Fmartin:
wow! Dis needs celebration its good to be back bro.

Fmartin:
wow! Dis needs celebration its good to be back bro.

Fmartin:
wow! Dis needs celebration its good to be back bro.

i appreciate

Evajeal Its Been Lungtyme to hear 4rm yu! creativity is yhu! nice piece, just started readin it tho

boffinjay:
welcum bak.dz z gonna b an interesting piece.nimiwrites,shewrites,hadampson,ikombe,wisolzy,adesina12,alamiendagash.kindly invijte d rest

I'm Finally Bck.
Hadampson Fmartin Stephengee Where Oll At?

ghostwritter:
I like what I had read but pls improve on ur tenses, your conversational quotes, ur suspence, reduce the unecessary vocabularies and most of all make ur story captivating with every post. Readers get bored if stories lack all the above...I dey ur back.

OK Boss
I really appreciate your support
thanks a lot
I'll try harder

Blecool:
Following bumper to bumper... But can u please break down some of u grammar ehn. I dnt have to read dis wit a dictionary na(smile). Nice story u gat here

thanks dear
I appreciate but please stop flattering me

adontcare:
Thank God for husyne's life. Well great story line. But some places u used past tense instead of present continuous tense.

thanks a lot
I'll work on it.

LarrySun:
I'm trying my best, sir. Thanks for following...against all odds.

is OK boss
you're one in a million

HbD bro wllp #latepost

by all Indication Steve is the devil wearing okrika nice nice story you got here boss

by all Indication Steve is the devil wearing okrika nice nice story you got here boss

Akinwale14:
AlamienDagash I must confess this story is wonderful and interesting,,,more update pls

thanks mehn

Part Three


Hasan has already loathe his bro acutely, he was in his new bedroom entrusted to him by his uncle, nuhuh tries his best to exhilarates him, but the more he try the more hasan became morose.
HUSAYN
Its been a month now, Husayn has suffered a lot, he'd encounters with many ordeal, he is livid with life, he is no longer ecstatic, to cover up, he took an oath upon himself that he'll always be staunched and honest, maybe God will consider him and forgive his brother, he has berserk a lot now is time to desists it, he had to let the past be.

“he is so pang as he lurched into the market, everything now seem to exist multiple, “ your brother killed your parents, it was by accident, you got to run, run! This echoed to him and he faint.
Husayn opened his eyes slowly as snail walk, he was at someone's home, two people are looking at him, he shook his head to see clearly but immediately he feels a severe pain in his head, he feel a bandage wrapped round his head. “easy you don't need to worry said a feminine voice he rubs his eyes and could see a woman and beside her was a man looking sympathetic. He sighed a heavy relief and closed his eyes.

****** ****** ******

Husayn was in uncle John trade shop,regularly husayn and John would went to the market in the morning and came back at noon, husayn was always ambidextrous, he dare not to be dire in working cuz he don't want to be a nuisance to his saviour.
Husayn was resting in the shop, at the context some lousy men barged in whistling, he wishes no strife will arise but he was left stunned and perplexed over what his bare eyes witnesses.

Thanks for reading.

hormobolanle:
hmmmmm some people will just be finding for trouble
not bin in d mood to read all dis while Daz y it seems like am not online n now I kn av got alot of catching up to do

princ007 happy birthday in arrears Llnp

alamiendagash am kinda confuse o it is one of d twin dat kill d parent Abi uncle?cos Iyam not understanding

Na dem uncle
Buh the uncle lied and tell hasan that his bro killed em parents and run away and said same to husayn

stephenGee12:
Wow nice one man. Keep it up. But u need to work on ur quotations. So we can knw who is talking.


Keep it up bro. We gat ur back

thanks bro will work on it.

stephenGee12:
Wow nice one man. Keep it up. But u need to work on ur quotations. So we can knw who is talking.


Keep it up bro. We gat ur back

thanks bro will work on it.

stephenGee12:
Wow nice one man. Keep it up. But u need to work on ur quotations. So we can knw who is talking.


Keep it up bro. We gat ur back

thanks bro will work on it.

stephenGee12:
Wow nice one man. Keep it up. But u need to work on ur quotations. So we can knw who is talking.


Keep it up bro. We gat ur back

thanks bro will work on it.

stephenGee12:
Wow nice one man. Keep it up. But u need to work on ur quotations. So we can knw who is talking.


Keep it up bro. We gat ur back

thanks bro will work on it.

adontcare:
If dis happened in Moscow, the police are smart to note the time of death of d couples. Well nice write

naso oo
but what bout our naija police

hadampson princ007 deji124 souloho19 update don land

souloho19:
Boss man...the running vampire I'm present bro

thanks boss
NB: in here devils wear Gucci↕↕

Beyond The Closed Doors
Part two


The identical twins were at their class during the break time playing a game called "thief and police" if I'm a thief and you're a cop, will you ever in your life arrest me? Husayn asked his brother, " never! Remember dad used to tell us to be saviour of each other , hasan replied. They played their game peacefully without the knowledge of the outbreak at home.

It was 12:30pm, the school hours was over, as usual hasan and husayn trek back to home since the school wasn't far away from their home, as the duo headed home, husayn has a scuffle with someone, "I'll kill that boy if he dare to set in my way stated angry husayn. " how many times did mom told you not to be using "killl" when speaking, fighting is not the way out, better calm down or otherwise I'll let mom know what occurred today as soon as we reached home. Hasan was completely wrong, he'll never again had the chance to tell her neither will have the chance to advice his bro.

Hasan you're not a woman but you gossip like one, sometimes I wonder why and how you became my twin brother, look don't irritate me more, husayn said and walk ahead so as to reach home first and cover up.

Minutes later, hasan reached home, he was perturbed, his two uncle and a policeman " oh! Hasan you're back said nuhuh (his uncle) what happens uncle, why are you crying? Your.. Yo..your brother killed your parents and run away!! What!? Asked hasan as he jerked at abrupt, his feet become feeble to carry him, his body turned cool as snow in Moscow, he remembered once , their mom was scolding husayn said if he continue to say he'll kill someone, one day he'll surely kill her too, his world is ruined, no dad no mom,can't bear it! His uncle Ammar shedding crocodile tears allays him, " uncle nuhuh will take care of you,don't cry my boy... As Ammar continue to console him, he started seeing everything blurry and vaguely enough he fainted out.


HUSAYN
Husayn trudge into a bustling market, he is too obsessed "how could hasan murder our parents, but uncle Ammar told me it was by accident, then why would the police scour hoping to caught me? Just because we look alike or what? This question keeps running up and down in his tiny childish brain, but no! They haven't hit the nail on his head, they did this to antagonize him against his own brother, now that he is in between the devil and the deep blue sea, he couldn't cease to wish he can revert one day ago, he would've walk home with his bro, but now since yesterday, the thought of his family was the only thing his mind set upon.

The sun was now fully set, he was inconvenient now, the thought on where to sleep began, he looked at every direction hoping to find a roof to rest his head under, but reverse was the case, he's so depressed that he settled himself under a table and doze off.

Thanks for reading

Deji124:
nice story u got here man oya pls come and continue,

thanks mehn

Princ007 where are you tho

lemme call the people which without them literature would've been a dull and pale place to visit
they are one big family
modified: we are one big family!

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Beyond The Closed Doors
..Part one..


It was a lull Monday morning, Dr Zayyan was in his car with his two ever lovingly twins, the sun haven't gleam yet, it was the year 2000.
Sons, you are in your final year in primary, you've to be more attentive in class said Dr Zayyan as he beam looking at his beautiful identical twins. "Ok Dad we won't let you down we promise hasan said. By the way may I ask you a question? Sure son as he gestures, what's your greatest wish? " my Paramount wish is to establish hospitals in all over the thirty six states we have, both kids are absorbed of the aim of their
Dad in life.

Dr Zayyan bade farewell to his kids after dropping them off at the gate of their school, hasan and husayn hold each others' hand as they walk, there father hopes to see the day they grow up holding hands without a bit of strife, but reverse was the case, the future folds different destiny for them,if he had known, he should've seek a clairvoyant knowledge to cognizes him about his two kids, maybe he might be able to alter some dilemma to be happened but fate always make its way despite the obstacles.

Dr Zayyan was halfway to his office when he remembered that he had forgotten his eyeglasses, but had he known what his bare eyes will witnesses, he would've have cease using eyeglasses for his entire life.

Dr Zayyan reached his house, he horns continuously but neither the gateman nor his wife were to be found, so he switch off his car and steps out, as he walked into the house, he saw Ammar (his younger brother) coming towards him. “good morning sir" said Ammar, "morning , how are you, hope everything is good? Wait! Where are you going Ammar said as he sees his brother walking towards the closed doors that contain covert not to be unveils to any organism be it plant or animal, " what kind of question is this? I'm walking through my house and you're asking! Dr Zayyan has smelled the rat, something in the atmosphere feels eccentric, but it is too late for Ammar to stop his brother for he has already see damp of blood in his wife shoe, abruptly he become perplexed yasira! Yasira! He keeps shouting his wife's name hoping to see her hale and healthy but had he known, he shouldn't waste his voice, because corpse doesn't hear nor can they talk.

He try to restraint himself but as his eyes witness the greatest shock of his life, how gruesomely his wife is in blood, he become more devastated and bewildered, what have you done Ammar? Gateman! Gateman! Dr Zayyan shouted but it was too late as "gateman" was the last word he utters before he was been sent to the land of the dead too, before he gave up the ghost, his twins was the last image that evoked to him.

thanks for reading

Beyond The Closed Doors
..Part one..


It was a lull Monday morning, Dr Zayyan was in his car with his two ever lovingly twins, the sun haven't gleam yet, it was the year 2000.
Sons, you are in your final year in primary, you've to be more attentive in class said Dr Zayyan as he beam looking at his beautiful identical twins. "Ok Dad we won't let you down we promise hasan said. By the way may I ask you a question? Sure son as he gestures, what's your greatest wish? " my Paramount wish is to establish hospitals in all over the thirty six states we have, both kids are absorbed of the aim of their
Dad in life.

Dr Zayyan bade farewell to his kids after dropping them off at the gate of their school, hasan and husayn hold each others' hand as they walk, there father hopes to see the day they grow up holding hands without a bit of strife, but reverse was the case, the future folds different destiny for them,if he had known, he should've seek a clairvoyant knowledge to cognizes him about his two kids, maybe he might be able to alter some dilemma to be happened but fate always make its way despite the obstacles.

Dr Zayyan was halfway to his office when he remembered that he had forgotten his eyeglasses, but had he known what his bare eyes will witnesses, he would've have cease using eyeglasses for his entire life.

Dr Zayyan reached his house, he horns continuously but neither the gateman nor his wife were to be found, so he switch off his car and steps out, as he walked into the house, he saw Ammar (his younger brother) coming towards him. “good morning sir" said Ammar, "morning , how are you, hope everything is good? Wait! Where are you going Ammar said as he sees his brother walking towards the closed doors that contain covert not to be unveils to any organism be it plant or animal, " what kind of question is this? I'm walking through my house and you're asking! Dr Zayyan has smelled the rat, something in the atmosphere feels eccentric, but it is too late for Ammar to stop his brother for he has already see damp of blood in his wife shoe, abruptly he become perplexed yasira! Yasira! He keeps shouting his wife's name hoping to see her hale and healthy but had he known, he shouldn't waste his voice, because corpse doesn't hear nor can they talk.

He try to restraint himself but as his eyes witness the greatest shock of his life, how gruesomely his wife is in blood, he become more devastated and bewildered, what have you done Ammar? Gateman! Gateman! Dr Zayyan shouted but it was too late as "gateman" was the last word he utters before he was been sent to the land of the dead too, before he gave up the ghost, his twins was the last image that evoked to him.

Be aware...
no part of this story should be copied or reproduced in any form without the author's permission. allright reserved Alameen Dagash 2017.

as an amateur writer sensible criticism is highly welcomed here.

this is a pure fiction story inspired by myself.

WOW

the most complicated
the most twisted
the most awesome
the most suspense
the most supernatural story I've ever read on nairaland
Ghostwriter you are indeed a Ghost-writer
hope update go gleam soon

queenitee, hadampson no thanks to you all as for you've been enjoying this immense story without been able to invite me over.


........AWESOME..........