Sentimental - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| Sentimental by lekkimania(op): 3:58pm On Dec 19, 2006 |
yes deep inside i want to be the best at the forefront of virtue making other happy sharing their pains so i open up and that is where i become vulnerable many people want me squeezed into their mold of what they think i should be its true i want to touch others to help ease their strains but still i want to be me no pretense no shades no greys plain and simple doesnt mean feeble i will never lose my identity the core of my personality i aspire to be a better soul But still i want to be me so whats my choice i open up my heart knowing i may get hurt Touch their lives anyway Moving forward stepping ahead the scars on my heart are my testimony They dont change my identity who i am, what i am i want to be me |
| Re: Sentimental by nkechy: 8:36am On Dec 20, 2006 |
thanks for this, same here for me |
| Re: Sentimental by lekkimania(op): 5:42pm On Dec 20, 2006 |
thanks nkechy i am happy i found someone who could identify with my simple poem |
| Re: Sentimental by Yusufadeto(m): 9:33am On Jan 03, 2007 |
Nice poem man, it's nice and its makes alot of sense to me, keep it up check my poems out as well, tell me what u think, i have posted alot, but the one on the front page of this forum is Pain and You, i will like to know about ur opinion becase u know how to write poem averagely as well |