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Literature / Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by felicity09: 11:37pm On Dec 12, 2016 |
[quote author=Creeza post=51858525] Jagugu88li rachealfst Lleigh missmossy yorhmienerd daniluv2k4 chijioke17 udochee mirob spdazzy yinks89 nder niwdog lovespirit biafrabushboy Continues* Katherine " I don't just understand him . I dont get it" I said to Mimi. She was as silent as a grave yard. I suspected that she must have been shocked by the incidents which I reeled out to her.. She was the type of woman that would reply at any slightest opportunity . But now she was dumbfounded. " What do you mean? " Mimi asked " w-- what's does he mean by YOU want him dead? I couldn't explain. I told her about my incident with Gabriel the previous day and she dropped her jaws down in disbelief. Gabriel's conclusion was absurd and uncalled for. I held him in high esteem but that fateful day, he proved to me that he was really frustrated. It showed in his eyes and I suddenly felt pity for him when I blocked his path from leaving the parlour. " Please Kate. Let me pass nah. I'm tired . Even if you want to kill me , let me go and rest for today. Another day is a perfect chance." ...... ** " My sister " I said " I'm confused here too. I have nothing to do with Tayo's gunshot. And Why would Andy try to hurt Gabriel? The guy is too timid to boo a fly." " He is a man..men are like that and you don't expect him to be happy when he is broke? Mimi replied, as she stroked her long wavy hair. I sat down into the cushion in Mimi's well furnished apartment. She stayed alone and it was the epitome of simple beauty .. I hoped she was going to get married anytime soon, it was rather to early to assume because she was like the queen of " single forever". She never maintained relationships or didn't even try at all. " But come o , babes" Mimi blurted out and tapped me on the laps.. " what is it? " The mastermind of the gunshot was indeed a genius" She continued" Like , think about it : Get Tayo out of the picture and Gabriel is stranded... " There was some truth in what she said, but she had to explain better. " Where are you driving at? I said. " Maybe Gabriel wasn't the target after all. He was wounded , fine. Then he used all he had on treating himself. And his best friend and ally is subjected to a coma." She tried to exlpalin even further and then it dawned on me that Tayo was Gabriel's pivot. The life force of his existence. Remove Tayo, and Gabe is rendered hopeless. " So He was just a pawn on the chess board. Is that what you mean? Mimi sipped her juice and placed the glass on the table carefully. " .... Think of him as the main price.. The King on the board" I stared blankly at her before she continued. Cheerfully. " ... And o yes , Kathy . I'm so happy right now.. Elisha is back from the States"... Gabriel I left early for St Francis hospital just to avoid bustops overload . I waited on the pavillon for the next bus, and the day was not too bright yet. I gazed at my feet and wondered how I got to that point in my life . I already sold my car( in short Kate sold it when I was still receiving treatments). " Bypass ... Rumukuro.. Shoba shoba ( the Conductor called it as the bus stopped. The actual location was Choba and not shoba... But his weed fried tongue was saying otherwise). " Bros you dae go?" He asked and jumped off the bus entrance. " Enter moto nah... No time " He tapped me on the back and called out more passengers. When I got to the hospital , I was afraid to enter Tayo's room . It felt like a ghost would tear me apart. Some mythycal guardian would disengage my limbs if I opened the door. I stood there for a while and summoned courage. Inside the room , there were countless machines and a windpipe went down his throat aiding his breathing. His heart rate was shown on a screen on the left, and I shook with fear ; thinking it would stop any minute. His wife sat near his bed and lay her head on his right side. " Omotola' I said and touched her gently. " Gabriel... What are you-- you are here early...." " Don't worry . I came to relieve you off your night watch" I chuckled a smile and she reacted positively to it. " Well then " She said" I'll just go home and take a quick shower . But I'll be back as soon as possible..." " Take your time --- Tally just take all the time you want. I'm here for Tayo. He is like a brother to me " She stood up and hugged me, tears showed down her cheeks . I could feel her heart beat . She was in deep pain. We untangled and I watched her as she religiously kissed Tayo on the fore head , wiped his face with a towel and left reluctantly. I sat down on the plastic chair. My mind was racing and thoughts flew in sporadically. I grabbed Tayo's arms and the paleness shook me internally. He was almost at the brink of no return relying on machines for his life. " You can't leave me .. Bro .. Not yet. No , not yet man. We have been through alot, Tayo. Don't let me grind it alone. " I sniffed and blinked then continued" Bro.. I have a lead on the person who attempted to take your life. Soon I'll have proof and he will pay dearly... I promise you-- he will so rot in jail" TBC dis talented personality deserves a standing ovation from all literature models n scholars across d world, because I must admit dah dis story was skillfully n carefully written by gifted fingers, I respect ur inspiration n I wish u more of it to the betterment of dis career u chose. pls make it worth it by providing early updates it really difficult to wait, I promise to follow dis story up till its end. 3 Likes |
Literature / Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by felicity09: 2:05pm On Dec 12, 2016 |
Angelinastto:actually am a girl, d sir is just intimidating tnx for d updates n of cos d dedication, ride on sis u rock...... |
Literature / Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by felicity09: 11:24pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
where's d remaining piece of dis story. sorry I din't commend ur story because I couldn't just help reading and pausing to make a comment. so, pls do something abt it to at least make it worth a long commendation speech after all. pllssss |
Literature / Re: Letting Go By Audrey Timms by felicity09: 11:56am On Dec 05, 2016 |
such story should not end half way na, pls aunt Audrey wat do u sugges.t I do to read this story till its end. thanks, kudos to u for a job well done, at least as far as I've ur stories I cannot but say,dat u r a gifted one |
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