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Momoh7:
Bros abeg drop am back to back for us

Abi o. This one episode per day dey affect my belle. Chai!
Abeg na Zubi.... the suspense too much o

Youngzubi:
i for like grant ya request

but due to some well arranged and programmed and connected and em!! why i too dey forget grammar but alL i won tell u be say i don put am for mind if any show surface at all,my guy i go halla ya name enter the tori just relax their are still alot of characters to be introduced so relax





TIME IS COMING WHEN I WILL REQUEST FOR PEOPLE NAMES THAT WOULD BE USED TO NAME THOSE BIG MAMA THUGS AND SO ON SO KEEP DROPPING YOUR COMMENTS BECOS THATS THE ONLY WAY I CAN RECOGNISE YOUR NAME AND CHOOSE U

THEN NAME U AFTER ONE OF THEM!,SAME THING GOES TO EVERYBODY WHO WISH TO PARTICIPATE IN THE STORY



STILL YOUR GUY YOUNGZUBI

Wehdonsah! Nice update.
If u dey find name I think sey my own go fit ur tori well well. Afterall na big people with apka-obi dey do bodyguard!

Nna this one go strong o! Abeg no delay with the update this time biko. Gaskiya...E sweet me die!!!

Youngzubi you know sey I like ur tori too much I take Jah beg you. The suspense b4 the next episode dey affect my belle. E go better to wait 2days and get 2 straight episode than one per day or one and half day. Biko kwa!
And again you promise to correct wetin I mention last time. I never see the corrections o. The quotation marks still too much as e dey make me see double begin dey wonder who dey talk.
Good job again

Youngzubi:
@biggaboi

this one is dedicated to u

happy baff day my man

ur mama born beta pikin jare

age wit grace brotherly

Thanks boss! Best birthday wish I had today... and even spiced with another episode!

Youngzubi please gimme another episode na. Bless my birthday which is today!

Youngzubi:
abeg make una no vex as i late today and e come short

nobi my fault o!,today no just give me chance at all,work work work!

I think sey u don go AWOL since wey u give us another episode. But this one short na ... so we go wait another long time for the next one? Choi!

Youngzubi:
u are good man,i have been expecting someone to do some correction

here u are

noted bro
changes begins in next update

thank u again bro

That's because I'm reading every word and even creating a visual image as I read.
I don't photo-read like some.
Let it drop daddy!
I'm hungry for more already!!!!!

Youngzubi:
wow wow wow!

u really got me with this ur comment bro
thank u for your encouragement


thanks for stopping by

You are welcome bros. I only stop when I see a good reason to and I daresay I had more than enough!
You just got yourself a fan sire.
Keep 'em coming (I'm now dreading to see the words "The End")
I might soon be coming on NL just cos this.

Like seriously!
I've been reading lots of literature on NL, most interesting, and never seen the need to drop a comment... until now!
Your imagination is spot on!
Your use of pidgin is quite ingenious.
Your addition of humour laced with flawless warri pidgin english got me cracking that I got passersby looking at like I've loosed some nuts upstairs!
U made my day yesterday when I started now I'm addicted and checking every hour for the next episode!

Put this stuff in print (or a blog) bro. You might make yourself a nice return in cash cos you sure are good.

Modified
Please try using some (,. : in ur write up. And also restrict the (" " where necessary as it makes one wonder who's talking btwn Spana and another person. Good job again