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Please, do not give up on this beautiful book. Your story really has potential, and I (we all) would love to see you take it to the next level. (Did I mention that I'm a huge fan of mystery, and I even have some mystery story ideas I'm yet to develop? And you want to give up on this one just like that? Please don't). You've come up with a great storyline. Please continue or I'll haunt your dreams (for real). However, you should work on your first word capitalization like divepen1 suggested. You should also pay more attention to your punctuation and spacing, and this amazing story will be a masterpiece. You're great. With love, your new fan. |
Thanks for the invite. I'm on my way, will arrive later. ![]() |
NothingDoMe:Lol. State is too small na. I'll country my compensation. |
OH MY GOSH!!! (uppercase letters to emphasize my emotions) I can't believe how long I've been clicking on 'next page'. I know I said I wouldn't read any books on NL till I completed my exams, but somehow I stumbled upon this book, and from the first chapter, I could tell Gio and Nkiru were made for each other, and I desperately needed to see a beautiful love story unfold. Gio is to die for. You beautifully written, very original story got me hooked before I could say Jack Robinson. And look how hot his name is. I got a thing for rude male characters, so I drooled over Gio right away. Will surely get my copy from Okadabooks to finish what I started. It's official. I've found my second favorite Nigerian author. You're great. I love you (okay, I love Gio) Keep being the greatest you can be. Don't stop for anyone. |
Kimkardashain:I'll be posting the second book when I'm done with my exams (final exams things ) Thanks for honouring my invitation. |
BeckyTeelard:You're welcome. (: And thanks for reading. |
JaeSharp:Thank you (and you're welcome). ![]() I'd like a bowl of cerelac. |
do4luv14:Lol. The holdup for your side strong die ^_^ |
NothingDoMe:Hehe. You don see am na. Nairaland blocked me while trying to reply you the other day. Please compensate me. |
NothingDoMe:Lol! There's plenty of love to go around. Chop kiss. And thanks. (: I listen to alternative rock. Evanescence, Xandria, Within Temptation, Hydria, Lyriel, Fireflight, Skillet, Three days Grace, Linkin Park, Thousand foot Krutch, etc |
queenitee:Lol! Thanks. But I've not reached bomb o, I'm still gun shot. ![]() |
Can't wait for exams to be over so I can consume these delightful books. Bookworm mode loading. ![]() |
EvaJael:Thanksie. I lof you more. ![]() |
bellefidel, Lolsd, BeckyTeelard, t1976, WHOcarex, darloseh, horexy, AustineCJ, do4luv14, EvaJael, Bellefidel, jontargeyren, JaeSharp, NothingDoMe |
To download this book in PDF, epub and mobi formats, please click on any of these links: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/715719 https://www.kobo.com/ww/en/ebook/knowing-alpha http://www.okadabooks.com/book/about/knowing_alpha_/13441 |
UNKNOWING ALPHA (Book two of Alpha and Beta) When Alpha shows up at Bethany’s house in a car only a millionaire can afford, she realizes he is anything but the middleclass boy she thought him to be, and is concerned about what other secrets he holds. Series of frontal attacks inform her of an unknown enemy. To make things even worse, Alpha who should be by her side deserts her and returns to being his old self, the lone Alpha. Bethany finds herself unknowing the Alpha she has tried so hard to know. Will she accept the end of their relationship, or will she struggle to unmask the secrets behind his distance?
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Thanks a lot for stopping by. Alpha Jordan and his Beta are really pleased you got to know their story. If you can, please leave them a comment. They'd really appreciate your support. |
