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@shegirl71

How u doing, gurl? want'd to say u're in no position to be judging rap lines, coz' u don't know the basics. Those words don't really rhyme, but i give it up to Sauron, coz' they're wat i call SLANT RHYMES, NEAR RHYMES or PARTIAL RHYMES. e,g.

ORANGE rhymes with LOZENGE, FOREIGN,

They don't really sound well, but as a rapper who knows his onions, you've gotta change your intonation and make them' sound like real rhymes. That's the job!

Peace!