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Chapter 1


She’d not been in school for three days now Brenda was really lacking behind cause the teachers won’t cease to teach other students cause, Brenda Collins was ill. Brenda’s health was now taking a good shape and she is now back to her feets again. Collecting lesson notes was her first priority, she practically choosed Vera’s over others, Vera’s handwriting was clear and bold, the type a blind man will be able to see.

Four Days Back:

Brenda’s eyes began to close gently buh she forced it open, her heart raced so fast, she chocked in saliva trying to releive her self, she slapped her chicks at intervals, fainting in the class wasn’t what she wished for.
She imagened her self being the school’s talk about for the day.
“No. I won’t faint” she whispered to her self.
Mr. Tungsten the History teacher noticed her dis-comfort before he reached Brenda's seat she was already on the floor other students fanned her with their notes but all efforts to revive her failed she was rushed to Hathaways Central Hospital.
“She’s okay and fit to be discharged” The doctor assured.

PRESENT DAY

She walked down the ill roads of hathaways after collecting the lesson notes from Vera.
A Dog barked behind her as soon as she turned her gaze to the dog behind her, the dog barked more and took off and started chasing her.
Feared Brenda managed to remove her high hills and took, she ran fast as her legs could carry her.
“H-E-Y, N-A-N-N-Y” A woman yelled from behind, Hearing the woman’s voice the dog halted, the woman walked towards the dog and threw chains in his neck and made to leave.
“Your dog is so lousy and dis-obedient” Brenda wailed.
“Don’t talk to my Nanny like that, you brat.” The woman replied to her questionless statement.
Brenda was really hurted with the woman’s word, She dragged her stuborn feet until she reached their house.
She flung the gate open and she walked amidst the fleet of car in the compound, Brenda’s father is a rich man, a high notable celebrity in the country.
Hip-hop music were bursting out trough the stereo, Brenda heaved on a deep sigh, She wasn't a lover of hip-hop genre of music like wise her parents.
Max was behind the banging sound of the hip-hop music.
Brenda expected Max, Her brother to be mis-using the house since they were on a golf tour

Good afternoon, lovers of literature, please help me get along by showing me my mistakes via comment box.

#StillALearner



Chapter 1


She’d not been in school for three days now Brenda was really lacking behind cause the teachers won’t cease to teach other students cause, Brenda Collins was ill. Brenda’s health was now taking a good shape and she is now back to her feets again. Collecting lesson notes was her first priority, she practically choosed Vera’s over others, Vera’s handwriting was clear and bold, the type a blind man will be able to see.

Four Days Back:

Brenda’s eyes began to close gently buh she forced it open, her heart raced so fast, she chocked in saliva trying to releive her self, she slapped her chicks at intervals, fainting in the class wasn’t what she wished for.
She imagened her self being the school’s talk about for the day.
“No. I won’t faint” she whispered to her self.
Mr. Tungsten the History teacher noticed her dis-comfort before he reached Brenda's seat she was already on the floor other students fanned her with their notes but all efforts to revive her failed she was rushed to Hathaways Central Hospital.
“She’s okay and fit to be discharged” The doctor assured.

PRESENT DAY

She walked down the ill roads of hathaways after collecting the lesson notes from Vera.
A Dog barked behind her as soon as she turned her gaze to the dog behind her, the dog barked more and took off and started chasing her.
Feared Brenda managed to remove her high hills and took, she ran fast as her legs could carry her.
“H-E-Y, N-A-N-N-Y” A woman yelled from behind, Hearing the woman’s voice the dog halted, the woman walked towards the dog and threw chains in his neck and made to leave.
“Your dog is so lousy and dis-obedient” Brenda wailed.
“Don’t talk to my Nanny like that, you brat.” The woman replied to her questionless statement.
Brenda was really hurted with the woman’s word, She dragged her stuborn feet until she reached their house.
She flung the gate open and she walked amidst the fleet of car in the compound, Brenda’s father is a rich man, a high notable celebrity in the country.
Hip-hop music were bursting out trough the stereo, Brenda heaved on a deep sigh, She wasn't a lover of hip-hop genre of music like wise her parents.
Max was behind the banging sound of the hip-hop music.
Brenda expected Max, Her brother to be mis-using the house since they were on a golf tour

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Episode 5

All my bones were so weak and my head was still pounding with the brain shaking my vagina was full of dried blood all over it i reached out for the bathroom and freshened up i searched every where around the house for the criminal that assaulted me and he was no where to be found.
My Mum was always busy with work and she don't have the time to sit me and rub minds on mother to daughter discussion she didnt care to know the type of man he left me with.
one issue that has been disturbing my mind is who my biological father was in the locality where i grew up some people used to say my mum is a prostitute and she dont even know my real father this issue was a big problem to me while growing up and anytime i asked my mum all she says was 'you'll know him one day'.
I took some pain releiving tablets and i was alone trough out the weekend ever since my step father disapeared, that weekend and school mid-term break has been the most horrorful break i ever embarked on.
Since then i was lost in school as i just overhear the lectures of the teachers i hardly go to church ever since then all the faith i had disapearead since jesus did'nt saved me from being raped.
After a while my step father returned back home with the excuse of him going to the village for his mother's funeral services.
My mom did'nt notice any changes in me neighter my strange attitude towards my step father.
three weeks later in school i was sleeping in class which was strange and i feeled horribled with slight head ache and my tummy revolving, the Health science teacher (Mrs.Busayo) was the teacher in class she is a very cruel woman and she sees faults on students before any other teacher she was called 'The goddess' by students.
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TBC

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Episode 4
I began to shiver before i could think of anything my step father pushed me to the floor and my head hitted the hard concrete floor that was covered with a rug causing me alot of pain my head began to pound as if my brain will fall off.
He pulled of the trouser he was wearing and inserted something into my pubic region and i shouted with the last energy i had but his hands quickly covered my mouth to prevent any sound that will attract the attention of the neighbours.
He removed his manhood and inserted it back to my v*gina quickly all my energy was drained and i was helpless on the floor.
He was gasping while he kept on inserting and removing, at some point off time it was like my v*gina was set ablazed and my vision became blurred, my eyes closed gently.
I was is in a new world that looks like heaven and i finally met Jesus that i've been giving praises and worships to over the years.
I saw people beneath where i was standing waiting for an angel to attend to me shouting and scratching their body thats the people in hell and i smilled knowing fully that i'll make heaven i was number 52 on the que when it was my turn to be judged i heard a bell and i woke up that must be the bell of the celestral church members that go about preaching every morning.

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TBC

Episode 3

On reaching the bathroom i pulled off the gown i was wearing most of my teen church members commented on the gown as an ancient gown which i never cared about it.
I took few steps to the shower and i laid my hands on the handle and started the shower few minutes later i heard some one knocking the door ‘who is that?’ i reluctantly asked ‘its me Ann. come on open the door’ ehen my step father don come with him wahala i said to my self in pigdeon english.
I quickly wrapped my self up with a towel that could barely cover my laps and made my way for the door i opened the door and the first thing i saw was a bottle of ‘gulder’ that was held firm in my step father's hand and i scrolled up to his face with my eyes he was heavily drunk.

He entered the house and i was locking the door while he bounced his buttocks on the couch.
After locking the door i turned around and the towel that was wrapped from my chest to my laps fell from my body and landed to the floor and i was completely unclad in front of my step father the first thought that flashed trough my mind was his first sexual assault that failed and now me being unclad in his presence was like i was calling him to my body.
I quickly reached out for the towel and picked it.
My step father quickly dropped the bottle of gulder that was in his hand and moved close to me and i took like five steps backward until my back was touching the door i was totally confused and i gave him a slap before realising it was my step father i slapped he bent his face to his left hand side and he swallowed spit he turned his face back to me and smashed me hard on my face and the doors that has been locked to prevent tears from my eyes were opened
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TBC

Episode 2

Tears rolled from my step father's eyes i was thoughtless.
‘Please forgive me and please dont mention to any one my rape attempt please’ My step father pleaded, ‘is like you are back to your senses’, I almost said.

I never wanted to forgive him my plan was to tell my mum about his attempt and there fore he'll be thrown out of the house Mr. Iyke is a jobless Man all he do is to watch football and order for food i wonder what my mom saw in him is like he charmed my mom who knows.

Since my Pastor's favourite topic was about forgiveness i didnt know how my lips forced itself to say ‘I've forgiven you already’.

Ever since the event took place he shouts at me in my Mum's presence but teased me at her back.

Am just a young girl of 16 years am in ss3 in ‘Crowter High College Ikeja’ i was well known as ‘sister mary’ in school i barely talk to people in school, i have no freind right from my jss1 in Crowter High College, i was seriously engaged with my studies, and church services was what i've never missed.

it was friday morning when my mom anounced she'll be travelling to the village over the weekend for her freind's wedding. i helped her packed her cloth and folded it neatly into her small bag pack.
and i escorted her to the motor park and waved her off.
I went home there after to meet my step father watching football before nepa seized power.
at around 6pm that friday my step father disappeared into the dust surely he'll be at Madam ngozi's bar and there after i watched Emmanuel Tv until i dozed off.
i woked up in the night at about 10pm the heat was too strong for me to hold since Nepa were so frequent in seizing electricity when its needed most i decided to have some shower. ‘at this time my step father is not yet back hia’ i said while i looked at the time and i sighed and went straight to the bathroom...

TBC

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Prologue

The story is about a young girl that was sexually assaulted by her step father not only that ,she was also impregenated and strucked with HIV go trough it and see what lies the fate of this wicked man

Episode1


It was that sunny midday on thursday while i was taking a nap in my room i began to feel some one's hand on my buttocks i quickly waked up to my suprise it was my step father (Mr. Iyke), i jumped up to my feet on top of my mattress "sir what are doing" i questioned my step father with fear as my blood was pumping faster than i ever immagined, "Uhm please let me do just small please i will do it gently" my step father said with a staggering voice before i could think of any thing he grabbed my waist and landed me ontop of my small mattress then he started struggling with his belt while he was on the middle of my left leg and my right leg i tried to push him but my efforts seemed to be invane, 'any one ahome' my mom's voice came to my hearing my step father jumped up and he made his way out of my room. It was 2am in the night he came to my room again he waked me up gently hitting me on my leg i woked up "are you here to rape me again?" i quickly questioned him. "dont you have an atom of respect for me" my step father said
"all the respect i had for you died when you tried to rape me" i concluded ....
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