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The first sentence of your essay is extremely important: it can create a positive or negative impression in the mind of the marker. Something you should definitely not do at the beginning of an essay is to just repeat or paraphrase the title. Try to say something which shows why your essay is important – to explain its rationale. Another strategy is to actually write your introduction last (rather than first). Often this will result in an introduction which is clearer and easier to follow.


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