noble4d:


Thumbs up dear, you wrote a free verse poem. Take note that poems are written in stanzas. You can check on my thread "Rudiment of poetry to learn more" keep it up.

Thanks

Good day. I'm not much of a poet but I came up with this. I'd also love for a review, critic/criticisms as well. Would love to learn the ropes. Thanks so much


If money could buy love,

I still won’t have it,

Because I’m broke.

If money could buy love,

I still won’t have it,

Because I’d be oppressed by those who have it.

If money could buy love,

I still won’t have it,

Because I don’t know where it is sold,

Because I don’t trust my bargaining power,

Because I don’t know if I have enough.

If money could buy love,

I still won’t have it,

Because the queue is so long,

Because it’d be sold out before it’s my turn,

Because I wonder if it would even get to my turn.

If money could by love,

I still won’t have it,

Because my currency won’t be accepted,

Because my money isn’t crisp enough,

Because it won’t be fresh from the mint.

If money could by love,

I still won’t have it,

Because there won’t be change.

If money could buy love,

I still won’t have it,

Because I don’t know how many units would be sold.

If money could buy love,

I still won’t have it,

Because I’d be robbed of both my money and love.

If money could buy love,

I still won’t have it,

Because I could be sold the fake.

If money could buy love,

I just may have it because I would give all I have to those who need and have nothing to trade with. I’d be poor and alone and in peace.

While I await the one who wouldn’t spend money but shower me with the currency of LOVE….