deep secrets
Digging them up most times gives me a scare

My deep secrets
Like ripples on water, I want them spread

Now that you chose to listen
For good reasons, I want my grandmother dead

This isn't just writing
Just trying expressing
Forget it is looking like a poem


For good reasons, who do you want dead?
If it's a secret, I promise I won't tell.

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Hmmm, ANY-PEN can write that.
Nice try.

Your piece reminds me of the haiku, a poetical form I love very much even though I'm still not good at it. But I really like it. I only wish that the last three stanzas were like the foregoing ones. You appeared to slip out of form there.

Ihedinobi: Your piece reminds me of the haiku, a poetical form I love very much even though I'm still not good at it. But I really like it. I only wish that the last three stanzas were like the foregoing ones. You appeared to slip out of form there.

thanks man