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boluwatifeslick:
Y on earth wld I need novels, dis is so cool

roby20:
Okay had to congratulate the writer on this story, got me to read all in about 30 minutes..... That's how fast I read if a story interests me....
Then to comments on here although biased because the story is about mma I was all for Cynthia tbh, in reality you wouldn't want to share your home with an outsider just because your he goat of a fiance got her preggo so i was in support of all she did to keep her home.....
Although i don't like how the story ended , I hope the man doesnt go ahead to marry mma anyways would be so unfair to Cynthia.

Therock5555:
tanks sir for the caution

doroallen:
thanks. e be like film for my mind. thanks again. Gretta Brooker Palmer says it best - Happiness is a byproduct of an effort to make someone else happy. may happiness always be yours.

Richiy:
Danwrites, I have to admit that this is one beautiful story. More ink to your pen. I truly enjoyed it so much that I had to drop the John Grisham I was reading to finish up this one first. Well done.

kinwayne:
Thanx aqain for qivinq me a listeninq ear.
Earlier on, you mentioned,that the story was'nt qoinq to be used as a full fledqed novel,so i have that in mind and am not referrinq to the short episodes you posted.

Now,what i actually mean is that,after readinq an episode and qoinq to the next one,you left me wonderinq if anythinq had happened before then. I'll qive a practical example: when switchinq between episodes,they should be like puzzles which should be placed and arranqed correctly inorder to qive meaninq to ur readers.

It seemed like in every new episode,you were beqininq an entirely new story,which had no link to this story, but thank goodness for your writinq prowess which masked the some of the stains.

But since you mentioned earlier on that the story was just for entertainment purposes,i believe you made those mistakes intentionally,but if otherwise,i'll challenqe you to improve on how u switch to a new episode on ur future writeups.

God bless you sir.

kinwayne:
u're welcome, you write maturedly and am enchanted by ur writinq prowess. I could vividly see the scenes as they unfolded.

But the only thinq i noticed about your work is that it lacks continuity. If you work better on ur continuity rather than jumpinq from one scene to another,it would really take you places.

#Kudos boss

Jeanfortune:
so u like darling things abi?

kinwayne:
Oga dan!! Kudos to you jawe, i didnt want to comment,but i cant just leave without droppinq a comment. Biq ups to you jare!!

Yudeeaikay:
pls i'ld also love to hv d story too...n i cnt possibly get it thru the above mentioned means....thnks

moseph:
what a lovely ending,kudos dan.

anasbeaut:
Luved it, Luved it, Luved it. It was really nice. I'd luving a sequel sha. Well done Oga Dan

Essyydiamond:
So Mma is already a city girl? I wonder why am not so much at home with a sequel, I think its becuz this Mma's pure heartedness and innocence may be corrupted n those were d things that endeared me 2 her. Forget d sequel, Vanessa shud go sef,afterall Mma will 4give her in the end and not let her suffer 4 her wickedness. That's one thing Mma has too. Mma was really a model.
Danwrites darling,that was a masterpiece,u really gave me a lift,d story ended better than I thought it would.

Feyikemi12:
nice work .....I love this story

morgann:
thats gonna be imposible for me because I dont have an andriod and I dont have a PayPal account

SexySapphire:
I love the way it ended, very realistic buh I won't mind a sequel. Mma can never cease to make me laff, blanberry indeed. Tnx so much DanWrites and I do hope this story wins the comedy award.

Ciela:
Lol. Beautiful nd funny ending. Expectin anoda story frm u soon. Wel done DANWRITES

ezeigbo194:
Wow nice 1 dude

Kassia:
Great work!

Kassia:
Great work!

Queenxstar:
Well nailed Danny. The last update got me laughing hard and long.

Jeanfortune:
na wa o, oga DanWrites, this ur story is sweeting well well, now i understand the clamour for u in the awards sections, u and D9ty7 have so far proved ur writing prowess, ama go check out TemitopeDaniels, he is next on ma list, i hope am not dissappointed.... and did i hear d mention of a sequel, hmmm, i'd like to be carried along if u guys dont mind

kingphilip:
uwc boss

so Wen r u springing up another

Fatalveli:
Nice ending, thumbs up bro.... BTW, when are u starting ur next

candy:
DanWrites, I gbadun this story o! But why you come end am like that na? What happened to Cynthia's pregnancy? Is Mma's fertility still intact? Vanesa n ko? Please don't stop here...

*team MmawedsRichardeventually*

boladex1:
thumb up for you for a good story

weldone dan

Plaitex:
it is no fonno....it is blanberry.lolz. I love this story. Nice ending

kingphilip:
wow danwrites great write up u have here with enough morals do stick to it

BTW awaiting ur nxt

charlala:
God bless u Dan for that wonderful piece!

MhizEnkay:
I love it.. Wetin dem do Vanessa kwanu?

Savigne:
Danwrites first of all i thankig you for this sweet and happying end ooo...but me nor liking the way the story is finishing ooo...may chukwu continue to totori your brain with good ideas,amen....abeg i weeh be very happy if you is planning to writing a sequel oo...my humble submission