Please, do not give up on this beautiful book. Your story really has potential, and I (we all) would love to see you take it to the next level.

(Did I mention that I'm a huge fan of mystery, and I even have some mystery story ideas I'm yet to develop? And you want to give up on this one just like that? Please don't).

You've come up with a great storyline. Please continue or I'll haunt your dreams (for real).

However, you should work on your first word capitalization like divepen1 suggested. You should also pay more attention to your punctuation and spacing, and this amazing story will be a masterpiece.

You're great.

With love, your new fan.

Thanks for the invite. I'm on my way, will arrive later.

NothingDoMe:
Ah! Who dared to block you? Sorry dear. The system seems to protect me for some reason. You should have mailed the mods.

Anyways, please state your compensation.

Lol. State is too small na. I'll country my compensation.

OH MY GOSH!!! (uppercase letters to emphasize my emotions)
I can't believe how long I've been clicking on 'next page'.
I know I said I wouldn't read any books on NL till I completed my exams, but somehow I stumbled upon this book, and from the first chapter, I could tell Gio and Nkiru were made for each other, and I desperately needed to see a beautiful love story unfold.
Gio is to die for. You beautifully written, very original story got me hooked before I could say Jack Robinson. And look how hot his name is.
I got a thing for rude male characters, so I drooled over Gio right away. Will surely get my copy from Okadabooks to finish what I started.
It's official. I've found my second favorite Nigerian author. You're great. I love you (okay, I love Gio)
Keep being the greatest you can be. Don't stop for anyone.

Kimkardashain:
nyce story pls continue

I'll be posting the second book when I'm done with my exams (final exams things )
Thanks for honouring my invitation.

BeckyTeelard:
wow.....nice tnx 4 d invite

You're welcome. (: And thanks for reading.

JaeSharp:
wow!!! what a nice story ... thanks for the invite... let me go get pop corn and some juice... what would u want me to get for you

Thank you (and you're welcome).
I'd like a bowl of cerelac.

do4luv14:


yea ma ah dey come........

Lol. The holdup for your side strong die ^_^

NothingDoMe:
Thats a lot of heavy metal! For what na? You wan turn fighter?

Hehe. You don see am na. Nairaland blocked me while trying to reply you the other day. Please compensate me.

NothingDoMe:
What about me?

Awesome work by the way. This is totally Pro! What kind of rock music do you like? soft rock? alternative? metal? indie?

Artists..... evanescence? sixpence? REM? Creed? Cold Play?

Lol! There's plenty of love to go around. Chop kiss.
And thanks. (:
I listen to alternative rock. Evanescence, Xandria, Within Temptation, Hydria, Lyriel, Fireflight, Skillet, Three days Grace, Linkin Park, Thousand foot Krutch, etc

queenitee:
Darkcrisp is the bomb

Lol! Thanks. But I've not reached bomb o, I'm still gun shot.

Can't wait for exams to be over so I can consume these delightful books. Bookworm mode loading.

WHOcarex:
You got me

WHOcarex:
You got me

EvaJael:
You got me again. I love you jawe

Thanksie. I lof you more.

bellefidel, Lolsd, BeckyTeelard, t1976, WHOcarex,
darloseh, horexy, AustineCJ, do4luv14, EvaJael, Bellefidel, jontargeyren, JaeSharp, NothingDoMe

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https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/715719

https://www.kobo.com/ww/en/ebook/knowing-alpha

http://www.okadabooks.com/book/about/knowing_alpha_/13441

UNKNOWING ALPHA
(Book two of Alpha and Beta)

When Alpha shows up at Bethany’s house in a car only a millionaire can afford, she realizes he is anything but the middleclass boy she thought him to be, and is concerned about what other secrets he holds.

Series of frontal attacks inform her of an unknown enemy. To make things even worse, Alpha who should be by her side deserts her and returns to being his old self, the lone Alpha. Bethany finds herself unknowing the Alpha she has tried so hard to know.

Will she accept the end of their relationship, or will she struggle to unmask the secrets behind his distance?

Thanks a lot for stopping by. Alpha Jordan and his Beta are really pleased you got to know their story. If you can, please leave them a comment. They'd really appreciate your support.