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Exact location
Title
Size of the land
More pics
Can the price be negotiated ?

This advert needs to be "restructured " just like Nigeria. It needs some help.


Now lets get down to business.

Headline is not appropriate also not enough to draw attention. ..


No need to issue a warning from the headline instead state a benefit.

Like:

"buy this property and secure your financial future"

Or

"Enjoy attractive returns on investment"

"An opportunity to invest in the fastest developing area in Nigeria "


A benefit will do you more good than a warning in a headline.

Description is too weak for a property advert.

Location is too vague. It should state the exact place like Eleko, Lakowe, Sangotedo, etc

Whats the size of the land and type of structure on the land?

What exactly is the title document available? Is it C of O, Registered survey, Governors concent, etc


This advert is too weak to sell a property.

Wish you luck..