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lol nawa oh

Trying to learn from my wrong.
Praying everyday to live long.

Experience is the best teacher,
I am trying to learn the lessons.
I pray to get rich and richer,
With all the blessings.

I made so many mistakes
This is leading to greatness

I don't put my eggs
In one basket,I keep
Them in the fridge .
I hope when am in the
Casket,I truly died rich.

A poem from my chapbook Mama's boy

divinehand2003:
Is it a riddle?

The topic is the answer

Its the heartbreak season,
Hope you understand.
The friend zone prison,
Hope you understand.


I know my third leg gives you
More attention than I do.

You only valued the diamond stuffs.
Now you say my love isn't enough.

You want me to be
Your one and only?
When you are not
Dating me solely?

You never put your brain to use.
When you think,you blow a fuse.

I am correcting my mistakes
and my blunders.
No cause for alarm if you won't wake up from your slumber.

this is a poem from my Chapbook mama's boy

The only part I don't like was

"#Educate a girl child..and share if you are a product of a woman"

Since my birth,I have been
Prepared to meet my end.
Walking through the valley
of the shadow of death.
On a Quest,to be the best
To death.

Probably the first
To put the rest to rest,set to
Own a bakery instead of a
Daily Bread.


My hand on the desk checking
My ex pens,Am I a teacher?

My hands on the desk checking
My expense,Am I Richer?

I live in the sky,sometimes
me and The birds fight.
Moment of silence
you know I am dead right?

A Poem from my chapbook mama's Boy

Lovely

llaykorn

If love is blind,baby I
Will pluck out my eye.
Am out of my mind,
Maybe that's what I imply.
You one of a kind,I will be
Crazy to say good bye.
I will be by your side,
Lady am your samurai.

You give me comfort of
All sort,you are too cool.
You make me go north,
Though that's were I school.


I drove you crazy,I shouldn't
Have press the gear.
Don't walk away,don't you
Want to be a millionaire?
All these haters words are
just Music to my ear.
I can sing to it and make
The audience cheer.
You made others insecure
You made them fear.
You made others inferior
You don't even care.
Only angels can stand
A chance to compare.
When you walk in the
Street,every man stare.


I stole your heart,
Babe don't call police.
I Did not intend to hurt you,
I never knew it will come to this.
Am on my knees,baby
Please forgive.


From my chapbook Mama's Boy

Hoes use to make ridges
Now they're gold digging

I made a fish drown
And A tortoise run

I know a friend who
Got so high till he
Met the most high
I see a ghost fly
Putting on a bow tie
Is that a ghost worker?
I am driving you crazy
With no car

This Is A Poem From My ChapBook Mama's Boy

The girl of my dreams
Use to be in my head
The girl of my dreams
Is now on my bed

To be honest,without
Intimacy am getting
Success

Haters are illiterates
They can't read between
The lines
Am going extra mile

As a beast,I desist from Jealousy,envy & greed
I need to succeed so i hid
To the bid of my need

Don't let A bird at Hand
Get freed
This a food for thought
Hope you feed till you're
Filled




this a poem from my chapbook

Hope you see the wordplay between success and suck sex

llaykorn:
Gidiquotes, allow me perform this in an audio recording spoken word.

lol sure....when will it be out?

lovely

llaykorn:
GidiQuotes, this is a beautiful piece, really. There are a few things I'd like to say about it, though. First is: the title - to me - doesn't seem to correlate enough with the poem body. Don't you feel the same?

Secondly, I'm very sure that this piece would have looked more beautiful, polished and would even be easier to read and understand if you had punctuated it. Take a look a look at the second line in the second stanza for an example. There should have a been a sign between 'life is short' and 'I should be writing my will' to signify a break. Imagine you performed this piece as spoken word: it sure would sound very awkward if you didn't observe a pause between those two phrases, so there should be a mark to signify that pause in your writing too. As much as I am not a fan of the ellipsis in poetry, I should confess that it would be the best to go in there. A hyphen or a semi colon would do the job quite well, too.

Thirdly, I remember you telling me something about you being a rebel (not the exact word you used) poet. You're definitely also a modern one, so I understand perfectly why you're not plying the conventional route of starting every line with a block letter, but, I think you should try it someday; it's beautiful!

Once again, you have a very beautiful piece. I have a feeling your child smiled at this. It's a just a feeling.

thanks boss

from

Dear my urborn
I don't know if you would
be my daughter or my son
right now am in a point of
no return,trying to pay
attention without refund


I cant promise to win,
life is short I should
be writing my will


am writing my
wrongs,they are
trying to peep
I will make sure
mama is queen

you will be a blue
blood you will never
work in vein
you will be a blue
blood you will never
work in vain

it's true talk your dad
is insane because I
choose to be different
from those that are
the same

yours sincerely Gidi .Q

life is a movie i am
waiting in suspense
in front of the jury
because I killed my
conscience


hot chicks warming my bed
hot tricks running my head


I am holding a red rose because
my haters are dead broke


I am a genius I should be on scholarship but I am sea sick
they say you can't have your
cake and eat it
that's wrong because I am currently eating a short cake biscuit


everyday is a class I am
not ready to be the last
going back to square one
only happens in maths
I can't pass judgement
haters got A1 in that


as a farmer am trying to grow the money tree
i want ball so hard I get commentary from those who underrated me


waiting for me to give up
is your own catastrophe
skeleton in my cupboard
I love anatomy

Oh Lord I am not a human

Mama's Boy coming soon

nice

llaykorn:
Wetin cause teeth?

I day feel am

really nice

AlNelssyn:
how did she change? dancing to d tone of d world.....Nice one sire

you are crazy bro.... respect

this good

AlNelssyn joseph1832 Adanna28 llaykorn

nice man

when I see the stars align
i check the time,its night
theyre in the club to wine
and dine,turn off the light

am trying to do a wordplay with "stars" hope you get?

am tired am off nice work bro