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Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 6:46am On Oct 22, 2014

ThaRuthlxx7:
Danwrites i salute u, abeg u try well well.. The story no be food but e sweet.. Chai i go miss my mma ooo... Abeg gimme me her numb?? Abeg ooo

Hahhahha...ok, I will collecting it when next I seeing her and giving you.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 6:45am On Oct 22, 2014

Frosti:
Kudos bro and more ink to your pen. Hope Cynthia did not lose her pregnancy too. Nice finish to a great story.

Thanks, Frosti.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 6:44am On Oct 22, 2014

morgann:
it b like say they want start to dey sell foodstuffs for that house........... chia see lie wen mma lie I thought u were gonna let her tell her mom she was joking no

It was like a revenge.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 6:43am On Oct 22, 2014

grocery:
Good work......kudos

Thanks, Grocery.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 6:43am On Oct 22, 2014

igeog:
Great work... THUMBS UP Bro.

Thanks, Igeog.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 11:30pm On Oct 21, 2014

Trypa:
U are indeed uya dance ur shoki covering my eyes n bending my waist

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 11:26pm On Oct 21, 2014

Trypa:
Dan u would have seen wat I. Would have done to u welldone dear more grease to ur elbow

So I'm safe! *shoki!

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 11:26pm On Oct 21, 2014

Niwdog:
Wht a gr8t finishing.i believing vanessa will be roughting in jail..THANKS DANWRIte

Thanks too, Niwdog.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 11:25pm On Oct 21, 2014

adeh39:
Nice story..... Thanking u for ending d storying dat way. But wait o..... Which tym blanberry foonu come out again? Shebi na blackberry phone we get 4 Nigeria Nice story..... Thanking u for ending d storying dat way. But wait o..... Which tym blanberry foonu come out again? Shebi na blackberry phone we get 4 Nigeria

Hhahahah, ask Mma o!

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 11:24pm On Oct 21, 2014

teamplayey:
Thanks, DanWrites.
Me thinking maybe in future, there's room for a sequel #just thinking.
U married?

Quite possible.
No, not married yet.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 11:23pm On Oct 21, 2014

manuel80:
blanberry

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 11:00pm On Oct 21, 2014

seunviju:
I can't stop lavin @ Mma English but where this story ends nawa o.You did a great work so far.You are blessed with more wisdom in Jesus name.Welldone sir

Amen!!

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 10:59pm On Oct 21, 2014

daveben007:
DAN....... YOU ARE THE FUTURE..... A STAR WRITER n AUTHOR....

So much lessons to learn....

Ofcourse MMA need not marry Richard...love the morals n respect in that...."A man cannot marry two women"

Finally, the village girl survives and now she has a bright future.

Cynthia....Now honourable. I guess change is CONSTANT.

So much Drama......

This work deserves so much PRAISE!!!!

Thanks, Dave.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 10:59pm On Oct 21, 2014

pricelesslove:
what about Vanessa? what about Cynthia?

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 10:58pm On Oct 21, 2014

jaymomma:
Great ending

Thanks!!!

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 10:58pm On Oct 21, 2014

labaski:
ds is really awesome..but e pain me say mma no marry richard sha..but it s stl good..tnks Dan..

Thanks too, Labaski.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 10:25pm On Oct 21, 2014*

A Month Later...

A large beautiful car parked in front of Onyiudo Ekemma's compound.

She lowered her tray of vegetables to the ground and stood up.
She stared at the shiny black vehicle with a tinge of suspicion, as though she was sure they'd lost their way.

A tall handsome man in a fine-tailored suit got down from the driver's side.

A tall slim lady joined him.

The back door opened and another tall but curvier lady joined them.

Onyiudo stared. Everything about the three strangers screamed foreign.

They walked toward her.

Mma took off her dark glasses and called Onyiudo Ekemma Mama.

The knife in Onyiudo Ekemma's hand fell to the floor.

The boy screamed, 'Okwa Nwamma o!' He jumped onto her, paying no care if he soiled her beautiful brown dress.

Mma hugged her small brother again. 'Okey, you have really big o.'

The boy moved in for another hug and she waved a finger at him. 'Mba. Enough is enough.'

'Mama, good evening,' Richard greeted.

'Good evening, Mama,' Cynthia joined.

Onyiudo Ekemma nodded. 'Good evening,' she murmured, still looking lost.

Mma gestured to her brother. 'Oya, rushing and calling me that fat boy you following and playing every time.'

'Izunna.'

'Yes.'

Soon Okechukwu returned with a bigger, taller boy.

One by one, they carried out all the items loaded in the boot of the car.

The rice bags counted six. Four containers of expensive cooking oil. Cartons of Gino, Milo, Peak and St Louis. Uncountable packs of Knorr and other sachet spices.

Onyiudo Ekemma asked Okechukwu and Izunna to bring seats for her visitors.

Even when they'd drove off, she still didn't look quite fully there yet.

She tapped Mma's shoulder. 'Bia, who are they really?'

'Mama that was the man that impregnated me.'

Onyiudo Ekemma's right palm fell over open mouth.

'Yes, Mama.'

'So when is he coming to pay your bride price?'

Mma frowned at her mother. 'He would have but that night you chased me away, I tripped over a root and hit my stomach on the ground.'

'Ekwuzina!'

'Yes, Mama. The baby is gone so no need of him marrying me again.'

Onyiudo Ekemma put her two hands on her head.

Mma opened her handbag and brought out a clean white-colored hand set.

Okechukwu screamed again. 'Foonu! Mama foonu!'

Mma smiled. 'Is not 'f-o-o-n-u', is called blanberry.'

She pressed down a few keys. Something she couldn't read came up on the screen and she quickly pressed the red key.

She knew that one 'ends' everything.

Later that night, Onyiudo Ekemma touched her hair and asked her what she had done to it that made it so long and gentle to touch.

She smiled and told her that it wasn't her hair and that the hair had come from her shop in Lagos.

'Shop?' Onyiudo Ekemma and Okechukwu threw this out at the same time.

'Yes. I having shop in Lagos now. I selling human hair and international human hair.'

'So you are going back to Lagos?'

'Before nko!'

The END

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Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 10:13pm On Oct 21, 2014

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Cynthia writhed this way and that on the floor, clutching her belly.

Vanessa picked the syringe again but this time, she didn't go to Mma.

She walked straight to where Cynthia was squirming in pains on the floor.
'Lemme see if your wedding will be in hell!'

She had leaned over to deliver the injection when the star-producing blow landed on her head.

She slumped to the floor.

'You don't mess with my patients!' Dr Hope dropped the metallic height rod and helped Cynthia up.

She was bleeding.

A nurse guided her away while Dr Hope attended to Mma.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 10:10pm On Oct 21, 2014

Mma felt faint.
She'd completely run out of energy. She felt her body shutting down, her hands clasping Vanessa in the air getting numb.

With one last stroke of energy she knocked the syringe off Vanessa.

The piece fell and skidded down the floor.

Mma opened her mouth to scream but the energy to produce words was not there.

Vanessa groaned in the frustration. She picked the pillow and pressed it down on Mma.

Mma struggled underneath.

Vanessa didn't relent. She held on ever so tightly.

But then, at that one glorious second, the door of the ward flew open and Cynthia rushed through.

Dr Hope had called her. She hadn't waited to hear all the doctor had to say. As soon as she mentioned that her friend dropped by the clinic, she threw the phone aside and ran downstairs.

She didn't drive. She picked a taxi in front of their gate. The hospital was not that far from their residence in Ikeja.

Cynthia flew to the bed and pushed Vanessa off Mma.

Vanessa fell to the floor.

She bent over to make sure Mma was fine. Vanessa grabbed her from the back and threw her off.

Cynthia fell away but she regained her stance quick enough and grabbed Vanessa before she could near Mma again.

They entwined, twisting this way and that in ladies' fight.

Vanessa seemed more experienced.

She pulled at Cynthia's hair, earrings and scratched all around her skin with her long nails.

Cynthia cried out.

A nurse attending to a patient in a nearby ward ran in.

'Oh my god!' The slim nurse ran out again, into the silent hallway, screaming 'Doctor!' 'Doctor!'

As if further enraged by the lady's presence, Vanessa pushed Cynthia forward, away from her, and sent her long heel crashing into her belly.

Cynthia let out a loud cry of pain and fell to the floor.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 4:40pm On Oct 21, 2014

angelliana88:
Dan I haven't o. checked ur blog but its not there. solution to my case pls.....................

You can read it on Okadabooks. I think it's about N150 naira.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 4:38pm On Oct 21, 2014

angelliana88:
3episodes abi 3sentences. lol ,the episodes where really short. hungring for more o boss

Yes...true, those last ones.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 4:37pm On Oct 21, 2014

Bluestarry:
am still very angry o d only u fit appease me na to update naw naw and i mean 5 updatez b4 6ocklock or else eh.........

JISOS!!!!

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 4:36pm On Oct 21, 2014

creamyanne:
Meeeehn! Mazi Dan writes, dis story sweeeeeeeet die......On behalf of d invisible readerz, we are asking what time in d evening would dat be .....btw, so d complaints of d short update gives u joy abi, thank God say u promise us long update because I for be number one to lynch u.. Ride on Boss!.

Thanks, Creamyanne. Just be online around 7p.m or thereabouts.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 4:24pm On Oct 21, 2014

Fatalveli:
Better, cos I've been planning on how to tear u from limb to limb if u fail to give us full update!

Hahahahha...Thank God I'm safe.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 2:34pm On Oct 21, 2014

For fear of being lynched online, I've merged Episode 37 - 40 in one big lump.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 2:32pm On Oct 21, 2014

The Grand Finale drops this evening,

Who is as excited as I am huh

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 1:25pm On Oct 21, 2014

Trypa:
Dan dnt try it o shie u hear mi ba?

Hhahhhaha

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 1:25pm On Oct 21, 2014

Note that if you are here and haven't read Ola - The Tale of a Young Moon Maiden, your name is Theresa.
grin

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 1:22pm On Oct 21, 2014

moseph:
I cant fit wait for the next update,pls hurry up ichie danwrite

Ichie noni! *dancing around with my red cap

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Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 1:21pm On Oct 21, 2014

Fatalveli:
Danwrites, I think we shud throw a party for Mma wen she has given birth... Abi wat do u think

You want Mma to get pregnant again, abi.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 1:18pm On Oct 21, 2014

Trypa:
Dan if anytin happen to mma ehn u will c wat trypa will do to u no use mi play o

*packs bags and travels to the east.

Literature › Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(op): 1:16pm On Oct 21, 2014

missviva:
‎you re such a wonderful writer and pls don't finishing the storying o

Thanks, Missviva.

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