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If u don't know the colours of sorrow:look at my tears, If you have never known Melancholy:feel the pains in my heart! O Tears! Why has thou made me an acquaintance,when you know your home dealt not in my heart? Days were like weeks, Weeks like months, And months like years; Oh sister! Why did thou have 2 go? When will thou return? Who will be my sister? Where will I ever find that requited love of yours? Thy demise was a pearl of thunder: It struck down the happiness imbued in the world, Darkness was high and low, The birds sang with profound hatred, The Sky was starry-eyed, The Trees were as silent as a corpse, The moon out of frustration refused 2 shine, Even the splendid Stars wept a million tears! O Ijeoma! Ijeoma! My one and only sister, A doting sister dat broke mountains 2 bring me joy, If only I could turn back the hands of Time, Then the pangs of nostalgia i feel at present will be replenished with everlasting joy and mirth! May thy gentle soul, an epitome of peace, an emblem of love, rest in perfect peace,amen! Friends,life is not a bed of roses, It pricks like a thorn, And destroys like an earthquake, Why then do we lay waste our time and talents? We must learn 2 glisten like the sun by day, And glow like the moon and stars at night! Remember:Time is nobody's friend,and that A stitch in time saves nine! Plz dnt 4get 2 vote in the pool afta readin...plz |
This section of nairaland z nt encouraging at all.....people read your writings and go way despite the writers plea 4 constructive criticism.....if u dnt comment,wat criteria then should the writer use 2 assess his performance...your comments r vital,it spurs the writer on,wen people commend him/her,itz makes d zeal 2 burn.......plz always try 2 drop a comment after reading sum1's work |
Wow! A gud write-up! Kip it coming dear |
Glad 2 have u...welcome...dailynews...hope we r completey nw? |
I wil b glad if u kindly drop a comment after reading diz poem.....plz... |
Nice 1 dearie...keep it up! |
If you don't know the colours of sorrow:look at my tears, If you have never known Melancholy :feel the pains in my heart! O Tears! Why has thou made me an acquaintance,when you know your home dealt not in my heart? Days were like weeks, Weeks like months, and months like years, Oh sister! Why did u have 2 go? When will you return? Who will be my sister? Where can i find that requited love of yours? Thy demise was a pearl of thunder, It struck down the hapiness imbued in the world, Darkness was high and low, the Moon out of frustration refused 2 shine, the splendid Stars wept a million tears! Oh Ijeoma! Ijeoma! My one and only sister,a doting sister dat broke mountains 2 bring me joy, If only i could turn back the hands of time,then the pangs of nostalgia i feel at present will be replenished with everlasting Joy and mirth! May thy gentle soul rest in perfect peace,amen! Friends,Life is not a bed roses, It pricks like a thorn, And destroys like an earthquake, why then do we lay waste our time and talents? We must learn 2 glow like the sun by day,and like the moon and stars at night. Remember:a stitch in time saves nine! |
Welcum dearie |
Since it was you who brought joy 2 my wierd soul, Like the eagles who appreciate the splendours of the sky,I must sing sweet songs of thy love: Thy love is the blustery breeze,it blows sorrows away, thy love glows like the moon at night,to bring joy to despodent hearts, like the sun,you glisten by day 2 lighten the world; words alone can't extol thy beauty, thy beauty is beyond believe! You're an epitome of love, an emblem of peace! Come my love, and stand beside me, let me tell the world you mean the whole world 2 me:"my pride and joy you are". Rekindled love is as sweet as honey! She is all I need 2 b happy! Please don't just read and go,drop a comment,if u dnt know,your comments r indispensible....God bles u as u do dat! |
Fyn gal...u're a woman of great erudition... I lyk ur poems.....wil b glad 2 make your acquaintance! |
Datz a gud 1 dearie..the young writers club wil b great..i can't wait 2 see us start |
As the trio of Emeka,Denilson,and Ngozi lumbered by,walking as if they had all the time in the world;Emeka started 2 chew the side of his mouth,a habit Ngozi knew from experience was normally the prelude 2 a derogatory remark. "The governor made a spectacle of himself",he snapped. "That's a blatant lie! He was elegently dressed in a prim suit",Denilson snapped a reply. "please don't speak ill of the man who brought smiles 2 the depressed faces of this community.He is a man of emminent character,an emblem of peace."Ngozi remarked. "It's OK".Emeka snapped. "Ehm...what do you think of my proposal,Ngozi?"Denilson questioned. "It's obvious that she will snub your proposal,that am sure",he said cynically. "Don't be so juvenile!",Denilson remarked ineptly. "I accept your proposal,sweetheart!"she said taking a momentry glance at Emeka. The inclusion of the sweetheart in her remark was to arouse the ire of Emeka. Emeka stared at them with jaundiced eye and for some inexplicable reason,Emeka took another road and left. "Don't mind him,he is only being jealous",Ngozi said taking Denilson's hand. The took a path by the left and settled on a fallen mango tree and began 2 make an avowal of love b4 the trees,which were swaying gently in the breeze. "sweetheart",began Denilson,"I appreciate your love just as the eagle appreciates the splendours of the sky". "You're one in a million.My pride and joy;I will always love you! I've got you under my skin",she stopped abruptly and they snogged passionately. "I've spoken 2 my father,he is the VC of our school,he agreed 2 make way for you 2 study your dream course,mass communication!".Emeka said taking Ngozi's hands. "wow! Thanks sweetheart.Words alone cannot extol your virtues",she said amid tears of joy. "Think nothing of it,please",he begged. "Our love shall grow by leaps and bounds",Ngozi remarked. "And i strongly believe that we are compatible",Denilson said. "Then you must be a dreamer by temperament!",Emeka snapped. "what's this intrusion about?"Ngozi enquired. "Have your tongue in check,Miss,before you do yourself wrong",he remarked crisply. "I can't get a wink of sleep because thoughts of you have crippled my mind! I am just feeling lovelorn,forlorn and disheartened;am suffering from the pangs of unrequited love",he said amid tears of frustration and his demeanour changed."she is mine,he continued,"please Denilson". "I am sorry buddy,but I cant help out.We are madly in love with each other",Denilson said with a certain hesistancy in his voice. "please,Emeka i know you love me,but I've found another lover,you must learn 2 accept defeat",Ngozi pleaded. "I won't.Not for all the tea in China! He must die."he said,bringing out an automatic pistol. "Please I beg you in God's name,let's settle this amicably",Denilson begged. Emeka chortled with delight. He looked at Denilson with scorn and giggled.The lovebirds were at wit's end. "kiss yourselfs goodbye because this nefarious act I must accomplish.Albiet, it's as hard as breaking rocks,i will do it!"Emeka said. He pointed the pistol at Denilson and was about 2 shoot,when Ngozi shouted: "No ooöoooo... I need your comments 2 spur me 2 continue writing...constructive criticisms are welcome. |
"u're a consummate performer",Emeka said.."your performance was mesmerizing",David added,"u made us proud".The two boys had been trying 2 win Ngozi's love,but neither of them had the guts 2 accost her."Thanks",she said smiling.Ngozi was a girl of 18;she was plump,tall and elegant;she had an ebony skin.Her sublime beauty was a joy 2 behold.Dancing is 1 of her faves and,in it she found solace.No wonder dancing won her plaudits from the incumbent governor of Nasarawa state,in person of Mr.Ahmadu Uba(aka the Governor).The Governor had visited Government College Doma,located in the outskirts of the capital,Lafia;not only 2 bid the graduating students of the College farewell,but to also bestow awards on deserving student and staff.The trio-Emeka,Ngozi,and Dave were among the graduants.The presence of the Governor and the inclusion of drama presentation,wrestling, debate,quiz,dancing,and sports competitions made the occasion exhilarating.During the dancing competition,Ngozi was the cysnosure of all eyes,she did outdo her competitors as the danced 2 the rythm of the 'mayeye' dance.She danced with practised steps:moving to and fro in comfirmity with the rythm.She sang with gusto or rather,with verve and vitality.Her mezzo-soprano voice was a delight 2 listen;almost all the audience,if not,will live 2 remember her meliflous voice.She received a standing ovation as she curtsed 2 the Governor.Much 2 the dismay of her critics,even the Governor who was clad in a prim suit with a necked collar,stood 2 sing her accolades.At the end of the occasion,Ngozi won the "Miss Best"award bestowed on the best dancer of each closing term in the College.She receive the award with alarcrity.The winner of the Miss Best usually smiled home with the enormous sum of N200,000;so all the girls in the school worked assidously,practised regularly,some even go 2 the extent of hiring the services of a music teacher,so as 2 be victorious at the end,but definitely 'everybody cannot be a winner!' On her way home,Emeka made 4 her,on reaching near her,he stopped abruptly and thought on how 2 begin his sentence;2 him,dat was the best way 2 elude a clunker. "congrats Miss Best!",he said. "Thanks",she said with a grim face. She disliked Emeka because he was amoral:not only did he fancy a devil-may-care attitude 2 life,but also,he basks in the europhia of treating even substantial subjects with gay abandon.Emeka was her first lover,but the broke up after all Emeka was interested in was the quick consummation of love.In a few words,he gets randy easily.Although he loved her,he needed sex desperately as it's intrinsic 2 his character.Contrariwise,all Ngozi wanted was strictly "platonic Love" and that love she had found in Denilson,a boy of 19,an undergraduate of University of Nigeria,Nsukka,studying Law. "Sweetheart,I want us 2 b friends again,biko!",he begged. "Don't tell me you are trying 2 play cupid,are you? "No",Emeka managed a reply. "we're friends already,but I sense a certain hesistancy in your voice.Isn't it time you come clean with me about your feelings?".She asked. "OK",he said,"I want us 2 be good friends!" "Be just good friends",she question but not trying 2 b inquisitive,"it's yours for the asking" "Ngozi!",shouted someone from afar.She turned only 2 catch a glimpse of a trio of Sam,Uche,and Denilson approaching.She couldn't contend her glee;her comes the man she loves;the apple of her eye;the man who requited her love.Her joy knew no bounds:it was as boundless as the sea. "Congrats Miss Best",they shouted as their voice rose in a crescendo. "Thanks",she said with a beautific smile.She meet Denilson's gaze without flinching.She was elated 2 see Denilson who made a proposal 2 her,a fortnight ago. "What's eating you up,Emeka?",Uche asked noticing how despodent he looked.He gave a quizzical glare,and replied:"Nothing dearie". "Ngozi",Uche began,"your performance made the crowd 2 listen and watch you meticulously..." "with rapt attention",Sam interpolated. "she is the uncrowned queen of the Nigeria Entertainment Industry",Denilson remarked. "She'll be famous 1 day.what do you reckon,Uche?"Sam asked. "obviously yes",uche said without demur. "I concur with Sam in his view",Denilson said,"she is no mediocre dancer". "Thanks for the compliments",she said with a wide grin. As they sauntered by,everybody present was elated,Ngozi's victory made them so.Uche and his twin brother Sam,both undergraduates of UNN,Nsukka,suddenly took the left path of the main road leading directly 2 their one-storied house,while Emeka,Denilson and Ngozi continued walking on the pavement. "We shall be wining and dining at your house tonight, Denilson". "wow! you are welcome!"Denilson said. "Goodbye celebrity",Uche said with the air of a professional Lawyer,"u're the favour of the month". "Hmm",Sam sighed,"congrats dearie". "Bye",each group said as the parted ways.Denilson and Uche were studying Law,while Sam was studying Medicine,all in the same university. Check nxt page |
Gud idea! I wil b glad 2 b part of this congenial club...my email...Linusking4real@yahoo.com |
It was a starlit night, the moon was glittering like gold, the wind whirled with a gentle zephyr the birds were singing deliriously in the sky, and their melifluous voices,was a delight 2 listen, like a child,a litte boy i was lost in wonder:the splendours of nature was enthralling! The gifts of nature looked pristine! Then i asked myself:why have humans not made much of their time? We lay waste our powers and "gifts!" Never for once thought of our hidden talents; what becomes of you when your talent is hidden? God is great! Nature is gold! Time is a racing horse! Beauty is only skin-deep! Brag not of wat u don't have, utilize your talent and the best will come out of it! Waste not a minute,because it is precious, make judicious use of every second, procrastination must be your arc-enemy! I have nailed by colours to the mast! A spartan life is always the best! |
The beauty of living comes before our ends, but our minds like strong stones,with rebel and zest refuse to mend,repair,nor with our best, serve with a grateful mind,our Lord;it bends us not-even when at rest that our ends like the rain falls,and we run like angry waters in their happy and coldly moods. Our ends draw near,and virtue is like expensive goods! As autumn leaves shine in the sun: we're not out of the woods! |
Y nt? If he has true luv,i wil o.....my sister z a human,nd as a doting brother i wil do all within my powers 2 giv her hapines...if my friend is sincere,i wil let him befriend her....coz wat z meant 2 b wil b! |
Afta d jamb examz,av found it hard 2 concentrate as i dnt knw d particular subjects 2 study...i applied mas.cum unn.plz help! |
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