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Ty Praise, your writing skill is so consistent that it makes someone to get glued to it without much ado. Stress free and effortlessly. Little errors, good spacing, nice thoughts, beautiful composition and pleasant twists. However, check the use of their in your write up, most times you mistake for there, and some ppt words. I commend your effort as you wrap up the story. Pls do not take take time to bring up a new one. Hoping to see your new work soon. You can only get perfect if you persist, consistent, committed and dedicated. Bringing your best could land you in award winning project. Keep it up Amazing Ty Praise.

Lovely, i never saw the story coming this way. I first i was reading another story, what a twisted saga. I love your drift, but watch out your tenses. Though I saw big time improvements, I believe you can cultivate more habit of double checking on your tenses. Your story keeps me coming back for more. I pray you don't stop at this, cos your best is yet to form. Keep on rolling it out. I'm sure you know that having DTOB alone will not provide you the kind comfort you desrve? I think it is high time you gave chance to other cool admires to avoid over dose of Agbo. I don't pray for bad health though, but an angel like you deserves a comprehensive modern comfort at its best my dear. Enjoy!