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Present bro Ride on we are behind u

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Onemansquad:
Present bro Ride on we are behind u

thanks bro

Trying to become a writer? You have a laudable ambition. However, you must mind the basics.

1. Do proper spacing - like between words and after commas and full stops.
2. Capitalise all proper nouns; ditto for I.
3. Mind your narration tense - you shouldn't be flipping between past and present, unless where it's a deliberate technique.
4. Mind your grammar.

Writeditor:
Trying to become a writer? You have a laudable ambition. However, you must mind the basics.

1. Do proper spacing - like between words and after commas and full stops.
2. Capitalise all proper nouns; ditto for I.
3. Mind your narration tense - you shouldn't be flipping between past and present, unless where it's a deliberate technique.
4. Mind your grammar.

thanks a million ill try to take note of this

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Hmm...another romantic thrilla.

Come Bluestarry, I hope I'm not the one who inspired you, huh, huh...?

Ha ha ha...

I'm subscribing full time! Let's see where you take this...so you better make it look good, okay?

PS: Like someone already pointed out, take note of your punctuation, paragraphs and spacing. Trust me, it can make or mar your story.

Congrats.

Yes o bluestary abg no disappoint u knw say we dy ur bak
Ride on bro #Following
anybody wey fukup ah bounce am comot 4 dis thread oo so no noise

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#i'm here, onemansquad will u kindly accompany me to the VIP, and I want my as usual by my side too..... Nice work bluestarry

#i'm here, onemansquad will u kindly accompany me to the VIP, and I want my as usual by my side too..... Nice work bluestarry! Btw where is smallpenis

Fatalveli:
#i'm here, onemansquad will u kindly accompany me to the VIP, and I want my as usual by my side too..... Nice work bluestarry! Btw where is smallpenis

thanks fatalveli

Fatalveli:
#i'm here, onemansquad will u kindly accompany me to the VIP, and I want my as usual by my side too..... Nice work bluestarry! Btw where is smallpenis

smallpenis is in my custody

Here i come!

Update coming up

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nice work but bro try and make it longer.
Am still followinq

Bro 9c update bt u go try 2 make d updates longa dan dis

stuff46:
nice work but bro try and make it longer.
Am still followinq

k bro. Ill try my best. U r welcome

Onemansquad:
Bro 9c update bt u go try 2 make d updates longa dan dis

k oga il try. Am using a mobile phone but ill still try to make it longa

Oga 2scorehigh i see you

Bluestarry:
k oga il try. Am using a mobile phone but ill still try to make it longa

i blv u bro mor grease 2 ur elbow

Onemansquad:
i blv u bro mor grease 2 ur elbow

k thanks

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