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|Terror by Kitme(f): 6:15pm On Jul 01, 2015|
It wasn't everyday that her River of joy splashed bountifully, infact it doesn't happened often.
Especially when her mum had commended her on based on her culinary skills. She had been bugging and pleading with her to allow her practice what she had learnt over the years, but her mummy had refused vehemently, but today, her mummy gave her the 'go ahead'.
Giddy with joy, she strolled into the living room after escorting her parent out. They were going for the monthly Night of praise in their church.
To her unutterable amazement, She saw two hefty looking giant men. They gave her the impression of gentleman. They sat contentedly, they looked so homely, one would mistook them for the house-owner.
'Erm-what do you wa.....
She was interrupted with a wave of hand from one of them, She stared at them with great terror, bundle of shivers running down her spine.
She looked at them again, One had this fearful impression written on him, an old red rag was tied round his head, He had a big scar that ran from the back of his ear to the side of his mouth, He seemed to be cut by flints and briars, as he limped and shivered, glared and growled menacingly towards her. His teeth chattered and rebounded in his head, while the second guy was bald-headed, he looked so innocent, but she knew he was evil.
'What do you want?' She asked fearfully.
After darkly looking at his leg and at her,several times, he took her by both arms and tilted her back as far as he could hold her, her eyes looked most helplessly up into his, while he looked most powerfully down into hers.
'We have a job for you' He said and released his grip on her arm.
She cautioned herself, She meant to say 'I don't need your job, just let me go', but what came out was 'A job?'
'Yes, Silly' The bald-headed guy shoved her against the wall angrily and exhaled some puff of smoke directly into her nose.
'But we will give you the details on our way out' He said with a naughty smirk.
'Our way?' She asked with some kind of unknown boldness.
The air of her boldness caught him offguard, Unable to arrive at any satisfying corporal punishment to send a message to her, that they were not joking. He suddenly had a brain wave and strangled her roughly. She was frozen with fear.
He let go of her and she dived into a cough fit, she was suffocating, she would have died if she had spent a minute more in his hands.
'What do you want?' She asked, pitifully
She was kept quiet with a strong tilt against the wall. She was dreadfully frightened.
With a threatening shake of head, they held her and left. She knew that minute that she was doomed.
|Re: Terror by Skimpledawg(m): 7:51pm On Jul 01, 2015|
Wat da heck!!! Like cwiosly, d end? after blowing my mind away wt palpable tension.... Damn, i expected more...
Onemansquad n stuff46, coman read dz blockbuster
D use of 'mum' would av bn better dan d 'mummy' u used.... #my2cents
|Re: Terror by Onemansquad(m): 7:59pm On Jul 01, 2015|
I hope this story has part 2
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 8:53am On Jul 02, 2015|
Skimpledawg:Thanks, i'm modifyin it right away..
Onemansquad:I hope so too.
|Re: Terror by Skimpledawg(m): 9:28am On Jul 02, 2015|
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 4:16pm On Jul 02, 2015|
Skimpledawg:My newest pal on here is asking for more updates.
Truth be told, I have no intention of turnin it into a story, but at your insistence, I will build it up in a day or two...
|Re: Terror by Skimpledawg(m): 5:51pm On Jul 02, 2015|
|Re: Terror by KingzPen(m): 2:00pm On Jul 03, 2015|
How could that be the end? No possible! Unfair to live both the character and we the readers hanging on the thin rope of this story's suspense.
Nice story you've got... Love it...
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 6:59pm On Jul 03, 2015|
KingzPen:The great king commented on my story ......I'm honoured...Boss!
Actually, I was tired of the mushy mushy romance I was writing and decided to delve into something like this.......
Your comment means a lot...Thanks a bunch!!
|Re: Terror by Divepen1(m): 11:29pm On Jul 03, 2015|
*she would had died- have died
You are joking about that being the end. If you stop there we will sue you to Ikotun( court)
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 6:35am On Jul 04, 2015|
Divepen1:Thanks......its now modified.
PLs, don't take me to court ..........tnz for stoppin by!!
|Re: Terror by Divepen1(m): 9:47am On Jul 04, 2015|
Kitme:Oya save yasef by continuing immediately.
|Re: Terror by Divepen1(m): 9:48am On Jul 04, 2015|
Kitme:You are welcome
|Re: Terror by LarrySun(m): 4:22pm On Jul 05, 2015|
One of the shortest stories I've ever read.
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 4:51pm On Jul 05, 2015|
LarrySun:Wow! Look who we have here!
Bless my soul!
Thanks for stopping by!
|Re: Terror by Onemansquad(m): 7:40pm On Jul 05, 2015|
Kitme:oga/madam oya go redraft dis into a blockbuster we are waiting
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 8:58am On Jul 06, 2015|
Onemansquad:*sighs* i've been super busy tho...i wl continue,bt patience z d key.
|Re: Terror by benzics(m): 4:22pm On Jul 11, 2015|
Hey @Kitme I've been following your literal pieces recently and I must say "You are so good"
Would you mind if I republished your pieces on my blog? I promise to keep your authorship....
|Re: Terror by valmunich(m): 12:41am On Jul 15, 2015|
Hmmm. . . Who would've thought you write this good??
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 5:44am On Jul 15, 2015|
valmunich:That's the way it is na
I'm still improving.
Good to know, you do read stories here!!
|Re: Terror by Divepen1(m): 7:01am On Jul 15, 2015|
|Re: Terror by valmunich(m): 7:27am On Jul 15, 2015|
Kitme:I just started reading recently
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 10:53pm On Aug 10, 2015|
benzics:Go ahead, sorry it's coming late, I just saw it now.
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 10:55pm On Aug 10, 2015|
|Re: Terror by theorbiters: 12:16am On Aug 11, 2015|
The end kor, the end ni...
You see fa, you had better continue..
|Re: Terror by Kitme(f): 4:43pm On Aug 11, 2015|
theorbiters:Holy Hermit!.......Pity me nao
Thanks for stopping by.
|Re: Terror by Nobody: 10:27am On Aug 14, 2015|
kitme,how can I punish you for not inviting me oo? I don't have an idea.. Anyways,you did a good job like you always do
|Re: Terror by Rajosh(m): 6:28am On May 26, 2016|
I'm so following.
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