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***One thing to note about this update is that it holds one crucial arc for the story, but it's also being told from the POV of someone who has no idea what is going on, so I need you to tell me if you're able to spot the HUGE revelation here, because I want it to be clear. Thank you ***

It is not so clear though:
How Cala came to be a de trop, a Nebud, lost its memory.
And the identity of the last brio, a who, an It, Cala.
Good morning, I hope I'm clear too?

I'm now addicted to Wednesdays and Saturdays. Keep it flowing ObehiD

If I know Arexon well, as I think I do, it already weighed its options immediately it saw the wounded Nebud.
It's a master strategist.

@ObehiD, I'm still wowed by your presentation and diction.
How do you think? You sure have a super brain.
Gratitude Mirga (Sirga).

Thanks very much ObehiD. Merry Christmas too

still, masterly presented. Well done ObeHiD

I understand Nebud and its actions perfectly... It has flaws; it is unconventional, proud, spontaneous but has a purposes-filled destiny. A super-uspec (superman) will be too predictable.

Ride on ObehiD.
Feeding us the action-packed piece in NL without good background and narration would make a poor novel eventually.

Ur descriptions to me are quite necessary and quite VIVID.

I imagined the serious faces as they call their names

I nearly died of lafta.

I doubt Fajarhomo would recognise Nebud.
And if it does, I can't seem to fathom both uspec's reaction.
Gratitude for the update, ObehiD

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What I see "Nebud is an Uspec of destiny. Its Pater saw tomorrow, hence, made pansophial/spiritual arrangements for it. Nebud's ignorance sometimes, is a necessary tool to its victory."

U are doing a good job, @Obehid.
U are easily the best on NL, with reasons .
Anyway, ride on. Don't rush it.
In fact, I started afresh from the beginning, and I think I picked up a lot more understanding (could be spectral).

Serioualy Damn!

beautifully done. Weh done

I have been suspecting Arexon has something up it's sleeves... He is the baddest guy.

obehiD:
You’d be surprised what you could do when asked to by one that you cherish.”

I wonder who it cherishes. It cant be the Kaiser.

Thanks for the extra-update too, obehiD. It made my day

So Sorry and quick recovery

Eyes from an uspec must have some significance then...

By the way, am always wowed by ur choice of diction and construction. Weh done work!

Its breathtaking ... Silver1996, U are a Badass writer! Gosh! How does ur mind work? The twist...

This piece is simply out of this world. Damn! So good

Simply mind-blowing craft (novella)