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Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 2:53pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
starpryde:I should thank you too for reading, and to everyone else who took out time to read this story.. God bless you all... |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nancywill(f): 3:10pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:Irony!!...The Baby That You're Not . Anyways, That's Good To Know...How's The Noon Going? |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Pabloairmar(m): 3:13pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:hmmm,nyc 1 bro 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by tinziemaine(m): 3:18pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Every story line was a hit from pleasure to pain to marriage streeti take ova 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by tinziemaine(m): 3:18pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Every story line was a hit from pleasure to pain to marriage... streeti take ova |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by virtuedagirl(f): 3:20pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16 tanks 4 sharing dis wonderful piece i enjoy every bit of it & i learnt alot. I wish 2 also commend u on how u started & ended dis story within a very short period,d regular updates & everything well done,may God bless& increase u sir. |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 3:21pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Nancywill:Very well my dear, though, I'm not a baby, but I'm not old either... How u doin? |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 3:23pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
virtuedagirl:I'm very honoured ma'am... |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by joefranky(m): 3:29pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
For the first time in my life, that I'd imagined every scene of a story so real. Nice one Clemzy16. |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Alexiz031(m): 3:31pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Egbon clems19.kudos to you.dat was a great job from you.I must commend ur effort frm d vry begining of dis gr8 job.You nailed every part of the fictional story.pls notify me wen you wnt to drop another story |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nancywill(f): 3:33pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:Perfectly Ok. Hope Yu Ain't Bad Yourself? |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nobody: 3:45pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
jacoik:lol seriously? |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 3:55pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Nancywill:I'm doin gr8t...preparing to resume school anytime soon.. |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Fialm: 3:55pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Wow,i never knw i could read all but i did,nice write up.Nosa going to prison makes him value Nancy and d daughter. |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 3:57pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
joefranky:Jah bless.. |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 4:01pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Alexiz031:No wahala.. Next story coming up later this year... |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 4:03pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Fialm:Yeah! That's why prison is meant for correction... |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nancywill(f): 4:05pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:Good to know! That Means You Have To Divert Your Attention From Here To Your Books As Soon As Possible |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by SaintChukz(m): 4:11pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16...i must commend your prose writing style which i have noticed to be quite enticing and appealing to say the least, albeit being the eternal critic that i'd always be; i must point out to you that as much as riveting a tale filled with a lot of moral lessons which this particular story provided. You failed to do justice to it by not undoing the areas filled with typos, misspellings or grammatical gaffes, rather it had seemed you rushed through the story in a bid to satisfy the ever insatiable reading public and your nairaland fans. I'd have been glad to see you do a refinement on this story but then wouldn't that be tantamount to suffocating the excitement and zest that the readers are having on here? All the same,the commendations are still in line because you have done well by entertaining us this much. And to that i say...more grease to your refillable ink pen/quill. Kudos! PS: As a kind of notice, though i haven't really been that active on this section of NL,though for the lack of time i'd have been but I plan on putting up a story of my own pretty much soon, so be on the look out for my story in the coming weeks. |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 4:19pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
SaintChukz:Thanks for the corrections, I did my best to correct all errors, but maybe I couldn't spot them all.. I'd love if you can be a bit specific, so that I can go back to rectify them.. Looking forward to reading your story.. 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Clemzy16(m): 4:20pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Nancywill:Exactly!!..where do u base tho.. |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nobody: 4:21pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:. wow.....too real for a fiction! what a mighty God who gives this kind of knowledge.....oghene doh! 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nancywill(f): 4:31pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:The all-seeing Country Nigeria...Cross River State Precisely |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Jumat08(m): 4:35pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:This really made ma day buddie as it make me stay glued to ma phone,nice write up and God will bless you for this. 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nobody: 4:43pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Wow! What a happy ending. More ink to your pen bro. God bless you for us. 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nobody: 4:44pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16:We are anticipating for it bro. 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by heemah(f): 4:52pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Wow! Wow!I'm happy I followed till d end.. dandypearl, demmy66, donkross1, Sageez , if u are not reading this, you are wrong. Lols 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Gracito(f): 4:56pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16, this is great!!!! Keep it up. I love you already |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by ritababe(f): 5:11pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Weldone bro |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by kindy51(m): 5:29pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16 you be badoo more power to your elbow!!! 1 Like |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by soulminister(m): 5:58pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Clemzy16: Hmmmmmmmm I hear you |
Re: Pleasure And Pain - A Short Story by Nobody: 6:41pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Weldone bro......i kept checkin lit.section cos of ur story.I also love ur consistency.more ink 2ur pen 1 Like |
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