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This aint no battle its woman rights [B]VIOLATION[/B]
thinking i'll go soft for a woman [B]ANNIHILATION[/B]
forget the [B]SEX[/B],my flows the [B]BEST[/B]
Bleep this bitch up like it [B]TERMINATOR { III } [/B]
Bleep her up like i'm her [B]VIBRATOR[/B]
m'above this pussy like her [B]CLITORIS[/B]
My bars got her bleeped up like l'ma [B]POLICE[/B]
if u [B]NOTICED[/B],she rhyme dumb,cuz she's a [B]NOVICE[/B]
but i gat more lines on my head like a [B]DREAD-LOCK[/B]
no prayer granting now,cuz battling me is [B]DEAD-LUCK[/B]
won't Bleep this bitch even if she gat gold coins in her [B]PUSSY[/B]
give her the middle finger so that will get her [B]PUSSY BUSY[/B]
SHE RHYMES LIKE A BUM SHE PROBABLY LOOKS LIKE THIS
http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m167/johnstona_2006/fat-woman.jpg

We'll use this as one of our rules for our tourny

Sign up either as a
1.text battler
2.Audio battler
3.Beat Battler
4.As a judge -we need 25 judges or more

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1. Darequam
2. Frijos

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1.text battler
2.Audio battler
3.Beat Battler
4.As a judge -we need 25 judges or more

All Query will be settled here,and i'll post the rules and regulation in this thread soon.

Set up a battle thread let me ya beef raw , dumb asss

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Am done with m.i,his single is a flop,his album will get no fluck on high sales,LD is gone auto tune lame,wats up,i think now is the best time to gain entrance into the main stream,this december my mix tape would be out.

sinistyle:
@ baudex
my e mail is ogbeboru@yahoo.com. Send me your MI diss track.

check my signature,follow the link and download it from sharemobile.ro u can search upload there too,just search of Baudex
Thanks

Why must i spit 1st,accept the challenge and lets rumble,i don't know u don't know me thats fair,so we both ve equal advantage,it looks like u're a rookie,so i need a better worthy challenges

You lost bro even thats after ya first drop when u replied my verse,u dropped 1st and i dropped mine,u don't need to feed on my shiit,read the rules on the 1st post,its says no feeding,replying,switching,and biting and re-cycling of any means
u broke more than 2rules u even replied with my verse,u lost this one bro-bye

Just got back from PH last 3weeks and i head down to ghana now am back lets do this any worthy person please come correct and don't disappoint me or ya self lol

[B]Oh my God
Oh my God
Oh my God[/B]
he's taking things personal,
well,go ahead cry about it like a baby,like give a bleep
[B]RESPONSE;-
Oh my God
Oh my God
I DON'T DO THIS BUT,FOR U, LOL lets go, , [/B]
Always remember yo mum's a [B]whoree[/B]
next time u come battle [B]-or[/B]
i ma continue to brake ya heart into[B]-4[/B]

smash it to d[B]-floor[/B]-N-throw ya corpse out-d[B]-door
baby boy[/B],this's the street
and the only rules i know is [B]"NO RULES!"[/B]
i don't [B]slack[/B],i stay [B]tight-N-i never loose[/B]
i [B]win,win,and win[/B] again cuz my type never [B]lose
SO NO MORE LECTURES-NOW-ITS ASSS WHOPPING

fucck[/B] this internet shiit,lets get on d [B]streets[/B]
when only pressing those phone pads brings u [B]heat[/B]
then to a [B]street monk[/B] like me,u're a sure [B]meat[/B]
cuz i [B]punch[/B] out ya sight like a [B]broken television[/B]
blood coming out ya nose like its [B]Blood transmission[/B]
u niggaz re just like [B]M.I[/B],mummy boy screaming [B]"somebody wants to die"[/B]
give him my [B]address[/B] tell him i ma [B]kill u both lyrically and physically
book wise,street wise,thats mathematicaly and mouthimatical[/B]
kill u both on [B]beats and on acapella[/B]
gat ya [B]mamas dancing to-it like mandella[/B]
cuz u can't get it [B]IN[/B],u need a double u[B](W)[/B] to make a [B]WIN[/B]
U need to be [B]S[/B]pecial-N-[B]P[/B]owerful to make a [B]S-P-IN[/B]
acting like u hard,contest [B]me?,Better mello G[/B]

before ya body gets [B]hollowed in[/B]
looking likka costume 4 [B]halloween[/B]

leaving ya face pale like [B]iodine[/B]

04ka told me u a 16yrs,kid jiggalo,bleep fat girls 4 [B]candy[/B]

he also showed me her pics,this's it her name is [B]mandy[/B]
https://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m167/johnstona_2006/fat-woman.jpg
Mandy

yo i run a battle directory on www.battlersblackbook.com and i ve nairaland on my list as the best battle site online, so i wish to uphold a poll, like a survey to know the best to everyones rating of memeber battlers,
i was breded here since the time hip hop ave so chcek the site www.battlersblackbook.com for your site and battlers profile and ratings

he stole that song

Yeah i agree but remove morechedda she's fake,just like her hair-wig

I need a piece of this meet 1st,promise not to make a bloody mess out of this meal lol
lets in biitch anytime any day

Votes please

So Lets the votes come now lol

[CENTER] Am taking out [B]sini-style[/B] out wit a [B]free-style[/B]
with in[B]saning-style[/B],i throw punches,jet [B]lee-style[/B]
cuz ya bars aint [B]hard[/B],they [B]soft[/B] like [B]cookie-bars[/B]
u so [B]retard[/B],ya [B]loft[/B] spit to me re all [B]rookie-bars[/B]
u might just [B]bomb[/B] ya self,just to [B]blow up[/B]
cuz i'ma win u anytime even if i don't [B]show up[/B]
cuz i don't ve to [B]defeat[/B] this biitch,cuz he [B]spits-lame[/B]
but my lips is [B]hot red[/B] cuz i [B]spit-flame[/B]
so i [B]spit hot shiits[/B],that gets ya [B]ears-burn[/B]
like [B]spiderman[/B],i web u like u [B]Huz-born[/B]
u're ya mothers [B]first-born[/B],but she [B]bleeps me[/B] like am her [B]Huz-band[/B]
[B]*read this[/B]
-u can't drop hot shiit even if [B]u-sit-on-a-stove[/B]
u can't spit on me even if [B]u-spit-from-above[/B]
i bring [B]heat to ya beef[/B] and make me a [B]barbe Q[/B]
bring all ya crew,a make a [B]double-queue[/B]
i'll take all ya camp out like a [B]camp-fire[/B]
and bring up the heat-wave like an [B]amp-li-fier[/B]
u're not sick,not to talk of [B]being-ill[/B]
u're just sad-sick cuz am [B]really-real[/B] and i out-shine ya [B]killing-skill[/B]
[/CENTER]

Let him check 1st,that means he has to agree to the 1st post,and the battle starts,a free style will kill him 4sure

U want a battle u already got it
www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-403496.0.html#msg5574977
check in lets battle

All those people who say M.I is nigerias best rapper,
he's wack,he's getting fat,he steals lyrics,he repeats lyrics,steal songs eg save and that song with pype,that song originally belongs to pype

Posted by Sinistyle -
will really like to battle you
so you kno wat it feels like
to be on the war front. I'M
THE BEST!!
!
10bars,no biting,recycling,feeding and replying to verse,no rematch.
First 3votes is a k.o and 4-1 is a Technical k.o [ Tko ]
Check and lets begin

Boy its just practise and understanding of the art

Multies are highlighted. Say the syllables, rhyme ya syllables. Its tough but once you grasp it you’ll always use them,
EDIT: I don't wanna go too technical cuz Kryps gonna drop a detailed explanation.


[B][U]Rhyme Schemes[/U][/B]

I like to switch up my rhyme schemes, in some battles where I don’t care I will have a really weird one. But most battlers like to do this sort of rhyme scheme:

multi shitblahmotherfuckhashit multi
multi shitblahmotherfuckashit multi.

Some people switch it up and do shit like:

Multie motherfuckershitblah Multi
shitbitchfucknutchaplainshit Multi
shit bitch multi shitbtich multi
multi blahblahblahblahblah multi

Once you grasp multie concepts you’ll know how to have a different rhyme scheme. My advice is stick with the first one for a bit, then when you wanna switch it up, do so.

[B][U]FLOW[/U][/B]

Don’t need to be a genius to flow ya shit, just keep it short and sweet if you can. If you wanna go for long bars, add long multies because they help ya flow. If you wanna guarantee a good flow just write to a beat. Some people doubleup their lines which stetches the hell out of the bars. Try and keep ya shit readable, imagine its a track if you must. Obviously it doesn’t have to flow like a track on text, but it does make a better read if ya flows good.

[B][U]PERSONALS[/U][/B]

Personals in battles deliver STING. You got shit on ya opponent and you can kill him, its ya weapon. Diss your opponent, its the main focus of the battle, diss his looks, his email, his name, his job, anything for a stinging punchline.


Bleep Ya’ll Wack sons, seen tougher blood lines on the stains on a tampon
Punch all three of ya chins ‘live, lookin’ like Eric Cartman with shades and a rag on

A punch at Alive, I had a picture. Diss his face. Raw, but its a battle.


[B][U]PUNCHLINES:[/U][/B]

To me, THE MOST IMPORTANT aspect of a battle, you can come weak with multies and flow, but if the punch hits me, then you’ve won me over.
Punchlines no doubttt require a high level of creativity. Everything these days is played, examples of played shit is:
[I]
I’M ILL LIKE CANSER
I’m dope like coke
You couldn’t de-feat me if you chopped my leg off,
You like 7 days, you two weak.
Couldnt come before me if you pre-jacked.
punches miss like armless boxers, [/I]

Shit like that, obvious shit is alllllll wack and won’t get you votes.

To make a punchline, think of a concept, and work with it. For example, I wanna say a guys flow is wack as hell. Try think of something relating to flow, like, catching a beat? flow/catching a beat, catching involves throwing, so you could make:

[I][COLOR="DimGray"]"Flows weak, couldn't catch a beat if I through it at ya"[/COLOR][/I]

Simple and effective. Try thinking ya own concepts, think of something, make it relate to the opponent, lyrically/personally, and play around with words/phrases!

Heres an example of my OWN and OTHER battler punches off the Illest punch thread:

[B]Kryptic Vs. , [/B]
[COLOR="DimGray"]
These two only made the finals through DQ's and no shows, I'm 'sick-of-you-light-dudes-in-text'.
I'm 'depicting-how-dyke-noobs-progress' cause we all *saw their "L" from the beginning* like 'predicting-a-knights-move-in-chess'![/COLOR]
[B]
Dope Antelope Punch Against Philly Bone[/B]

[COLOR="DimGray"]You lost from the get go, belts? You were lucky to get those
ya 'partner held you up before you entered', like 'carrying a bride into the threshold[/COLOR]
[B]
Dope Antelope's vs Dice[/B], haha sorry I gave up searching other verses,

[COLOR="DimGray"]I impair dudes, proves that this phony clowns a flop
Cuz playing Monopoly’s the only time you see Dice rolling down the block[/COLOR]

A few of more of my own:
[COLOR="DimGray"]
And yo, P.I wouldn’t be “fly on the beat” if a “wasp landed on his drumkits
Cunt lick, couldn’t win a tourney at an auction for lawyers, dumb shit

Your bars stretch like Elastic Penetentiarys, but all mine are ruthless
Ya wack shit aint testin me, people laugh when you spit like IndecentStar Bloopers[/COLOR]


[U][B]ORIGINALITY.[/B][/U]
Easy and simple subject, just don’t use played shit. Think, if its likely to be used it has been. Think outside the box, come original.

I couldn't fit the Commandments cuz I wrote too much. They follow in the next post,
Coming soon
Baudex

YEAH I HAD TO GO FARTHER DISTANCE TO GET THIS,NOW I 'VE IT SO READ AND LEARN,AND ADMIN PLEASE STICK THIS,SO COMING NEWLY REGISTERED MEMBERS WILL GET THIS MATERIAL

[B][U]
Introduction[/U][/B]

First of all. Why read what I’mma put out there? Why listen to a nigga named drugs Antelope? Ignore the name, I’ve been battling for years and elevated with the help of others, this a bible for new cats to read, just to help you elevate, get better, read the Bible and learn from it yo.

[B][U]Structure[/U][/B]

To some people this poo is important. Havin a good structure improves the readability of ya drops, makes it more cleaner adding punctuation and structuring your wording correct so its freeflowing and not stretched. The most basic bit of advice I can give is keep ya syllables in the bars the same, when you advance you can get away with doing different structures but for a basic, readable structure, make ya lines equal length or near enough.

[COLOR="Red"]Baudex®™ spitting sick anecdotes hes emphatic yo
Sling puns like catapults n leave ya maggots soaked.[/COLOR]
Near enough.

[B][U]WORDPLAY[/U][/B]

Wordplays important, its a technical aspect in writtens that shows creativity. Mostly based on words, associating them with things. It can be double meanings of words, makin words mean different things, it’s basically just a play on words. You’ll catch me using wordplay A LOT.

Example:

[COLOR="Red"]I’mma make you 8-5/ate five like eating half a 10 slice Pizza
Lines get more Nose/no’s than Pinnochio
Couldn’t win a tourney/attorney at an auction for lawyers.[/COLOR]

This is Double meaning wordplay. It’s also just a matter of getting words that sound like eachother and connecting them to a punch.

Other types of wordplay include slicing/combining words to mean something else. Example:

[COLOR="DimGray"]You fail in this con-test like Convicts takin S.A.T.s
Con-test/contest. Con/test convict/s.a.ts
Couldn’t make a class-sick spreading swineflu in highschool.
Classic/class sick.[/COLOR]


It's a tough category to master, but once you get used to it, you’ll be using wordplay in everyday life just to make a punchline.

[B][U]Set Ups[/U][/B]

Set ups are important to some people, unimportant to others. Some people just use their set ups as filler, a bunch of multies, then a punch. Like:

Against someone called I-Rhyme

[COLOR="DimGray"]Rhymes raw, lines concernin ya and my rhymes transforming ya
, i aint an optometrist but i can still see I/eyes cornia/cornier[/COLOR].

This is a wack set up, the first line doesn’t relate to the punch. Now, in battles it doesn’t have to relate, but it helps you look stronger. The bar overall blends nicer if you relate the content of the punch in ya set up, a little wordplay, or something relating won’t hurt:

[COLOR="DimGray"]Cheesy cat, You my Pupil I see through you, so I'm warnin' ya
and I aint an optomotrist but I can still see that I/Eye's Cornea[/COLOR]

Pupil/see through you/optometrist/eyes cornea. It all relates, gives a stronger presence in the bar.
But like I said it’s all subjective, some battlers like relating it, some just go for random multies, some even add separate wordplay/metaphors in the set up.

[B][U]MULTIES[/U][/B]
See Kryptics multie syllable guide:

These are multiple syllable rhymes. It’s all in the name, all the syllables in the phrase/word gotta rhyme.
The best technique is shown in Kryptics Multi Syllable thread. Kryptic himself will be writing up His Multie Technique manual again since it’s been deleted for some reason, so hold tight, this thread will be edited with his version, But I’ll drop a short explanation of what a Multi actually is for those in a rush.

Multies help ya rhyming look better and actually help ya verse flow even better. Overall, multies are useful for writtens, it helps writers flow cleaner with long words. It’s just a very useful technique.

Examples of 2 syllable Multies:

2 syllablle multies:

[COLOR="DimGray"]Grip gats
naughty woman Slap
Rip Raps[/COLOR]

Check the syllables, naughty woman/grip/rip/slap/gat/rap they rhyme. Say it in a bar using more of the same syllables and check the flow
[COLOR="DimGray"]
Yo I grip gats but ya spits wack so you’ll get naughty woman slapped
and I rip raps but you pricks lack any kind of sick tracks, [/COLOR]

Words/syllables do not have to rhyme perfectly, people have different accents and slurs, but try ya best to make them rhyme as accurately as possible.

Three Syllable multies

Killing drugs
Sick with those
Ripping Folks
Bitches Soaked
Spits will choke

Seperate the syllables, they all roughly rhyme. Spit/diss/rip/sick/ing/with/will/choke/soaked/folks/those/drugs.

[COLOR="DimGray"]I’m ripping folks thinking of Killing drugs my Spits will Choke
Rhymes i’m sick with those and leave all these bitches Soaked.[/COLOR]

Here’s an Example of a Multi Heavy written, Posted by Kryptic:

[I]"walked the path of a 'thousand-enemies', each step all I 'found-were-memories'.
Where anarchy 'surrounded-energies' & allegiant souls were 'bound-to-cemeteries'.
Forgotten soldiers 'blessed-with-death', laying as the fallen, 'left-to-rest'.
In the dense soils 'crest-they-nest', waiting for god to 'attest-their-quest'.
I gaze out at the 'seas-of-legions', bodies cascaded 'deceased-from-bleeding'.
, etc"
Multies are highlighted. Say[quote][/quote]

See whose talking,a common rookie,download the songs and hear me kill him

Set it up let me kill him with ease,he's just a rookie

Download my songs and instrumentals all zipped together,including the said M.I diss,
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Those writings re wack,all of the above,ya lines don't even rhyme.
Let me freestyle to show u wat rhymes re then i'll write out a reply verse to u dumb asss

[CENTER] forget that [U]u physically fat but lyrically[/U] u're a feather [B]weight[/B]
i dropped at [B]eight-[/B]but urs came [B]late[/B],ya lines re [B]outdat[/B]ed like [B]1988[/B]

u [B]dumb-to-see[/B] that am [B]numb-to-feel[/B] emotional cuz i am [B]born-to-kill
naughty bìitch-assed-niggaz[/B],
who [B]sneak-pass-niggaz[/B],just to go [B]snitch-with-d-cops[/B]
am [B]sick-with-d-glocks[/B],but u [B]stick-with-d-ducks[/B],and ya brain [B]leaks-off-my-glock[/B]
and i get ya [B]luck-locked,-u-stocked[/B], in [B]buck-i-buck-this-duck[/B]
and we [U]eat the beef[/U],like [B]we're-vam-pires[/B]
put ya lights out like [B]u're-a-camp-fire[/B]
an turn up the heat like an [B]amp-li-fire[/B]  [COLOR="Blue"] {amplifier} [/COLOR]

and i gat [U]ya mum singing[/U] on my [B]diick[/B]
last [B]week[/B] like some cuck suckin-[B]geek[/B]
[/CENTER]
Bleep this'll be back soon