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@Ezeigbo1ofimo... thank you for your observation sir

Good pm y'all... didn't get to know of this forum until recently... I've been to the embassy three times all to no avail... kindly read my transcripts , your extensive critic and correction is highly welcomed. Thanks

First transcript

Vo: when did you finish high school ?
Me: 2013, July precisely
Vo: what have you been doing ?
Me: got a national diploma in science Laboratory Technology at yaba college of technology which I finished last December and I've been on industrial attachment.
Vo: how many schools did you choose?
Me: two schools... NE and FSU
Vo: how did you choose these schools ?
Me: (got off balance)... I applied online
Vo: we have a lot of schools in the us, how did you narrow down to these two schools ?
Me: I was antsy at this point and just said one gibberish....
Vo: you r ineligible ( angrily)

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2nd transcript
Vo: why are you here?
Me: ( with max confidence and cool eye contact)
I gained admission into a united state university and I'll be needing you to approve my visa to enable my going.
Vo: why are you going to the us ?
Me: I'm going to the United States to obtain my bachelors degree in Biotechnology at Northeastern university for a period of 52 months which starts ....
Vo: how many schools did you choose?
Me: two schools, NEU and FSU
Vo: how many admits ?
Me: both
Vo: why NE ?
Me: I chose NE because it's affordable for my parent.
Also because the university has a well structured curriculum in my field of study in that most of the courses I'll be taking ( I mentioned few) are research oriented. This will not only expose me to series of quality research but also make me proficient in the field
Furthermore, NE is highly reputable in my field of study and ranked 5th in Biotechnology
Vo: chuckles " all universities in the us have a well structure curriculum"
Vo: how much is ur tuition ?
Me: $12754
Vo: when did you start school ?
Me: which of the schools ?
Vo: elementary
Me: smiles surprisingly ( wasn't expecting the question ) that's a long time
Vo: is it in the 80s or 90s
Me: '96
Vo: who's ur sponsor ?
Me: my father, Professor Xyz
Vo: what does he do?
Me: he's a professor of Animal production and health management and also the Dean, college of animal science at xyz university , he also consults for the federal government on animal production in southwest Nigeria and he deals farm machineries
Vo: chuckles mockingly
Types for a while
Sorry, I can't approve ur visa.... bla bla bla

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Me: good morning ma ( speaking with max confidence and eloquence )
Vo: good morning, pass me your passport and I 20
Vo: where are you going in the us ?
Me: Boston Ms , Northeastern university precisely
Vo: I can see you will be studying... what will you be studying ?
Me: Biotechnology
Vo: why Biotechnology?
Me: Biotechnology has been my dream and passion right from when I was a kid because as a growing kid, I was opportune to travel to the southern part of Nig and I experienced the pitiable oil spillage condition of the region. This triggered my interested in Biotechnology. Studying Biotechnology will expose me to strong research and adequate knowledge required to proffer a solution to this uninteresting situation.
Vo: what's your highest level of education ?
Me: National diploma at Yaba college of technology
Vo: in Biotechnlogy ?
Me: no ma, science Laboratory Technology
Vo: okay... types for a while
How many schools did you choose ?
Me: two schools, Northeastern university and Florida state university
Vo: why did you choose NE over FSU?
Me: I chose NE over FSU because I'm interested in the ongoing research of professor William Hancock which is based on applying new analytical techniques to advance proteomics by developing an enzyme capable of degrading the chemical residue of petroleum production. I believe this research will greatly help me actualize my ultimate goal which is working together with research institutes to develop a solution to the oil spillage condition of the southern region of Nigeria.
Vo: who's paying for ur studies ?
Me: my father
Vo: what does he do?
Me: he's the Dean, College of Animal science at Xyz university, he also consults for the federal govt on animal production in southwest Nigeria, he's also into mechanized farming.
Vo: what's the size of his farm
Me: 2 ha
Vo: what does he do on the farm ?
Me: pardon me? ( she repeats)
Poultry, Piggery and Goat
Vo: types for a long time/ her system was hanging
I'm sorry this is taking long... pls hold on
Me: it's okay ma
Vo: what did you say he does on the farm ?
Me: poultry, piggery and Goat
Vo: types again.... pls hold on
Unfortunately your visa cannot be granted at this time
Me: what can you advice ma ?
Vo: kindly ensure there's a significant change in your application before coming back.

@ ril1adigun ... pls what are your prepared answers for not taking Toefl or GRe ?... my interview is also very close, pls I need your help