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Mr shroud: Bro,from what i've observed you've got the flare and dexterity.
I've done a piece or two on lit.section before, from my phone.
I know how it is.
Just keep it up, u'll get there.

Tanx a lot Boss! realy apreciate and am glad u knw aw it is xpecially for sum1 jaz coming out. tanx a lot..

enomasly: Na wa oo u blow small u just dump updating

Things aint d way u r tinking bro.. bt i promic i ll try my best...tanx for ff...

wadup beautiful pple!! am sorry i couldnt update as promised, i was a little bit down but God willing i will update tommorow... am sorry nd tanx for following nd dnt forgt ur comments means alot...

Yo beautiful people! hang around cuz i ll be uploading d next episode soon..

enomasly: Bros abeg just a lil more

lil more update?

EPISODE9

Our first journey was a visit to a private psychatric hospital where she introduced me to a mad man whom she called williams.

Williams was a young man of around 28yrs, he was fair and very handsome infact he's the type they call

"ladies man"...

while we stood at the corner of a room containinng four patients having mental problem as their actions and utterances show they were having mental touch, and no one noticed our presence as she narrated her ordeal with willams to me.

Alisha as she called herself said williams was her first boyfriend in her ghost life.

"I met williams and his fiancee in a friends birthday party and he was all over me even at first sight not respecting the fact that his fiancee was around.
I tried so hard to avoid him but he wouldnt let me be" Alisha said.

He was stubborn as he collected my phone no.

He called me the following day saying he loved me and he was ready to dump his fiancee for me,

I felt pity for the poor lady and made up my mind to teach williams a lesson of his life.

I started out with williams and immediately made him love me completely.

Each time i see him i always felt pity for his soul because i knew just what i was going to do with it.

Williams and I had wonderful sex together as that was all he cared about and since its the best shot i got to ruin him the way i want then i gave it to him in excess and made sure i allowed him much access through the back as any man that had it with me from the back has surely reached his doom.

Williams lost all he had within two weeks of meeting me and i turned his back to evrybody he knew both family and friends.

And when he had nothing again and no one to turn to i showed him my real self.
The version of me that no one will see and ever be the same again and that is how williams turned a mad man but luckily for him the poor fiancee never stopped loving him and she's been taking care of him here since then hoping he will get well someday.

And that will never happen because i appear to him and show him that same thing that made him loose his sense every night and the more he sees, the more mad he gets.

And that was how williams uncontended attitude led him to his doom and loosing his sanity"

Alisha concluded and turned to me where i was standing and sweating profusely like a christmas goat and looking like my tongue has been cut out as i couldnt say a word because i found it hard to think of what to say becuase i know i had entered through the back too and i couldnt believe i had met my doom too..

I was still lost in my thought when she said to me

"lets go, we ve got places to visit".......

balingat: i real enjoyed the story, keep it up, i pray that God will grant ur heart desire and crown ur effort.

A big Amen Nd tanx to you bro... keep enjoying da flow like 1759....

[quote author=Foxy_Flow]You made a mistake in my name and that is what I am here to correct

Foxybone
Foxy_Rebirth
Foxy_Ultimate
Foxy_Vista
Foxy_Flow (haba!!!)
Foxy_Version7
Yellow_Mosquito

and counting...

The name is FOXY and not FLOXY as you spelled it!!!

Will read your story now and be ready for enough **sights HumbledbyGrace**, no point, my twin sister is here so she will be doing the correction though she flaunted a deal we had!!!

Keep it up, we all started somewhere!!! [/quote]oh! my bad... so sorry abt dat bro..

HumbledbYGrace: I was here, as a learner myself I have learned that this section is a wid, wild west. You read, and read and read to be a writer...I have seen a lot of people saying; "I decided to write as all are writing." Its not a thing u just wake-up and do, for me its passion and when ur passionate about what you do, you learn to avoid many unnecessary mistakes and please as a newbie, do your thing. Do not follow the crowd just so u can get plenty viewers...its what's in your heart that matters.

*crawls back into her hole with the script*

Later.

Thanks ma'am... noted and greatly apreciated..

Kpo kpo kpo ooooo!!! abeg make una all go read my new story A TOUR WITH A GHOST oooo!!! read, comment, correct and encourage a new writer as i join d NL writers association lol... leggo beautiful people.... God Bless us all...

keep droping d bomb my two ogas at the top.. infact am enjoying u two xpecially d big boss flow.. nd baba floxy u na dey try wella and na y i choose una two and oga mazi as my mentor... pls go help read my story too A TOUR WITH A GHOST and advice,correct and encourage a new writer... God bless Flow, God bless Floxy-Flow, God bless NL, God bless us all!!!

" I notice some changes and the Op has tried in correcting some of his mistakes" quote dis post or like....

thanks.. look out for Episode 9...

Blessed morning y'all... sorry for da delay in upload, u knw aw phcn can be na.... bt ll definitely upload 1episode 2day nd ll work on modifying my past updates nd work on the spacing as well... tanx

Am so sorry i was unable to upload yestday, i ll try to upload dis 9t... keep checking..

Am sorry i had to change the title from Ghoul to Ghost due to d suggestions i get from readers from other sites... tanx as u follow nd dont forgt to comment nd correct pls.. God bless

HumbledbYGrace: click 'modify' on that story's first post, there ontop you can edit the tittle.

tanx ma'am

pls aw do i change d title of a story i already started??

pardon my late uploading.... ll upload soon...

Chuksemi: Here is a few....
1. Write in paragraphs.
2. Spell your words correctly.
3.learn character development(i really dont know this one).
4. Try to correct your tenses; and try to use punctuations in correct places.

We're all learners.

I type with phone so paragraphing aint realy easy wif a phone bt ll tend to d rest... tanx

dnt jaz peep in, comment nd encourage na atleast na sumwr pple like flow, mazi nd d rest start... oya make u na coment oo

tubolancer: The story is interesting but there are some missing links and it needs a lot of editing.

tanx.. will look into it..

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EPISODE8

It was barely 10minutes after we finished when i felt my eyes were turning and i was feeling uneasy.

she saved me the stress of thinking what might be d cause when she tapped my shoulder and told me to sit up, i did reluctantly thinking she wanted another round and i didnt want her to think i was tired but she saved me d agony when she said she wanted to talk to me.

She started by calling me by my full name which caught me as a suprised as i was sure i neva told her my full name and there is no way she could have managed to get to any of my credentials.

I calmed myself wanting to know what she had to say that made her called me by my full name.

She started her story by telling me she had known me a long time ago, that she's been dead for over 18yrs and ever since then she av been responsible for many death and mostly making people loose their sanity and thereby making them insane with different pains and agony.

She said she had been trying to get to me but its been hard for her but she saw my father's death as an opportunity to get to me,

she said she appeared like it was me to attend my fathers burial, she said she put my car on fire cuz she knew i have to be in Lagos that day if i want to keep my job and she followed me to the park and since she had the power to captivate me to fall for her at a glance then it was an easy task to get to me that way and me having sex with her means shes gotten full control of my soul and have the power to make me whatever she wants,

But before then, i will have to travel around with her as she would want me to see few of the people she has gotten to and changed their life from perfect to worse.

I was covered with sweat but had a very blank mind as i dont know what to say or what to do,

I noticed av almost forgotten evrything that has to do with my life as i couldnt think of anything personal and she latter announced to me that she can make me visible and invisible anytime she want and that we will both be invisible to everyother person except to each other as she take me around and so my TOUR WITH A GHOST started......

Chuksemi: bro,i would have criticizd. Buh i know its tough being a writer...just read other stories and learn a thing or two.
Meself be learner!

tanx so much bro.. i knw i still got a lot to learn at least from d likes of mazi, flow1759, floxy nd d rest bt sinc its my 1st i blive i ll soon blend in.... tnx bro

purpinkx: " Better get your vest better get your gun cos in lit. Section it's a wild wild west "
nice but no spacing that's the reason you see no comment cos they expect you to know that you need spacing

well bro, i gat it. dis is actually my 1st and am looking forward to corrections and advice and urs is greatly apreciated...

EPISODE7

We got to my apartment around 7.30pm cuz of d heavy traffic evrywhere in d city.

I was tired but it was a miracle i felt relaxed forgetting i had any problem, i even forgot about the proposal am supposed to submit to keep my job.

I didnt even bother to reach my fiancee which i knew must be so disturbed cuz my phone has been off since d previous day.

I told my new housemate whose name was Alisha to feel comfortable.

We later made dinner together which seem as the perfect time to tell her my story and she felt sad and i could see pity in her eyes.

We finished eating and retired to bed early.

She insisted she would sleep with me in my room cuz she didnt want to leave me alone to myself and I had to succumb easily seeing it as an opportunity to have such pretty by my side through d night.

We ve been on d bed for like an hour and i couldnt sleep, i felt like touching her but was scared cuz i dnt knw wat her reaction might be.

I laid down beside her thinking what i could do, i was still thinking when she asked suddenly if i was sleeping already,

i answered "No" immediately not knowing why she asked, she moved closer to me putting her head on my wild chest, i felt blood run down my spine, my heart beating fast and i felt embarrased when she said to me "calm down" which i obeyed immediately.

She moved up kissing my lips and i accepted the invitation willingly kissing her back and stroking her long hair,

we started wild fumbling with her top to get where her fresh nice breast were, squeezing the two almost at d same time,
then i ease the short knicker she had on down her knees and i had access to her clitoris rubbing it gently.

I sucked her breast a little before i went down to give her a very wild Mouth Action which turned out she was enjoying as she let out a sweet mourn evry few seconds, she interupted me when she turned me making me lie on my back then removed my boxers and brought sensation to my body putting d tip of my d**k in her warm mouth before she started sucking it vigorously,

i stopped her latter pulling her up so that she can be at d top as i enter her,
the inside was warm and my whole body system responded immediately as she let out a loud mourn as i entered and started rocking her inside,

she stopped latter and told me to stand up while she bend on her knees, her chest on d bed, i went in from d back and it dawned on me like i was having the best moment of my life.

It all ended when i came into her after she had came few minutes before me. I laid down on d bed beside her while we both tried to catch some breath and within me i was feeling like i had won a lottery not knowing i had won myself nothing but a big trouble.....

EPISODE6

I left my family at around 10.00am and headed straight to d park to board a bus with my heart heavy and my whole body weak.

I got to d park and made myself comfortable in d front sit while i replayed to myself how the last 24hrs had been for me while d bus awaits 2more passengers before we can start our journey.

I was still thinking when i looked up and saw a very pretty Lady coming straight to d bus i was and i diverted my whole attention to her forgetting my problems immediately, She was fair, tall with long black hair, and a perfect shape.

She walked straight to me and asked "is there someone here already?" Pointing to d sit next to me, i said no immediately with a smile which she returned immediately.

Few minutes later the bus took off and we started our journey..

20minutes later the pretty lady asked if i have any new single from 2pac.

I was shocked &suprised, but i answered "No" warmly and told her 2pac is dead knowing she just wanted to start a conversation and i damned myself for allowing her beat me to it.

I took it up immediately asking her where she'd been all this while not knowing 2pac's been dead long time ago.

she laughed it off saying she just started having interest in his rap and know nothing about him.

We talked about many things and she made me forgot how d last 24hrs had been for me.

she talked exclusively about herself which took us to d point where she told me about the hostile way of her uncle's wife whom she's been staying with since her parents died few years ago and that she left home for Lagos not knowing where she was going but she know she will be safer anywhere than her uncle's house.

I felt pity for her immediately asking her if she wouldnt mind staying in my house till she get where she could stay.

An opportunity she jumped at and thanked me immensely......

EPISODE5

I was still sleeping when i heard some noise streaming in from within d compound,

i strugled to open my eyes, stood up and moved close to d window and pulled the curtain to see what was happening.

I was suprised and shocked when i saw my mother, my brother, and d little people dat stayed d night with us shouting

And evrybody was trying to do just one thing which was to put off d fire that is turning my 7months old car into ashes,

I couldnt move cuz i just didnt knw wat to do and that was were i stood as i watch my most valuable property burn..

Moments later they were able to put off d fire, but it was almost the same as leaving it to burn off completely cuz it was already beyound repair.

I consoled mysef already even before people tried to console me but d whole thing remained a misery to me.

My dad had just died d previous night, i was robbed d previous day, i lost my phone which was d only link people can get through to me, I lost my lucky watch and dat was when i remember i av lost another thing which might as well make me loose my job.

I jumped up from where i was sitting down and rushed out.

Everybody in the living room rushed out with me even though they didnt know why i acted like that but i was sure some of them will think i was running mad.

But i actually rushed out to d remenant of my car to see if d proposal i was supossed to submit d following day for my company for a big project which i had at the back sit of my car was still there.

But my guess was right cuz my job was d next in line as d whole envelope dat contained d proposal has already turned to ashes.

I screamed in horrow knowing what lies ahead but nobody could understand my sudden act cuz i seem calm minutes ago even more dan they had xpected.

I announced to my family that i have to be on my way to Lagos after I had explained my reason was to go see if i can still get a solution to d problem at hand as their was no phone with me again to make contact so i have to go try and sort things out.

They were reluctant as they are not sure what i might do to myself but had no choice than to let me try whatever i can do not to loose my job like i just lost my dad and other properties and even my sanity within 24hrs...

dnt just view pls... comment, correct nd advise..... i need dem all

EPISODE4

It was actually true what i saw ahead of me..

pointing a gun at me was one of the six hefty men that has taken over the highway at both sides.

"Damn" i said under my breathe as they wave me to stop which i had no other option than to do just that.

I was so scared because i never realy experience such.

Even though i remember when i was in the university when i had to lie to my parents that i was robbed of my laptop simply bcus i wanted to change my old Hp then to a new one but now am into it for real and am scared to death.

One of the armed robbers opened d door for me to come down like am a chief and truly i felt honored but i knew deep down within me that am gonna pay a big price for the honor i was getting.

I barely stood upright when he slapped me and comnanded me to lie down, a slap that made my eyes sparkle.

I saw many cars lined up and all the peopple they have robbed gathered in a spot but what i noticed immediately was that they didnt collect their car key and that made me feel relaxed a little.

The first thing he requested for was my phone, wchich i gave him my blackberry without hesitating a bit and d next was my wallet which i dropped too.

He askd for my briefcase which he gave back to me after he has seen what was inside.

He was just abt to direct me to where the other are when he shouted

"come here"

I moved closer to him and he said;

"commot that watch"

I felt very bad and wanted to say

"bros abeg collect evrything and leave this watch"

But i reason am wella say what if he decided to take my life?

I took d wrist watch off reluctantly and handed it over to d useless pig cursing him not for any reason but for collecting what i see as my lucky charm, and that thought alone made me feel like i av no luck left again.

We were all there for another 2hours after they ve robbed close to 40cars after mine.

we were all saved when we heard d wailing of sirens, in which the thieves gathered up and drove off leaving us there.

The police men got to us, and they split up after we had told them which direction they went.

some of them who stayed with us calmed us and arranged us to drive out and continue our journey again while some people turned back and like an hour later i was already on my way cursing because it was past 3 in d afternoon already and i know they would av buried my father by the time i got home as there is no phone to contact me.

I felt very bad and somehow weak at d same time.

I got home 2hrs later and was suprised when evrybody greeted me like av been around before.

I was more suprised when one of my uncle told me he's pleased with where i choosed for the burial of my father.

I asked whats happening and tried to explain my delay but i was suprised when i heard them all mumured in dismay and my brother explained av been around since around 1pm and even said d last prayer for my dad with them and that i took excuse 20minutes ago that i wanted to go check something and would be bak soon.

I was dumbfounded as i didnt know what to say again.

I shouted "it wasnt me"

But i knew they didnt belive me.

All they were thinking is how bad and hard my fathers death as strucked me that i even forgot things easily.

I even heard some people murmured

"hope hes not going mad sha".

I was suprised and didnt know what step to take again.

As all could think was

"something is wrong and whatever it is has to be checked"

i decided to let evrything cool off that day with the thought of bringing it up the following day.

And with that thought in mind i went ahead to sleep off the stress and the bad day i had not knowing another worst day lie ahead.....

EPISODE3

It was a very cold morning as i stepped out of my appartment with my small briefcase which contained my cloth, and some stuffs i may be needing.

I walked straight to where i parked my car (Honda Baby Boy) the previous night.

I didnt bother to clean it up like i used to do, i just opened the bonnet to check the oil guage since i ll be going a long journey.

satisfied that everything was okay, i decided to pray and start my journey.

I drove off my compound onto the street where everything seem okay with every other people except me.

I kept on my journey to avoid getting into a serious traffic that may delay me and it was then i realized i wasnt feeling hungry which is unlike me because i take breakfast nothing latter than 7.30 in the morning and its 9.30 already and there was no traces of hunger yet.

It was then i said to myself

"oh boy you dey mourn true true oh"

Then my whole body felt cold again bringing on another memory reminding me i just loose another best friend the second time this year.

Its not up to 3months when i lost my best friend who was supposed to be my best man at my wedding which was suppose to come up soon.

Dapo was my close friend from secondary school and we maintained our friendship through our university days.

After NYSC he got a job almost immediately after i got my job as the Assistant managing director of the construction firm am working.

Dapo has been asthmatic right from secondary school but it has not been serious and so it wasnt something to be realy concerned about.

But it proved us all wrong when my friend started working as a factory supervisor where his work has to do with different types of gases but my friend had no choice since there was no other option and so he simply took the offer not knowing he was accepting his death warrant.

Dapo worked in his new company for like 7months when he started feeling sick but he never took it serious till it lead to his death one afternoon at work where it was reported that my tall,handsome friend Dapo collapsed at work where he was supervising some work just 10minutes after we talked on phone, and it was late before they could get him to the company's hospital and that was how i loose my friend.

I was just getting myself from the thought of Dapo when i noticed some odd things right ahead of me when it was already late to turn back and i murmured to myself

"this had better not be true".....