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Broken by Minabee(op): 4:07pm On Nov 16, 2017
I’ve been wanting to write for a long while, I just don’t know what exactly to pen down. I have a couple of things going through my mind but I don’t even know where to start.

BROKEN

"Don’t try to fix me,
I’m not broken."
Those are your words
But it ain’t true.
I see brokenness in you,
In your every move.
Give me the chance,
Let me fix you.
Let me re-engineer you.
Let me pull you down,
Brokenness and all,
And build you from scratch.
Give me the chance,
Let me remould you,
Back into the what you used to be,
with some improvements.
Help me,
To mould you into a loving being.
Help me,
To fix the brokenness within.

MINA BEE. #randomthoughts
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Re: Broken by Ajebusta(m): 4:12pm On Nov 16, 2017
Its not bad
Re: Broken by Minabee(op): 4:59pm On Nov 16, 2017
Ajebusta:
Its not bad
thanks, written in the spur of the moment.
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