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Sentimental by lekkimania(m): 3:58pm On Dec 19, 2006
yes deep inside
i want to be the best
at the forefront of virtue
making other happy sharing their pains

so i open up
and that is where
i become vulnerable
many people want me squeezed

into their
mold of what they think
i should be
its true i want to touch others

to help ease their strains
but still i want to be me
no pretense no shades no greys
plain and simple doesnt mean feeble

i will never lose my identity
the core of my personality
i aspire to be a better soul
But still i want to be me

so whats my choice
i open up my heart
knowing i may get hurt
Touch their lives anyway

Moving forward
stepping ahead
the scars on my heart
are my testimony

They dont change
my identity
who i am, what i am
i want to be me
Re: Sentimental by nkechy: 8:36am On Dec 20, 2006
thanks for this, same here for me
Re: Sentimental by lekkimania(m): 5:42pm On Dec 20, 2006
thanks nkechy i am happy i found someone who could identify with my simple poem
Re: Sentimental by Yusufadeto(m): 9:33am On Jan 03, 2007
Nice poem man, it's nice and its makes alot of sense to me, keep it up check my poems out as well, tell me what u think, i have posted alot, but the one on the front page of this forum is Pain and You, i will like to know about ur opinion becase u know how to write poem averagely as well

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