Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 1:22pm On Jun 09, 2019 |
Eze2000: Ok, have you got my number? No... |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 7:48am On Jun 09, 2019 |
Eze2000: You are most welcome, my dear. Good Morning Sir. I Still Need Your Help On That Amazon Stuff, can I Chat You Up On Whatsapp |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 6:16pm On Jun 08, 2019 |
Eze2000: Tab uses apps. Find the one that is an apps. Check first.
As for me, I use Grammarly and ginger checker. I proofread my work myself right in the ginger check so I can restructure the whole if need be. thanks I Found One i Just Downloaded It |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 3:30pm On Jun 08, 2019 |
Eze2000: Nope, I am always so busy now. Anytime you see me on NL I am just resting or suffering from writer's block.
This is how you can do it. Google software that can read out words. I have forgotten the name but they are free. Download one, copy paste your work in and listen to the words read out to you. Wherever you hear a mistake pause and correct. okay Thanks. Is It Available On Tabs |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 3:21pm On Jun 08, 2019 |
Eze2000: Understood and you are welcome.
In all you do, remember, selling on okadabooks will being you money to buy more data only. On the other hand, Amazon will bring money to pay bulls and buy a car.
Good luck! Can You Help Me Proof Read A Book? |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 2:12pm On Jun 08, 2019 |
Adaibeku: kudos ...dis ur story looks true than
Just mare story thanks  |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 10:48am On Jun 08, 2019 |
yungbanks: Abeg no cut am like that make it longer pls oooo am glued here the Main Story Is Coming Soon |
Romance › Re: Something Is Wrong, they messed my mind up by IamPlato(op): 8:44am On Jun 08, 2019 |
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Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:43am On Jun 08, 2019 |
UyaiIncomparabl: No. You cannot. The story is not intriguing enough. You have started... Write your own... Over ripe pawpaw  |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 12:10am On Jun 08, 2019 |
OlufemiWhit: really.....just continue writing bro...kudos the major story is not out yet bro |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 9:30pm On Jun 07, 2019 |
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Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:48pm On Jun 07, 2019 |
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Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:45pm On Jun 07, 2019 |
Amatarasha: continue iamplato ,is a super novel updated |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:30pm On Jun 07, 2019 |
Eze2000: Understood and you are welcome.
In all you do, remember, selling on okadabooks will being you money to buy more data only. On the other hand, Amazon will bring money to pay bulls and buy a car.
Good luck! Lol... Thanks |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:21pm On Jun 07, 2019*. Modified: 6:28am On Jun 12, 2019 |
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Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:05pm On Jun 07, 2019 |
Eze2000: The king is here!!! All bow low!!!
@iamplato
Nice story. You've got talent alright but I must say, some polish is needed. For one thing, this story may fly here, it being free, but if published, it will not sell much because it lacks that touch of reality. It is so apparent, particularly in the way you jump from scene to scene. For example, your opening chapter sounds more like a play.
Do not write as you think it, write as you live it. Write like you are in it. It is the only way to turn your imagination into reality and then people will read your story and forget to breathe, their heart will beat fast and they cannot sleep from thinking of it.
And you use too many words where a few will do, Jeze!
Once you can make these adjustments, you will not need to beg anyone to read what you write. You fans will find you and disturb your life. People you do not know will know you well.
As Nlanders would say., more ink to your pen.
***Oh, and I would like to ask you a few questions about your cover designs later. From the little I have seen, you are quite amazing in that area. There are no major explanations here... Just keeping the mystery |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:03pm On Jun 07, 2019 |
Eze2000: The king is here!!! All bow low!!!
@iamplato
Nice story. You've got talent alright but I must say, some polish is needed. For one thing, this story may fly here, it being free, but if published, it will not sell much because it lacks that touch of reality. It is so apparent, particularly in the way you jump from scene to scene. For example, your opening chapter sounds more like a play.
Do not write as you think it, write as you live it. Write like you are in it. It is the only way to turn your imagination into reality and then people will read your story and forget to breathe, their heart will beat fast and they cannot sleep from thinking of it.
And you use too many words where a few will do, Jeze!
Once you can make these adjustments, you will not need to beg anyone to read what you write. You fans will find you and disturb your life. People you do not know will know you well.
As Nlanders would say., more ink to your pen.
***Oh, and I would like to ask you a few questions about your cover designs later. From the little I have seen, you are quite amazing in that area. thanks for the correction... Although this is not the major story.... It's just more like an intro to the major work which I am still working on |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 9:13pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 9:11pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
Tridroid: ride on bro super interesting Updated |
Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:46pm On Jun 06, 2019*. Modified: 6:25am On Jun 12, 2019 |
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Romance › Re: New Wailers Association Of Nairaland by IamPlato(m): 5:28pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Romance › Re: New Wailers Association Of Nairaland by IamPlato(m): 5:27pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Romance › Re: New Wailers Association Of Nairaland by IamPlato(m): 5:24pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Romance › Re: New Wailers Association Of Nairaland by IamPlato(m): 5:21pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Romance › Re: New Wailers Association Of Nairaland by IamPlato(m): 4:59pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Literature › Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 4:52pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Romance › Re: Something Is Wrong, they messed my mind up by IamPlato(op): 4:48pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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Romance › Re: Something Is Wrong, they messed my mind up by IamPlato(op): 4:41pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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You just looked for trouble and a whole lot of people will give you attention by watching what happens to you afterwards.
Easy as it is. oya say thank you. Aunty Are You Okay? Did I Say I Wanted To Commit Suicide? |
Romance › Re: New Wailers Association Of Nairaland by IamPlato(m): 4:32pm On Jun 06, 2019 |
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