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Milliano007:I say a big amen to that |
Madam bibijay u got me glued to my phone good job sis |
And thanks for inviting your friends over more updates coming soon |
Thanks for d correction it is noted |
xaviercasmir:U ar popular oo hmm i lyk dat but uv nt read my story cross roads so hw do know am a writer |
I love ur plot |
Good story bibijay but i need u to observe my story crossroads and tel me d areas i need to improve thanks ma Good story bibijay but i need u to observe my story crossroads and tel me d areas i need to improve thanks ma |
Obimgbo:Like handling critics,meeting the standards of my readers |
Obimgbo:Thanks sister also folowin your story |
JUMOKE:i laid on my bed my mind thinking about the turn of events with Leke my fiancee disturbing me to quit my job as a police officer before he procedes with our wedding plans i felt confused just then my neigbour came to ask if i could accompany her to the market( time checked 7pm) ,looking at my window realising it was going to rain i declined her offer* * * * * PAMELA:opening my eyes and seeing darkness i knew it was late i felt water drop on my face i realised it was raining raising my head from mama p's shoulder i saw worry all over her face with a sigh i knew we needed help*PAPA P checks time6:59pm)i had tried calling my wife's line only to discover it was switched off i became worried and i couldnt pick them at the garage since i was unexpectedly placed on special duty just then i had an idea i dailed wunmi's number it rang without her picking same with jumoke beads of sweat started to form on myfaceWUNMI:siting in the taxi on my way to market i recalled the look on jumoke face i felt pity forher |
Divepen1:Thanks for d observation will do that latter Divepen1:Thanks for d observation will do that latter Divepen1:Thanks for d observation will do that latter |
bibijay123:Am i nt invited ni |
MAMA P:it was already night by the time we arrived abeokuta.under the heavy rain i stood helples at the garage with my phone dead nd not understanding the strange language(yoruba)i was stranded with my sleeping daugther on my shoulder and my lugage at my feet i silently prayed for a miracle* * * * *WUNMI:my neigbour nd coleague informed me of his plans to bring his family to abeokuta nd i felt it was a good idea so i asked him when they were comin nd he said in a weeks time.today maked it a week we discussed so i wnt to ask him if they where on their way but i met him rushing out.* * good nyt readers ba3 low |
HI readers am starting a story based on A GIRL for some reasons i would change the name of characters critics are welcome,NO PART OF THIS STORY CAN BE COPIED WITHOUT PERMISSION FROM THE AUTHOR=======A little girl is unhappy.*pamela:mama must i follow to the city i asked shifting my gaze to mama p who happens to be my mom .even though i knew d answer to my question i still wanted to hear her say it .my name is pamela nd i stayed with grand ma uptill now that mama p came to take me to my father in abeokuta* * * * * * * * MAMA P:Looking at my daugther's face i knew she would have loved to stay in d village with grany but having finished my TTC training at ogoja her father insisted both of us come over to abeokuta * * * * * * * * PAPA P:i tought it wise for my family excluding my first son who was in js3 to come nd liv with me in abeokuta.as a costable in the police force i could fend for them.,,**a week latter.PAMELA: wedged btwn mama p nd a fat woman i began d jorney tomy future.with my mind blank i slept |
purem:Thanks nd help me invite ya friends to my thread CROSS ROADS |
I meant to ask if i nid special permision b4 writin my story |
xaviercasmir:So can u introduce me to every one |
dear writers nd readers i nid your guidiance on a true life story am about 2 start |
oyinprince u made me join nl wit dis captivatin story av always bin a guest reader thumbs up |
Nyc update but in nid of more Nyc update but in nid of more |
hmmm wow ogaju |
Obimgbo:Bros u a doing a wondaful job keep it flowin |
![]() xaviercasmir: xaviercasmir: following xaviercasmir:ME SEF DAY YOUR BACK AM ACTUALY NEW ON NL PLS CAN U SHOW ME ROUND |
Good story bibijay but i need u to observe my story crossroads and tel me d areas i need to improve thanks ma
checks time6:59pm)i had tried calling my wife's line only to discover it was switched off i became worried and i couldnt pick them at the garage since i was unexpectedly placed on special duty just then i had an idea i dailed wunmi's number it rang without her picking same with jumoke beads of sweat started to form on myfaceWUNMI:siting in the taxi on my way to market i recalled the look on jumoke face i felt pity forher