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HEY! nairalanders, i need as many people as can be to please coment on my poem: Dont Push Me Away. Until i get some criticism i wont post any other poem

DON'T PUSH ME AWAY

Don't push me away
Make room for a soul in need
Allow my courage to give way
To that innate desire to procreate
For i'm pregnant with words
And i must sing them loud for the world

Don't condem me
Though my way's repugnant to thee
And you want to write me off
The way prudent farmers write off
Their flu infected poultries
Take a deep look, you might think otherwise

Don't push me away,please!
Let me show you i'm worthy
That you needn't have your door close
But open to me yours dearly
Let me show you a priceless treasure
In me that'll forever endure