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sophietosyneabou:
very nice n short story..u rwily tried

Thanks very much Sophie..

nikz:
Female pls. Tanx

Oops! My apologies ma'am..
Cheers!!

Anybody still here?

nikz:
Nyce story got me glued to ma fone. Keep it up!

you're welcome bro..

mohdimplez:
Nice story bro. It's interesting and precise. Thumbs up

Thanks man..

Mail sent

LarrySun:
Hello Clemzy16 I need to talk to you about online publication. kindly send me a mail at larrysun4real@yahoo.com. Thanks.

lekinz:
***Runs in ***

I hope I didn't come late ...

***Looks around***, each and every seat had been occupied ...

Clemzy16, abeg shuffle up make I sit down ...

***Chews popcorn**

You're not late at all.. I reserved a seat for you at the front row...

Emmyk:
Nice story there bro.

I actually started reading it yesterday Morning. I had to choose between this story and a series movie yesterday night, I chose this story!!

Wonderful work, brother. You carried the "audience" along and your narrative prowess was/is unrivaled.
Thanks for honouring me by mentioning my name here

Looking forward to reading more stories from you. This is a challenge to me; it's high time I got my pen/keyboard back to work, if you catch my drift.

Gotcha! Odikwa necessary...

Euniz:
Hope am not the last to comment,,, Nice one!!!

Definitely not.. Thanks for reading..

LogoDWhiz:
Nice 1. I saw the comment.

And that's what made to tell you that you didn't eventually dedicate any chapter to me!

My apologies for not making it official..

Clemzy16:
Woah! LogoDWhiz AGAIN!! I dunno if to call you my biggest reader or fan, you somehow manages to comment first in most of my stories since 2012.. Abeg I wan know the baba wey do the jazz for you.. Lol..

The next update is dedicated to you..

cc: LogoDWhiz

LogoDWhiz:
You are welcome.

I said you didn't eventually dedicate any chapter to me

I did. It's in the first comment I posted about you always being the first to comment..

Larryfly:
Its stuck not stucked

Thanks, will correct it now..

Adonis3:
Woooooooooooooooow!!! That's the word.


I'm sorry for not being there to encourage u clemzy16 I really had some impromptu stuffs to clear at the office that swallowed my whole time.

Very brilliant write up, I must confess. More power to your elbow, may the Lord Almighty endow you with divine wisdom from above.

I hope to see you in the nearest future as the next Chinua Achebe, Wole Soyinka, Cyprian Ekwensi.

Go and succeed [size=14pt]My guiyz[/size]


Once again, brilliant write up!




Honestly, same for me. I aint a fan of reading long stories on electronic devices. But this guizzzzz, he got my attention. Even when I was busy, I kept thinking of the story, imagining what'll become of nosa and nancy.

Woahh! To be compared with the likes of Wole Soyinka and Chinua Achebe, what more can I say but a very big Thank you.. I still give the credit to you guys, the readers though...

elantraceey:
present

You're welcome..

anyicaleb:
Jesus!!!! My brother you nailed it. Kept wishing the story never came to an end as it kept me glued to my phone. More wisdom from above I pray for you. God bless you real good. Cheers!!!

Thanks and God bless you too..

chistar01:
Wow... Just wow. Nice piece clemzy!

Oga boss.. You're highly welcome..

pixie3:
Beautiful story..more ink 2 ur pen

Gracias!

LogoDWhiz:
I'm here!

Guess you didn't see my latest mention

I didn't sir.. Thanks once again..

Therock5555:
present sir

His Royal Highness, you're welcome.. We've been expecting you..

LogoDwhiz, elantraceey, emmyk, d9ty7, Therock5555, Chistar01..where art thou?!

Thanks alot..

OnaRegina:
Clemzy!!!!!! I planned to read only up to a certain point then go to sleep and continue later but your story kept me up! Very entertaining, and may I say, very sweet! A feel good story. Everyone loves a happy ending.

Well done bro...

You should consider writing fictional stories for a magazine or paper.

Hmmm... I'll think about that.. But I'm all about my education for now..

ritababe:
Weldone bro

Thanks Rita

Gracito:
Clemzy16, this is great!!!! Keep it up. I love you already

Thanks, and love you right back..

Nancywill:
The all-seeing Country Nigeria...Cross River State Precisely

Alright.. Stay blessed!

Nancywill:
Good to know! That Means You Have To Divert Your Attention From Here To Your Books As Soon As Possible

Exactly!!..where do u base tho..

SaintChukz:
Clemzy16...i must commend your prose writing style which i have noticed to be quite enticing and appealing to say the least, albeit being the eternal critic that i'd always be; i must point out to you that as much as riveting a tale filled with a lot of moral lessons which this particular story provided. You failed to do justice to it by not undoing the areas filled with typos, misspellings or grammatical gaffes, rather it had seemed you rushed through the story in a bid to satisfy the ever insatiable reading public and your nairaland fans.
I'd have been glad to see you do a refinement on this story but then wouldn't that be tantamount to suffocating the excitement and zest that the readers are having on here?
All the same,the commendations are still in line because you have done well by entertaining us this much. And to that i say...more grease to your refillable ink pen/quill. Kudos!

PS: As a kind of notice, though i haven't really been that active on this section of NL,though for the lack of time i'd have been but I plan on putting up a story of my own pretty much soon, so be on the look out for my story in the coming weeks.

Thanks for the corrections, I did my best to correct all errors, but maybe I couldn't spot them all.. I'd love if you can be a bit specific, so that I can go back to rectify them.. Looking forward to reading your story..

Fialm:
Wow,i never knw i could read all but i did,nice write up.Nosa going to prison makes him value Nancy and d daughter.

Yeah! That's why prison is meant for correction...

Alexiz031:
Egbon clems19.kudos to you.dat was a great job from you.I must commend ur effort frm d vry begining of dis gr8 job.You nailed every part of the fictional story.pls notify me wen you wnt to drop another story

No wahala.. Next story coming up later this year...

joefranky:
For the first time in my life, that I'd imagined every scene of a story so real. Nice one Clemzy16.

Jah bless..

Nancywill:
Perfectly Ok. Hope Yu Ain't Bad Yourself?

I'm doin gr8t...preparing to resume school anytime soon..