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Time by StephenP(m): 10:16pm On Jun 17, 2008
I’ve got no words strong enough to express
This landslide of thoughts and emotions that carry me away from you
I snatch time from the tick tocks to stop myself
From seeing the locks placed on your heart
But the clock refuses to move in reverse
So I could rehearse the words that needed to be said
Like I love you
But time runs on a pace much faster than I
And so I no longer stand by you
And it seems futile to unlock these thick layers of misery that guard you
Because you hold on to it as if there were treasures intertwined in the pain that bind you
If I offered you freedom you would claim it to be disdained affection
So all the same I couldn’t offer you love if it is what would save you from your afflictions
All I can do is follow the current and let the waves wash me upon the shores of love’s delightful addictions
Because the more I fight the sea for our love, he takes you farther away from me
So no more questions and tearful goodbyes
This will be unspoken
Let’s just watch time fly
Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
With the long hand on you and the short hand on I
And for a moment
I will remember
When we were
In love
Again
Re: Time by NubianQ(f): 10:34pm On Jun 17, 2008
did u write that? good!
Re: Time by tope2000(f): 10:35pm On Jun 17, 2008
Pls dont beg me to stop crying cry cry cry cry cry beautiful!!!!!!!
Re: Time by StephenP(m): 10:36pm On Jun 17, 2008
tope2000:

Please don't beg me to stop crying cry cry cry cry cry beautiful!!!!!!!

Aww. . . kiss thanks.
NubianQ:

did u write that? good!

Yeah I try to write poems in my spare time.
Re: Time by tope2000(f): 10:38pm On Jun 17, 2008
So no more questions and tearful goodbyes
This will be unspoken
Let’s just watch time fly
Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
With the long hand on you and the short hand on I
And for a moment
I will remember
When we were
In love
Again


My best part, Bravo!!!!
You this boy just want me to change my mind abt not dating a guy that i am older than ehn  grin grin
Re: Time by NubianQ(f): 10:38pm On Jun 17, 2008
StephenP,

ur girl is lucky. poems re beautiful , all it takes are people to appreciate them
Re: Time by Nobody: 10:40pm On Jun 17, 2008
Wow!! I gotta give it to you hon, that was good!!! kiss

But like I told you before stephen, our love can never be. , leave me. . go!! go!!! . . , .until we meet again grin grin
Re: Time by StephenP(m): 10:42pm On Jun 17, 2008
Tope, I'm happy you like it.

NubianQ:

StephenP,

your girl is lucky. poems re beautiful , all it takes are people to appreciate them

I know. . .

4Her:

Wow!! I gotta give it to you hon, that was good!!! kiss

But like I told you before stephen, our love can never be. , leave me. . go!! go!!! . . , .until we meet again grin grin

LOL!! Don't worry I know it'll come back in disguise.
Re: Time by Sisikill: 2:44am On Jun 18, 2008
This is so sweet and so sad.

Brilliant!!!
Re: Time by Sisikill: 2:46am On Jun 18, 2008
tope2000:

So no more questions and tearful goodbyes
This will be unspoken
Let’s just watch time fly
Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
With the long hand on you and the short hand on I
And for a moment
I will remember
When we were
In love
Again


My best part, Bravo!!!!

Me too.
Re: Time by Nobody: 3:46am On Jun 18, 2008
Bless your soul Stephen. I really mean it.

Time never stops or rewinds
But love will come twice in disguise
Re: Time by StephenP(m): 9:59pm On Jun 18, 2008
Thanks for the love people.
Re: Time by DaPhoenix(f): 3:34am On Jun 20, 2008
Nice! I hope you copyright all your stuff because they are that good.
Re: Time by StephenP(m): 8:04pm On Jun 28, 2008
@daphoenix, thanks mami. By the way, where are you? I haven't seen you in a long ass time.
Re: Time by bluespice(f): 10:11pm On Dec 21, 2008
smiley cry
dunno how else to say am smiling with tears

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