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validstar1:
Wow so a story like this exists on Nairaland.Mr Pabon u are a very talented writer...infact you're #MADE OF MORE.

Thanks mate. Another update cooking...watch out.



#Made Of More!

Mrlemuel:
Morning Sir, As For The Blog Paglarizing Ur Story, Kindly Note Where They Updated Last, And Then Maybe U Shld Cut Them Off From Here By Removing A Couple Of The Nxt Update From Here Which They R To Post On Theirs, Thereby Derailing Them Away From The Story, Afterall They Cant Knw What It Is.

Yeah. Though I think it's one of those copy and paste bloggers whose source is Nairaland...Some weeks ago this thread made front page. My guess is that's when he/she copied it because it actually links back to Nairaland.

nkemdave:
Wishing u a great morning too

Thanks. Keep reading...

siralabai:
Good morning OP, George should find an extremely emphatic way of putting Dathan in his place, I detest that guy from the first time he was described in this story.

N.B. Kindly correct the aspect where you wrote Satan instead of Dathan, Although they sound alike.

Like Oliver Twist, I'm gonna ask for more!!!

Oh thanks. I will correct it immediately... and I thought I corrected it oo...

Guys... I'm sorry... I tend to use that phrase too much these days... but I truly am. Check my heart and you will find it's true... I'm just so busy thinking money thoughts...the graduate I just became.

Ehen, something happened this morning. I googled my thread to update because... well, I didn't bookmark and knew it must have gotten down the pecking order... that's by the way...

Lo and behold, I saw a site that had my story as one of their News headline. isn't that akin to plagiarism or theft of intellectual property? And I have plans to publish oo... what to do?

Nimat158, I see you..


#MadeofMore!

Good morning guys.

Cc: Nkemdave Rockhillz Mhiz Siralabai Faruq37 Afz9095 Mrlemuel Emmanuel1997 Ekoroprince.




#Made of more!

On getting there he saw what looked like an enraged Dathan. He had the lady hanging in the air as he channeled the current towards her from the scepter he held. She was visibly strained, drained of all her strength. She was going to pass out any moment and the guy, her sidekick ust stood there unable to do anything. Dathan was grinning diabolically. George immediately blasted his staff from his hand.

“Reflexonta! “

The scepter left his hand and spiraled fast into George’s ready hand which gripped it firmly as it entered his hand. Dathan meanwhile was flung backwards, the force obviously too strong and too sudden for him to take. Nora too fell to the floor in a heap and the ‘wobbly legged’ dude rushed to her to check if she was okay.

“How dare you? Do you know the implication of what you’ve just done?”
A chuckle escaped his throat. He brandished the wood twisting it in his hand and looking it round much time Dathan’s displeasure.

“If I were you very I would mind my speech now. I’m the one wielding the scepter now. Although I have no need of this to smack your ass.”
He kept mum but his eyes burned with anger. George knew that if he had his way, he wouldn’t waste time blasting him out to nothingness. This one clearly wasn’t used to playing subordinate.

“By the way, where did you get this? It’s quite a piece of art you know. Not one for toddlers to be messing with… “

Dathan shot George an angry look. It was Nora who responded.

“He stole it from the tomb of the Lord Thorank himself . The thief that he is. It’s the tomb that has never been desecrated and he just did it with impunity. “ She turned to him. “Evil awaits you I tell you! “

Dathan gave her the tongue treatment. He had got up now and was eying the scepter with keen attention. George knew this and his grip on the piece of wood tightened. He knew though that the dude had no magical powers and so his only hope of getting the scepter back was snatching it from his hand.

“Here’s what you will do…. You will lead me to the tomb of Thorank where I will return this scepter back to its rightful position and seal the tomb so no one tries what you did again”

“And why would I do that?”
George held out the rod close to him. “You’ve got a better option? “ He wasn’t really as bold as his speech made him seem. He shifted fretfully as the rod came close to him. He gave George a ‘deal-with-you-soon” look as he led the way down the bush track. The lady, Nora and the guy didn’t move.

“Ain’t you guys coming? “ The lady shook her head and the guy affirmed. We have better things to do than continue to share the same air with that miscreant. Dathan snarled and George shot him a warning look.
“You know what? I change my decision…I know this guy is up to no good. I bet he is already cooking up a plan to outdo you. I should go with you. I understand him better than he likes to admit… that is why he despises me so much. Isn’t that right, Harris? “

“Oh yeah! “ He said smiling. Turned out a beautiful name was given to a guy who was so not beautiful in strength and courage. He took over pushing Dathan down the way. He sure was going to enjoy the journey. He was followed by George and flanked by Nora, the supposed boss lady. She preferred to stay behind and not be led, the boss lady she was. George smirked as he went ahead of her. He could sense her gaze burning into the back of his head. He wondered if Satan was the only threat here.

“Just to clarify…. Are you the same guy that followed us into that pool? “ Nora asked.

Rex1:
Bros I want u to go n finish DAT story of urs cos the fact that u hav let that story hanging since the month of March is tiring, annoying, uncalled for, unwarranted, despicable,.... abeg help me out, which other adjectives I fit use take qualify u fuckup?

Are you for real? I've been updating though really slow....

Bikonu put me down!

Rex1:
Wow!!! I don't know if I am loving the writeup or the writer more but hey, I'm loving every bit's of ur work miss blair01. N to my other colleagues: NevetsIbot, ironkurtain, solomonbrown64,darkid, cdstar, jomagibs n pabon wey don over fall my hands not even 1 hand, u are all hereby invited to come n enjoy a romantic piece by miss blair01 titled: NOTHING lIKE LOVE

Bros afar na... what I do? What does you want from me?

nkemdave:
Hope u are physical and medical strong. Please update soon ooooo.........

Hey Nkemdave et al. I'm really sorry I haven't updated this story for some time...was working on some stuffs. I will try to see what I can come up with today should my battery cooperate...its just that I'm trying to see what I can get on the money side...

Much love


#MadeofMore

Good pm lovely people...

I'm sorry I won't be able to update today or next... I have some writing project that I need to take care of. It's gonna occupy me for four days... Or perhaps, if you wouldn't mind, I could just drop some snippets kinda update... Just few lines...

Got to make some money...

Yeah, and I guess you know now. I write articles. So if you've got an article or articles to write or outsource, I can probably write it for you. I also do rewriting... I'm really made of more... Lol!


When next I come your way....

Keep your comments coming... I really need them to encourage me to finish this piece... I sometimes run out of motivation.

Ciao!


#MadeofMore

Thanks Afz9095 for the share.




#MadeofMore!

just had to hurriedly type that as my battery is low...been having power issue.Sorry for leaving you guys hanging.

Gat to go...



#MadeofMore!

“Hi George!
He didn’t know whether to be happy or angry. But he just had to clear things.
“What’s happened to me?” There was a short spell of silence during which George was thinking of possible answers that he could come up with. Had he died and Alexius taken over his body to ensure that his destiny was fulfilled? Was this another kind of test? He wished the later were the case. Where he would just have to go back to being who he was.

“I am Alexius and you are you!”
“So how come I have your image?”
BLANK
He wished Alexius was present right now, standing face-to-face with him, so he could punch his face. Why was he playing on his sensitivity?
Just then he spoke up.

“I really didn’t mean for you to find out this way. I feel the time has come for you to know. Your awakening has finally begun. The image I paraded had always been yours. I had only been the custodian. The image you now possess is truly yours, you’d have to get used to it. It had been my responsibility to do that to ensure that it wasn’t lost forever when you were given that of the court's Chamberlain who was killed before we left. You’d have been killed had your image not been switched. You were one of Manterror's main target.
George kept numb not knowing what to say. It wasn’t going to be easy adapting to his new features but damn was he now so handsome.

“So you mean you were parading yourself clothed in my own image? You impersonator!”

“Well. I had to. For one you began respecting me after you saw what I looked like”
“What you looked like or what you made us believe you looked like? “
He laughed loud now more relaxed. He spread his hand on the sand leaning backwards. He breathed the fresh air that arose from the water body. He wondered where Cordelia and Mr. Logan were now. He remembered that Alexius had the ability to sort for information.
“Alexius, I remember you had that ability to go scouting for information. Can you help me locate Cordelia and Mr. Logan?”
He heard the silent and tasted the disappointment already. Somehow he knew what Alexius was going to say like he could feel his emotions.
“I’m sorry but I don’t have that ability now. I’m now in the state of the subconscious, your subconscious. I am now your invisible guardian. I cant even do magic but surely this is the best way I can serve you now. I’m really sorry I cant provide that option now.”
George didn’know whether to be happy or sad. For one he had now an inner source of direction but then he had no means of knowing what had happened to the two people he had come to know as family.
Just then he heard a scream from the direction his two rescuers had taken. He sprung up and ran towards their direction.

siralabai:
Yes, it would be better if you download more language modules, that gives the app more words to recognise as you're writing a magic story, you may need to use words across platforms most especially Espana, Portuguese, Deutsch and others. It really helps and you learn new words from the suggestion list.

That's wisdom. I will download them. Are you a writer as well?

Mrlemuel:
Try Writing Ur Updates In A Pdf Or Doc Format, Then Read Through It B4 Updating, And When U Type A Word That Is Nt Found In The Swiftkey Dictionary, Pls Save Or Add It To The Dictionary, Make Sure It Have All Languages In It... i.e Language Modules... Am Sure If U Do Dat, You Will Have No Trouble While Typing Future Updates. #peace.

Thanks for the suggestions. I have the UK English language module downloaded. Are you talking of downloading others?

And I actually type is using word document app much like Microsoft word.

#MadeofMore

siralabai:
Which device are you using?
If its an Android device, try getting the Swiftkey app, it can tailor the words after the ones you use most and your social media word choices and it can also learn as you type.

Its even the Swiftkey what causing me the pains of double correcting.

I shall try, I shall try.

I've resolved to just using the native keypad that came with my device.

#MadeofMore

siralabai:
Which device are you using?
If its an Android device, try getting the Swiftkey app, it can tailor the words after the ones you use most and your social media word choices and it can also learn as you type.

Its even the Swiftkey what causing me the pains of double correcting.

I shall try, I shall try.

I've resolved to just using the native keypad that came with my device.

Thanks for the share Mhiz.