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For The Pen by zanieike: 6:34pm On Oct 06, 2019
The pen is my best friend during my sad days
It lets me pour down my thoughts
It knows the rot in my saddened soul
So it anchor my sanity like a captain
Sailing to keep me from the
Claws of depression
With each word I write I feel alive
Like a fish in this ocean of anguish
Swimming to happiness
©zanieike

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Re: For The Pen by scarphase(m): 7:16am On Nov 14, 2019
Nice!!
I get turned on when through my actions and thoughts, the pen romances the paper!
Nice poetry. You are not alone in the thoughts

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Re: For The Pen by zanieike: 9:04pm On Nov 15, 2019
Thank you
scarphase:
Nice!!
I get turned on when through my actions and thoughts, the pen romances the paper!
Nice poetry. You are not alone in the thoughts
Re: For The Pen by noble4d(m): 6:45pm On Nov 30, 2019
zanieike:
The pen is my best friend during my sad days
It lets me pour down my thoughts
It knows the rot in my saddened soul
So it anchor my sanity like a captain
Sailing to keep me from the
Claws of depression
With each word I write I feel alive
Like a fish in this ocean of anguish
Swimming to happiness
©zanieike

Good job bro but it'll be lovely if you structure your poem to be: 1 couplet, 1 quatrain and 1 tercet. There is a run on line in line 4,5,6

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Re: For The Pen by zanieike: 3:23pm On Dec 02, 2019
noble4d:


Good job bro but it'll be lovely if you structure your poem to be: 1 couplet, 1 quatrain and 1 tercet. There is a run on line in line 4,5,6
ok. Thanks for the review. I appreciate

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