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thanks CC. im so looking forward to reading them.

thanks alot.

u welcome


hope mars is treating u good.

thats why it is good to make neutral comments.

anyway, hope u aiight.

was a pleasure hun. looking forward to reading more of your beautifully written poems.

ok, i get you.

goodluck with your schooling and keep writing them poems. im sure you touch a lot of people with it.

was really nice reading your poem. brought back my poetry skillz. thanks alot.



@sweetnini

what has poem got to do with psychology? and d lady you are talking to is way above what u just said.

thats ok,

it is a nice title. really nice.

how i met slavery. slavery and I. why were we taken from Africa? slavery so ruthless. and we were taken.

i miss africa. slavery my enemy. slavery took me away or slavery took me. and i survived slavery.




you title is nice but bear in mind that whatever title you give a poem must paint half the picture of what you have in mind.

no sweety it aint. you know, if you name a poem, you have already painted half of the picture in the readers mind. dat way you will get the same interpretation.

if people should read your last post, dey wont say what i said, dey will basically say what you have in mind cuzz u have painted half of the picture for them.


thanks for explaing darl.

aiight hun, thanks alot.


you got skillz and nice potential and your poems invoke dis feeling of pity, courage and happiness at the same time.

your mood is dat of sadness and indifferent.

your tone has dis vibrant energy but soft and steady.

actually, im a guy.

and if you have more, send it true and i will edit it.


let me confess a little, i love reading poems and stuff but i dont talk too much cuzz people will think u r some sissy. but i no longer care what people think. if you dont like me, you can kiss ma behind.


u welcome sweety.

im not really into poem and stuff. but when i see a nice piece, i know it. this is my first post in this section.

you should try organizing it. it will sound better.

COCO29:
did it hurt you to know that i had survived
did your heart bleed to know that i am still alive
did you think that i would have disappeared
along with my ancestors in the pages of history
well i have news for you am still here
and it is no mystery.

my hands were bond and feet shackled
my home taken from me with out pity
my family torn from my heart for all eternity

you look surprise to see me still alive
i could see the fear in your eyes
oh i know that state
you are afraid that i will retaliate.

well you have no reason to fear me
am not bitter or angry
i don't even feel envy because i survive
i stand here triumphant in victory
i am still here and will continue to be.

read dat, i didnt edit it, i just re-organized it. tell me what you think.

oh i see, den the poem is misleading if im not the only one dat tot of what i said, well, nice poem.

are u refering to a guy or a girl dat poisoned you or something.

or did you cheat death?

cuzz the theme of the poem sounds like you cheated death or you were meant to die den you escaped and survived.